Genshin Impact, Breezing Through Teyvat

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Lonely_Paradox

What can I say? Amazing could be the only word to describe this fan fic... There's so many things to point out that makes this a worthwhile read let me list a few of them... -An original MC with zero knowledge about the world itself. This is a rare find in fanfiction and I have no doubt this is a great decision. Since the interactions with MC and his learning of the world and it's norm is very enjoyable and with it we see characters get more fleshed out as MC learns more about them through interactions, gives it that realistic feeling that most fanfictions in this platform fail to display. -Dope powers. Yomite's powers are really interesting and adds new dimensions to the story. The Tempus of Particles is a very rarely seen powerup, since it's like Onoki's kekkei toutum in Naruto, a very underappreciated ability, it's really OP and can practically disintegrate anything it's locked on, Tempus of the Story and Tempus of the Heart aren't really explained as of yet but I can already see great potential in them so I like how this is going. -The world of Genshin. Honestly, I haven't played the game but I've researched it, and from their I've come to love this world and it's story, knowing gacha games I have no doubt this will take a depressing turn but I hope it would all wind up to a great ending and this fanfic would be able to uphold it if not surpass it, with the author who is backing it I have no doubt it has that surpassing potential. -The Characters and how they are portrayed. This is by far the greatest feature of the ff. The characters feel alive and complement their og counterpart perfectly. The dialogues, the interactions, their individual gestures, behaviors, body language, each itty bitty details are handled carefully to make them individualistic and have their own style. I can easily read a speech and tell which character it is describing, it's honestly astonishing, at this point, how the author has portrayed them. I love it and hope he can be consistent with it. Some things that may need some improvements... -The writing. For the most part it's phenomenal writing if compared to most fanfics on this platform. There's little to no mistakes bit there's always the occasional misspellings, also sometimes the words and sentences feels a bit jumbled, past and present sentences are mixed and a bit weird to see one paragraph be past and the other be present. Quite possibly it can be because I have not seen any writings of this style so the author maybe right and me wrong. what's definite is that, this in no way breaks or disrupts the reader experience so hurray to that. Well, that's all, hope this review helps you in gathering some readers aki and this review, although obviously biased, upholds what I genuinely feel about this fic.. Waiting for dem smuts, fluffs and the journey to relations you've promised us... Don't keep us waiting fam, hope this ff doesn't die like the old ones because of retards and I appeal to the WN to pls not ban him again, the man is old he can't take another shock like this.. Aki doesn't want a 4th time spare the guy plz....

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PinguGod_

So. Before reading this fanfic I should warn you. This fanfic contains actual words so be careful. Now onto the review. I lied.

LV 5

FeetGourmet

After so long, finally a Genshin impact fanfic, please don't drop.................................................................................

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WolfStar14

Really nice writing man keep it up! I loved the concept of his reincarnation, same for his powers, those are really original. *cough* I liked the encounter with the waifu too 👍

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Lucass

If you drop this ill wish your pillows are warm on both sides, everytime you go out itll rain, everytime you drink you choke And i will wish your phone will never be silent again

LV 5

Klazy_Labbit

Right ....never.played genshin so I went in raw for this one to sate my boredom. Even though it's a fanfic of a fandom I don't know about, the author did a good job of providing explanation as even the mc doesn't have pre knowledge. We explore the world through his eyes and see how he grows. Story pacing is decent with slow but proper progession. Characters are developed well and I don't need to rely on fandom knowledge to like them. Mc is a relatively normal guy and is not overpowered. He feels human which is something that can't be said for half the fics here. The love interest is not clear yet and it seems it will be a slow romance which is a good thing as fast romance usually ruins plot. Updates are alright I guess, I just read this in one sitting so I don't know. Worldbackground is done really well as even people who don't know genshin can enjoy the fic. Overall a rare top tier fic that doesn't need to stay in the rankings to stay relevant. I want to play genshin but my core2duo pc is s hit.

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AbysallNight

A good read and a good writer. Overall its an amazing book, the interactions are great, amazing characters - Looking foward to Ganyu & Lumi joining the harem amd in the interactions, its nice and dun to read. My negative points are Yomite the mc, he needs to organise himself, I understand the want to enjoy himself but he has minimal if none at all in terms of power to protect or claim what he wants and his girls. He also seems to not know how to set order, he allows those around him to do as they wish going against what he wishes to do and his weak will in following through and things he says to show respect for those he cares. He also seems pretty self-absorbed. Not throwing shade at the writer its engaging, it's just the Mc who is the centre point goes from being bearable to being dislike-able, he doesn't use his abilities at all really or at least in a semi- intelligent way. Also there's he doesn't really read into the fact that the goddess who sent him obviously has some dodgy motives in addition to the fact that she's obviously significantly stronger than everyone on the Plane he is. Sorry for the rant I wanted to make a genuine review but is what it is. I hope all is well and the book isn't dropped.

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Not_ayin

I shall give you five stars since the cover is hu tao you have my respects tho if hu tao is not main waifu then expect my respect to decrease for you author...

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OP_FAN

I wanna see some massacre or something and i didn't get that but instead this is Diamond not gold but diamond no scratch that it's a planet made of diamonds! It's so good that i could only die in peace till it's done. Hopefully it will finish and i could read it all... Review: Writing is top notch and it's very rare to see some grammar or spelling mistakes. The author has full knowledge of the lore,which is quite rare. I absolutely love the MC. (I'm not ghe tho) Updates is good. Story is progressing at the right pace. Late romance was absolutely worth it. It's great! Can we also get Noelle? And some other ones? 👉👈🥺

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Fantastic_Spirit

Genshin Impact novels are great. So few of them. Genshin has Waifus, so yay R18. FillerCauseWebnovelsHas140CharacterLimitFillerCauseWebnovelsHas140CharacterLimit

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Lightazen

So far it is going pretty good. This is probably the first Genshin Impact fanfiction that I've read in this platform. Since they are very rare and I like the game very much my review might be a bit biased. Anyways, the flow of the story is decent imo as it normally follows the canon. Very few grammar mistakes from what I've seen. And MC doesn't seem very OP which is good imo, not being overpowered af gives a chance for conflicts and plotlines to arise, though his power has a very high potential to being OP. All in all, this is a very nice story and I am hoping for more in the future. Best of luck to the author.

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Stannis

I like how you describe the characters and bring realism to the world. Also the fact that the mc is not the strongest at the beginning. And hu tao best waifu

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Khaz_

This novel had a very good start. The MC did not start super OP from the begging and had to grow, relationships with characters also take their time and romance is relatively slow for this type of story. I also like the fact that MC has no idea what Genshin Impact is so even if you did not play the game you wouldn't be losing much. My main problem with the story is the fact that it's a harem. From how the story is written and how MC interacts with characters you can see that he has very good chemistry with Hu Tao and she is his 1st girl in this life, but the harem keeps getting bigger and bigger (not officially but MC has plans to add them to his harem) and you can see that every girl other than Hu Tao does not have this chemistry with MC. I'm not against harem in general but this one is getting a bit out of hand in size. It would have been much better if either Hu Tao was the only love interest and maybe have some other pairing in the party or only have a harem as big as a party, so only 3 girls. It would be much easier to manage and there would be more screen times for the party members. But once again it's really hard to beat Hu Tao as she is a person that made MC feel love for the first time and every other girl pales in comparison to their relationship. Shame it has become a bit of catch them all, as I was really enjoying the story.

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MinxMean

I was skeptical at first when I saw a genshin fanfic since it hasn't been a year since the game was out, but my mind was completely at rest when I started reading. Overall, great fanfic. I can't wait till the MC met up with our famous broke archon given how his appearance somehow 90% close to that archon.

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4DXOZ_VE

please make nameless archer in GENSHIN impact

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spectra_phantom

It's fun to read, the characters are detailed and lively, the story is exciting, the relationship between the characters progresses at a realistic pace, no character is perfect, each character has their own problems, motivations and dreams, character development is good, the personality of the character is quite colorful. side characters are good at revealing their existence and differences. I read it 2 times and enjoyed it a lot. thank you for this fanfic

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RNGesus_reloaded

amazing ... simply amazing .... makes the world feel more alive than going down a fixed plot ...... good world building.... good storyline.... awesome 18+ scenes... just waiting for mc to capture the heart of our dear traveller...

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ManWhoRead_79

Keep up the good work author 💪. I really enjoy your work ................................................. ..................................

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SWAMIG

Amazing story, characters act just how they do ingame, also good luck to all players on their wishes, im posting this as of zhongli and ganyu banner, i got this massive dub.

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HotNChill

It started slow, but after a few chapters it became pretty great. The characters the setting and the way the story is arranged it all just add ups together very well. GOOD JOB AUTHOR KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. If you know what I mean