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I'm upto 69 and I'm loving it so far, I hope the author will continue to give it his all with the rest od the novel. Thx. .
I'll be honest this is one of those that you don't actually expect to be as good as it is, then again most of the novels I've read covering this genre are I reincarnated and went back 10 years, or the system is plot armor handholding this thus far isn't either of those which is quite refreshing and thank God the characters have depth. I'm looking at you, legendary mechanic, now that's out of the way it's a slow pace read that's detailed has a nice mix of apocalypse(I think nuclear or bio/chemical) throw in super powers. the best I can think of is mad max meets monster hunter yes I realize how weirdo that is but that's the vibe and it's an incredibly addictive read. I look forward to seeing where you take this hidden gem
it says 164 chpts but can only get to like 138. hasnt updated in like a month but has more chapters already writen and locked? please free them for us to enjoy!!
This is good. There are no major grammatical errors to speak of. And everything makes more sense compared to other novels of this genre. I could only wish for the author to write the AI's birth more detailed and sensible. Aside from that, everything else is smooth so far.
i have to say i loved your story at the beginning and i still find it amazing but i couldnt continue past chapter 56. for me jason's attitude towards dani's father is horrible. until that moment in history it is already possible to see that he is in love with her, and even so he does not save her father (which by the way is very strong and could be an incredible support point, even without him knowing that he was part of the guardians). even though jason could have done it differently, i understand his author's line of reasoning, but for me it took away some of my desire to keep reading. Maybe one day I'll come back to read it, I loved your story so far :) (this is all just my point of view, continue with the amazing work author-kun)
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Awesome novel. Your stories are always unique. On a different note, please update pantheon online please update pantheon online please update pantheon online
great synopsis must be followed by captivating story. Honestly I just read the first chapter after reading the synopsis, I not completely sure yet but it held great potential I hope the other chapters won't drag this evaluation down.
Great work! the world 🌍 the first uwowy to the teacher in the first super bowl in the test for a second time at the end of the season with princess
Since I have reached chap 97 I think it is time to give this a lengthy review. First I'll do it according to webnovel and then I shall rant. DO NOT read the rant if you don't want spoilers. WRITING QUALITY I really have no criticism here. The grammar is good, the story is fluid. Dialogues are put well and you can easily follow who says what. Overall, a pleasant surprise here. STORY DEVELOPMENT Very nice honestly. The world is alive and functions without the protagonist. There is an element of mystery surrounding the plot which enhances the stakes and makes progression all the more enjoyable. I do have a few things here that I dislike but that will come in the rant part. CHARACTER DESIGN The characters are alive! They actually think and aren't just your cardboard cutouts of stereotypes. The MC shows his intelligence and doesn't just pull it out of nowhere like many other "genius" protagonists. The side cast could do with a bit more work but nothing major. WORLD BACKGROUND I've already said that the world is alive. There is an actual economy in the background. There are shops and vendors and whatnot, not just your typical black market auctions. The apocalypse is also relevant in the way people of this novel think and act. The world is consistent. RANTING I hate when tech type MCs don't explore their creative abilities beyond just making armoured suits and weapons. I want an MC that will make a car/plane/ship or any other vehicle. There is more to machines than just mechs and such. He made a powered armour that can run for more than an hour and also take a beating, but his knowledge and tools are still extremely rudimentary? How is he not making just your general appliances, eg a fridge would probably be a revolution. Running water has also been identified as a problem, why not solve that? Making a buggy to explore the ruins of the old world would probably also be a pretty high-priority goal. Speaking of vehicles, there is a critical lack of them in here. The logistics of the Lord's territory puzzle me. How are materials transported between cities? Is it only Rust doing the transport? If so why has there been no mention of the transport mess that was certainly happening during the tournament? Are there other ways of transport? Trains or zeppelins? Are there are no zeppelins because of idk birds, why not mention that? I hope the world expands because it really holds a lot of potential.
I really enjoy this book. Every day I have to wait for a new episode pains me inside. The development of the main character is great and the powering system is very interesting. I recommend this book
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as far as stories go, this one is one of the better ones. very few typos and even fewer plotholes, it is one of those stories that you want to cuddle up under a blanket with and plough through it all in one sitting.
Why are all the updates being released as privileged after chapter 69? Atleast release 1-2 chapters daily for those who are unprivileged. Or give a note for when you will update chapters for common users
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This book is full of junk. There is such an unfathomable amount of junk in this novel, that the author somehow managed to create an entire world out of it. Amazing.
the book is a slow start so far I'm 18 chapter in and I'm enjoying it and hope it gets better and better. the main character seems interesting and some of the support character do also . so I'm hoping for some action soon
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well put together so far good story and world setting is interesting, though I'm not a fan of AI so probably won't read anymore worthwhile to give it a try
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Slow start, but I feel it works better for the detailing of the world, as well as building the characters so far. I've always liked novels involving crafting or building based abilites, so this is perfect!
Hey guys, it's the author here with a shameless review. Anyway, a brief warning. The early chapters are a slow burn to lay a solid foundation for the story, characters and other things. You'll understand why before you hit chapter 10. This is a long term project of mine that will be around for a long time to come. I hope you enjoy the story, and I can't wait to interact with you all. Thanks for taking the time to read this novel of mine. Stay safe.
it's so frustrating to read, I must leave a comment. This story takes slow burn to a new level... even I, who's an obsessive reader who must read every shitty story to the end, lost the interest by the fifth chapter. Good writing skill totally wasted on the slow story.
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Frankly, I am blown away. No large grammar errors. Decent job showing the characters future potential without a cheesy flash forward that others use. Smart idea used to limit the character and allow for proper growth.
I'm upto 69 and I'm loving it so far, I hope the author will continue to give it his all with the rest od the novel. Thx. .
I'll be honest this is one of those that you don't actually expect to be as good as it is, then again most of the novels I've read covering this genre are I reincarnated and went back 10 years, or the system is plot armor handholding this thus far isn't either of those which is quite refreshing and thank God the characters have depth. I'm looking at you, legendary mechanic, now that's out of the way it's a slow pace read that's detailed has a nice mix of apocalypse(I think nuclear or bio/chemical) throw in super powers. the best I can think of is mad max meets monster hunter yes I realize how weirdo that is but that's the vibe and it's an incredibly addictive read. I look forward to seeing where you take this hidden gem
it says 164 chpts but can only get to like 138. hasnt updated in like a month but has more chapters already writen and locked? please free them for us to enjoy!!
This is good. There are no major grammatical errors to speak of. And everything makes more sense compared to other novels of this genre. I could only wish for the author to write the AI's birth more detailed and sensible. Aside from that, everything else is smooth so far.
i have to say i loved your story at the beginning and i still find it amazing but i couldnt continue past chapter 56. for me jason's attitude towards dani's father is horrible. until that moment in history it is already possible to see that he is in love with her, and even so he does not save her father (which by the way is very strong and could be an incredible support point, even without him knowing that he was part of the guardians). even though jason could have done it differently, i understand his author's line of reasoning, but for me it took away some of my desire to keep reading. Maybe one day I'll come back to read it, I loved your story so far :) (this is all just my point of view, continue with the amazing work author-kun)
Revelar spoiler Is this drop? please continue hays. ..............................:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:..""."."."."."."."."
Awesome novel. Your stories are always unique. On a different note, please update pantheon online please update pantheon online please update pantheon online
great synopsis must be followed by captivating story. Honestly I just read the first chapter after reading the synopsis, I not completely sure yet but it held great potential I hope the other chapters won't drag this evaluation down.
Great work! the world 🌍 the first uwowy to the teacher in the first super bowl in the test for a second time at the end of the season with princess
Since I have reached chap 97 I think it is time to give this a lengthy review. First I'll do it according to webnovel and then I shall rant. DO NOT read the rant if you don't want spoilers. WRITING QUALITY I really have no criticism here. The grammar is good, the story is fluid. Dialogues are put well and you can easily follow who says what. Overall, a pleasant surprise here. STORY DEVELOPMENT Very nice honestly. The world is alive and functions without the protagonist. There is an element of mystery surrounding the plot which enhances the stakes and makes progression all the more enjoyable. I do have a few things here that I dislike but that will come in the rant part. CHARACTER DESIGN The characters are alive! They actually think and aren't just your cardboard cutouts of stereotypes. The MC shows his intelligence and doesn't just pull it out of nowhere like many other "genius" protagonists. The side cast could do with a bit more work but nothing major. WORLD BACKGROUND I've already said that the world is alive. There is an actual economy in the background. There are shops and vendors and whatnot, not just your typical black market auctions. The apocalypse is also relevant in the way people of this novel think and act. The world is consistent. RANTING I hate when tech type MCs don't explore their creative abilities beyond just making armoured suits and weapons. I want an MC that will make a car/plane/ship or any other vehicle. There is more to machines than just mechs and such. He made a powered armour that can run for more than an hour and also take a beating, but his knowledge and tools are still extremely rudimentary? How is he not making just your general appliances, eg a fridge would probably be a revolution. Running water has also been identified as a problem, why not solve that? Making a buggy to explore the ruins of the old world would probably also be a pretty high-priority goal. Speaking of vehicles, there is a critical lack of them in here. The logistics of the Lord's territory puzzle me. How are materials transported between cities? Is it only Rust doing the transport? If so why has there been no mention of the transport mess that was certainly happening during the tournament? Are there other ways of transport? Trains or zeppelins? Are there are no zeppelins because of idk birds, why not mention that? I hope the world expands because it really holds a lot of potential.
I really enjoy this book. Every day I have to wait for a new episode pains me inside. The development of the main character is great and the powering system is very interesting. I recommend this book
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as far as stories go, this one is one of the better ones. very few typos and even fewer plotholes, it is one of those stories that you want to cuddle up under a blanket with and plough through it all in one sitting.
Why are all the updates being released as privileged after chapter 69? Atleast release 1-2 chapters daily for those who are unprivileged. Or give a note for when you will update chapters for common users
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Revelar spoiler This book is full of junk. There is such an unfathomable amount of junk in this novel, that the author somehow managed to create an entire world out of it. Amazing.
the book is a slow start so far I'm 18 chapter in and I'm enjoying it and hope it gets better and better. the main character seems interesting and some of the support character do also . so I'm hoping for some action soon
Revelar spoiler Civilization or is it civilisation? Vsauce here.. Sjchjsixhjsijxjdjdkdkxkdkdkkdkdkdkdkdkkdkdkdkdkdk(&jdjkdkdjdjdkdjdjdkfjdjkcndnkcjfn
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well put together so far good story and world setting is interesting, though I'm not a fan of AI so probably won't read anymore worthwhile to give it a try
Revelar spoiler Slow start, but I feel it works better for the detailing of the world, as well as building the characters so far. I've always liked novels involving crafting or building based abilites, so this is perfect!
Hey guys, it's the author here with a shameless review. Anyway, a brief warning. The early chapters are a slow burn to lay a solid foundation for the story, characters and other things. You'll understand why before you hit chapter 10. This is a long term project of mine that will be around for a long time to come. I hope you enjoy the story, and I can't wait to interact with you all. Thanks for taking the time to read this novel of mine. Stay safe.
it's so frustrating to read, I must leave a comment. This story takes slow burn to a new level... even I, who's an obsessive reader who must read every shitty story to the end, lost the interest by the fifth chapter. Good writing skill totally wasted on the slow story.
DISGUSTING________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________BUT I LOVE YOUR BOOK
Frankly, I am blown away. No large grammar errors. Decent job showing the characters future potential without a cheesy flash forward that others use. Smart idea used to limit the character and allow for proper growth.