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Review #2 [FictionOnlyReaders' Author Review] At the time of this post, this review is the 269th review of this story. (200+Nice!) Current Story stats: Regular chapters: 125 || Aux chapters: 1 Collections: 11.55K || Views: 3.47M || Average Word Count: 3.36K || Rating: 4.84 Stars My rating: 5 STARS || Reason: Because I like my story, that's it. My review was too long and wasn't being accepted, so I have broken it down and put it in comments. Please go down to see the rest. Just like always, Review, comment, add to the library and share this fic. Thx. Regards, FictionOnlyReader (LET'S GO!)

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3yr
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Daoiste9akLu

Al inicio me encanto este fan fic, fue uno de los primeros que leí en esta plataforma y me encanto. No le doy 5 estrellas ya que el arco de las bóvedas malditas no me gustaron mucho y se hacia un poco aburrido. El final fue un poco seco, pero cumplió con una "B". Se espera los extras :)))

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BlyatxBlyat

Overall, it's a good Harry Potter fanfic with a distinct character and some interesting additions to the HP world. The romance is the weakest point and is quite jarring as it really makes the story worse overall, its not that well written and the harem is forced. If the interactions between characters are taken in isolation, then this is a very good story with many interesting differences from cannon that make this story alive. If you like Harry Potter fanfic, this is a great one to read. Just be prepared for the slightly subpar harem/romance as it really is out of place in this story.

19d
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Copinsa
LV 15 Badge

Best harry potter fanfic.............👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️

24d
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_JoshTheTitan_

honesty my expectations where high but even a few chapters in i already caught my self skipping paragraphs the thing that made me drop this is his the issue with wands the same old conspiracy that makes no sense for me early on with dumbledor and the low iq of the mc overall its not entertaining to read for me many things feel jsut wrong in this novel

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1mth
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Rajendra_Prasad_3537

Awesome story and a great intriguingly play

1mth
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Raymond_Hall

best harry potter fanfic I have read. .

1mth
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Rajendra_Prasad_3537

Awesome story plot with details and details matters

1mth
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Ajay_raj

Review 1 Thank you so much author for finishing the story, there is no doubt that I had a lot of ups and downs while reading this novel but overall I am happy I did it cause that's how much I was invested in it. I can't believe it's your first novel, the quality of writing is really good. All the best for your future endeavours!

2mth
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NovelNomad

Honestly, I really enjoyed this book. It slowed down a little in places, but overall, I really enjoyed it. Solid read, would recommend. 👍👍

3mth
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Deuteragonista

Definitivamente hace honor al título, es un viaje mágico. Espero que los epílogos puedan dar claridad a los pocos misterios que quedaron sin responder, además de dar un segundo vistazo al futuro del MC. Gracias por dar vida a esta obra.

4mth
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Enormiity

[1] I read this story when it was new but stopped because of a really bad story arc. Now, years later, I decided to reread it, which turned out to be a mistake. [2] TL;DR: The story starts off near-perfect but gradually turns to trash over time. [i] The first five volumes (Prologue - Quinn's 5th year) were a 10/10. The story was engaging, and even the filler content made sense within the context of the plot. It was genuinely enjoyable to read. [ii] However, things started to go downhill in Year 6 (6/10). While there were some great moments, the Umbridge arc didn’t make any sense. In canon, it worked because the "Light side" was a mess, but that wasn't the case in this story. [iii] Year 7 was an absolute disaster (0/10). The plot felt like a forced, never-ending progression that made me feel as if it was written by a completely different person. [iv] As for the post-Hogwarts content, I didn’t even bother reading it. I was so disappointed by the direction Year 7 took that I stopped reading altogether.

4mth
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RICARDO_PISCOYA

HP: A Magical Journey HP: Un viaje mágico Realmente esperaba los epílogos para ver lo que el futuro libre le trajo a Quinn, excelente novela que seguramente extrañaré esperando nuevos capítulos. [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]

4mth
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Sonndo

Well it starts so great and I even think the first sin vault was okayish, but going back to it and ruining the romance by making it a harem makes this a tough read after chapter 300 and the fact it's not even the MC in control and him just going alright harmed time ia beyond infuriating. So yeah not worth it in my opinion.

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4mth
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Fish_gazer112

meh.. it was alright a read i would say, author not tagging harem, some parts being forced. personally i hate harems i immediately dropped when i found out.

4mth
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ckwendel

4 star review. 4 star review. 4 star review.

5mth
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wndringMnchld

I really liked the book until the 2nd Sin vault (Greed) arc. So I'll just say the ending has Harem if you don't like it drop this as i did

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5mth
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Uiop_god_0418

I read the whole thing on my other account it is amazing, I can recommend this to anyone who wants to read a hp oc ff, or if you aren’t, it’s great.

6mth
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The_Jeffinator

You have continuity issues. about halfway through you started forgetting stand alone details that you had established just a dozen chapters before hand as well as some verbatim repeating paragraphs and a few 3 paragraph sections that looked copy pasted almost word for word from other works I remember. Just to be clear, I am not accusing you of plagiarism, just that certain short sections were concise in such a specific undeveloped way that I've seen it a dozen times. Otherwise, a well written compelling story I just need to take a break from from time to time to avoid minor annoyances from discrepancies building up too much.

6mth
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HaremHater

Honestly this fanfic is so very good. There is just a few problems with it. One of the story arcs in chapter 100-150 i think it was not done well and the author even after the readers bad reaction to this MADE it a huge deal in chapters 350-to the end. Disappointing and the authors decision in tje end to make it a harem between two girls is so idiotic but it wasnt his fault i think the fans actually voted for it on his patreon and he executed it poorly. It felt as if cucking them both at the same time and the Mc not really sure at one scene he loves this girl more and the other he loves this girl more. Anyways the romance at the end was a let down and the arc that im talking about was not good to me other than that MASTERPIECE.

6mth
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Imon_Hunt

A great HP fanfic. Definitely Recommended.

7mth
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Thomsonandrew5235

I loved it there were some errors like wrong names or stuff but i understood what you meant so it was ok 👍

7mth
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Emu_Lator

Decent even entertaining until you reach the nerf. Not readable beyond chapter 70 in my opinion.. beyond frustrating and disappointing. Would have loved more but the nerf kills all interest

7mth
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gep_gep

its good. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

7mth
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TBJ5K
LV 14 Badge

Top 3 hp fanfics. Also it's completed, involves vaults (if you don't know they a good concept), and also incorporates real knowledge of hp books not a fast paced fic, and decently paced power growth. Not villain mc, more grey-good. Best legilemency/occulemency development. Loveable and smart characters. Biggest W is that MC is not a R3T*RD.

7mth
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Benjamin_Wechsler

For all the people considering dropping this story because of Quinn's decision to not use a wand I would strongly recommend that you don't. The lack of an actual wand has very little affect on the story as a whole and as a person who has read multiple different HP fanfics the story probably would have played out exactly as it did if Quinn used an actual wand. Additionally because Quinn uses a fake wand and the author rarely bringing up that the wand isn't real it is extremely easy to forget this fact and if you read through the story you probably will forget the wand is fake relatively early in Quinn's years at Hogwarts. Finally if I still haven't convinced you that lack of a real wand doesn't affect the story I strongly urge you to read up until at least Quinn's 2nd or 3rd year before dropping the story. I gave the story 4.8 out of 5 because the translation sometimes has grammatical mistakes but they are rare enough to not really affect the reading experience.

7mth
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TheLastSpider

This book is amazing I started reading it years ago but just only finished it now.

7mth
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ForeVver

Uma ótima história de harry potter, mundo bem construído e personagens bem desenvolvidos, MC poderoso mas não overporwer boa dinâmica com os personagens, mistérios incríveis que faz você pensar.

8mth
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Fenrir_9971

One of the most breathtaking fanfiction I read

8mth
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Diizzy

The story is amazing while yes the story can and is slow at times it will amaze anyone who's going to read it. Character development is done very well albeit a bit too prolonged for me, the same can be said about the world as the story is not centered around the main storyline that we know from movies or books.

9mth
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Pranay_495

mc loses all his memories after transmigration so rather than reincarnation novel it is about a boy with mental disorder who thinks he is not in his body and knows about Harry Potter novel plot

9mth
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FictionOnlyReader

Review #2 [FictionOnlyReaders' Author Review] At the time of this post, this review is the 269th review of this story. (200+Nice!) Current Story stats: Regular chapters: 125 || Aux chapters: 1 Collections: 11.55K || Views: 3.47M || Average Word Count: 3.36K || Rating: 4.84 Stars My rating: 5 STARS || Reason: Because I like my story, that's it. My review was too long and wasn't being accepted, so I have broken it down and put it in comments. Please go down to see the rest. Just like always, Review, comment, add to the library and share this fic. Thx. Regards, FictionOnlyReader (LET'S GO!)

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3yr
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Daoiste9akLu

Al inicio me encanto este fan fic, fue uno de los primeros que leí en esta plataforma y me encanto. No le doy 5 estrellas ya que el arco de las bóvedas malditas no me gustaron mucho y se hacia un poco aburrido. El final fue un poco seco, pero cumplió con una "B". Se espera los extras :)))

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6d
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BlyatxBlyat

Overall, it's a good Harry Potter fanfic with a distinct character and some interesting additions to the HP world. The romance is the weakest point and is quite jarring as it really makes the story worse overall, its not that well written and the harem is forced. If the interactions between characters are taken in isolation, then this is a very good story with many interesting differences from cannon that make this story alive. If you like Harry Potter fanfic, this is a great one to read. Just be prepared for the slightly subpar harem/romance as it really is out of place in this story.

19d
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Copinsa
LV 15 Badge

Best harry potter fanfic.............👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️

24d
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_JoshTheTitan_

honesty my expectations where high but even a few chapters in i already caught my self skipping paragraphs the thing that made me drop this is his the issue with wands the same old conspiracy that makes no sense for me early on with dumbledor and the low iq of the mc overall its not entertaining to read for me many things feel jsut wrong in this novel

Revelar spoiler
1mth
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Rajendra_Prasad_3537

Awesome story and a great intriguingly play

1mth
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Raymond_Hall

best harry potter fanfic I have read. .

1mth
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Rajendra_Prasad_3537

Awesome story plot with details and details matters

1mth
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Ajay_raj

Review 1 Thank you so much author for finishing the story, there is no doubt that I had a lot of ups and downs while reading this novel but overall I am happy I did it cause that's how much I was invested in it. I can't believe it's your first novel, the quality of writing is really good. All the best for your future endeavours!

2mth
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NovelNomad

Honestly, I really enjoyed this book. It slowed down a little in places, but overall, I really enjoyed it. Solid read, would recommend. 👍👍

3mth
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Deuteragonista

Definitivamente hace honor al título, es un viaje mágico. Espero que los epílogos puedan dar claridad a los pocos misterios que quedaron sin responder, además de dar un segundo vistazo al futuro del MC. Gracias por dar vida a esta obra.

4mth
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Enormiity

[1] I read this story when it was new but stopped because of a really bad story arc. Now, years later, I decided to reread it, which turned out to be a mistake. [2] TL;DR: The story starts off near-perfect but gradually turns to trash over time. [i] The first five volumes (Prologue - Quinn's 5th year) were a 10/10. The story was engaging, and even the filler content made sense within the context of the plot. It was genuinely enjoyable to read. [ii] However, things started to go downhill in Year 6 (6/10). While there were some great moments, the Umbridge arc didn’t make any sense. In canon, it worked because the "Light side" was a mess, but that wasn't the case in this story. [iii] Year 7 was an absolute disaster (0/10). The plot felt like a forced, never-ending progression that made me feel as if it was written by a completely different person. [iv] As for the post-Hogwarts content, I didn’t even bother reading it. I was so disappointed by the direction Year 7 took that I stopped reading altogether.

4mth
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RICARDO_PISCOYA

HP: A Magical Journey HP: Un viaje mágico Realmente esperaba los epílogos para ver lo que el futuro libre le trajo a Quinn, excelente novela que seguramente extrañaré esperando nuevos capítulos. [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]

4mth
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Sonndo

Well it starts so great and I even think the first sin vault was okayish, but going back to it and ruining the romance by making it a harem makes this a tough read after chapter 300 and the fact it's not even the MC in control and him just going alright harmed time ia beyond infuriating. So yeah not worth it in my opinion.

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4mth
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Fish_gazer112

meh.. it was alright a read i would say, author not tagging harem, some parts being forced. personally i hate harems i immediately dropped when i found out.

4mth
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ckwendel

4 star review. 4 star review. 4 star review.

5mth
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wndringMnchld

I really liked the book until the 2nd Sin vault (Greed) arc. So I'll just say the ending has Harem if you don't like it drop this as i did

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5mth
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Uiop_god_0418

I read the whole thing on my other account it is amazing, I can recommend this to anyone who wants to read a hp oc ff, or if you aren’t, it’s great.

6mth
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The_Jeffinator

You have continuity issues. about halfway through you started forgetting stand alone details that you had established just a dozen chapters before hand as well as some verbatim repeating paragraphs and a few 3 paragraph sections that looked copy pasted almost word for word from other works I remember. Just to be clear, I am not accusing you of plagiarism, just that certain short sections were concise in such a specific undeveloped way that I've seen it a dozen times. Otherwise, a well written compelling story I just need to take a break from from time to time to avoid minor annoyances from discrepancies building up too much.

6mth
Ver 0 respuestas
HaremHater

Honestly this fanfic is so very good. There is just a few problems with it. One of the story arcs in chapter 100-150 i think it was not done well and the author even after the readers bad reaction to this MADE it a huge deal in chapters 350-to the end. Disappointing and the authors decision in tje end to make it a harem between two girls is so idiotic but it wasnt his fault i think the fans actually voted for it on his patreon and he executed it poorly. It felt as if cucking them both at the same time and the Mc not really sure at one scene he loves this girl more and the other he loves this girl more. Anyways the romance at the end was a let down and the arc that im talking about was not good to me other than that MASTERPIECE.

6mth
Ver 0 respuestas
Imon_Hunt

A great HP fanfic. Definitely Recommended.

7mth
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Thomsonandrew5235

I loved it there were some errors like wrong names or stuff but i understood what you meant so it was ok 👍

7mth
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Emu_Lator

Decent even entertaining until you reach the nerf. Not readable beyond chapter 70 in my opinion.. beyond frustrating and disappointing. Would have loved more but the nerf kills all interest

7mth
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gep_gep

its good. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

7mth
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TBJ5K
LV 14 Badge

Top 3 hp fanfics. Also it's completed, involves vaults (if you don't know they a good concept), and also incorporates real knowledge of hp books not a fast paced fic, and decently paced power growth. Not villain mc, more grey-good. Best legilemency/occulemency development. Loveable and smart characters. Biggest W is that MC is not a R3T*RD.

7mth
Ver 0 respuestas
Benjamin_Wechsler

For all the people considering dropping this story because of Quinn's decision to not use a wand I would strongly recommend that you don't. The lack of an actual wand has very little affect on the story as a whole and as a person who has read multiple different HP fanfics the story probably would have played out exactly as it did if Quinn used an actual wand. Additionally because Quinn uses a fake wand and the author rarely bringing up that the wand isn't real it is extremely easy to forget this fact and if you read through the story you probably will forget the wand is fake relatively early in Quinn's years at Hogwarts. Finally if I still haven't convinced you that lack of a real wand doesn't affect the story I strongly urge you to read up until at least Quinn's 2nd or 3rd year before dropping the story. I gave the story 4.8 out of 5 because the translation sometimes has grammatical mistakes but they are rare enough to not really affect the reading experience.

7mth
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TheLastSpider

This book is amazing I started reading it years ago but just only finished it now.

7mth
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ForeVver

Uma ótima história de harry potter, mundo bem construído e personagens bem desenvolvidos, MC poderoso mas não overporwer boa dinâmica com os personagens, mistérios incríveis que faz você pensar.

8mth
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Fenrir_9971

One of the most breathtaking fanfiction I read

8mth
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Diizzy

The story is amazing while yes the story can and is slow at times it will amaze anyone who's going to read it. Character development is done very well albeit a bit too prolonged for me, the same can be said about the world as the story is not centered around the main storyline that we know from movies or books.

9mth
Ver 0 respuestas
Pranay_495

mc loses all his memories after transmigration so rather than reincarnation novel it is about a boy with mental disorder who thinks he is not in his body and knows about Harry Potter novel plot

9mth
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