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Escribe una reseñaToo bad that this fanfic is fast paced. It could have been a Diamond but I STILL LOVE IT ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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don't know why the rating is so low (3.9), it's not a 5 star story, but it's not a 3.9 star, I'll give it 5 stars to raise the rating, but I'd give 4.2
Well I definitely love the story I really needed to read crossover like this!! <( ̄︶ ̄)>ᕙ(@°▽°@)ᕗ......................... ..................................................................
I don't understand why people even write these types of novels,where mc is just main characters butches.Pathetic and quite frankly I find it repulsive and vile.🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️
this story is too fast paced. if you took lets say 40-50 chapters for the harry potter arc and then moved on, it would be fine, but come on less than 10 not so long chapters? what you have created is a detailed summary of a real length story. its just not especially enjoyable to read.
Never Give Up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I like the story so far, the thing is in 9 chapters you basically time skipped over 10 years I hope you wont be doing that for the other arcs.
Really liked the story. interesting. More please. Really liked the story. interesting. More please.Really liked the story. interesting. More please.
good story............................... ...............,.,.............,...............,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,., ,.,.,.,.,.,..,,.,.
I just don't like the story Bcbcbxbcbcbcbbcnxnxnxnznxnbxbdnxndndndndbdndbfbcncbfbcbcbfncnxnxnxnxncncncncnncncncncncncncncncncncncncncncncnfnfjfjfjfjfjfjdjdjfjfjfjjd
The story for me is neither rum nor good and just a story ok ,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,., ,.,.,.,..,...,.,.,.,,..., , , , , , , , , , , , ,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
GIVEE MEEEE MOOREEEE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHJHHJHJHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHJJJJJ JUST GIVE ME MORE CHAPTERS IM LOVING IT DESPITE ALL THE ERRORS FOUND I JUST CANT STOPPP( CAN’T STOP ME CAN’T STOP ME AYAYAYAY)
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Too bad that this fanfic is fast paced. It could have been a Diamond but I STILL LOVE IT ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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don't know why the rating is so low (3.9), it's not a 5 star story, but it's not a 3.9 star, I'll give it 5 stars to raise the rating, but I'd give 4.2
Well I definitely love the story I really needed to read crossover like this!! <( ̄︶ ̄)>ᕙ(@°▽°@)ᕗ......................... ..................................................................
I don't understand why people even write these types of novels,where mc is just main characters butches.Pathetic and quite frankly I find it repulsive and vile.🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️
this story is too fast paced. if you took lets say 40-50 chapters for the harry potter arc and then moved on, it would be fine, but come on less than 10 not so long chapters? what you have created is a detailed summary of a real length story. its just not especially enjoyable to read.
Never Give Up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I like the story so far, the thing is in 9 chapters you basically time skipped over 10 years I hope you wont be doing that for the other arcs.
Really liked the story. interesting. More please. Really liked the story. interesting. More please.Really liked the story. interesting. More please.
good story............................... ...............,.,.............,...............,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,., ,.,.,.,.,.,..,,.,.
I just don't like the story Bcbcbxbcbcbcbbcnxnxnxnznxnbxbdnxndndndndbdndbfbcncbfbcbcbfncnxnxnxnxncncncncnncncncncncncncncncncncncncncncncnfnfjfjfjfjfjfjdjdjfjfjfjjd
The story for me is neither rum nor good and just a story ok ,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,., ,.,.,.,..,...,.,.,.,,..., , , , , , , , , , , , ,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
GIVEE MEEEE MOOREEEE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHJHHJHJHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHJJJJJ JUST GIVE ME MORE CHAPTERS IM LOVING IT DESPITE ALL THE ERRORS FOUND I JUST CANT STOPPP( CAN’T STOP ME CAN’T STOP ME AYAYAYAY)
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