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I tried to get into the story but sadly the plot just felt like it was everywhere there also the fact that the character dont feel like characters they feel more like going from point a to b then there the main character try as I might I just cant love him he a all over the place I hope some other people like this but this just isnt the story for me
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Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
it us hard to understand it ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
to many typo and always wrong using the th verb abou he and she or him and her and wrong place for text ......................................
I like the novel but i really am not a fan of adding other reincarnators to novels to create drama and danger for the MC. In my opinion, the Naruto world is dangerous enough and this isnt needed. I understand that you are trying to create something new which is appreciated, but I would rather read a Natuto stroy where other powers from anime and stuff are integrated into it vs a novel with a major story line about drama involving the god/gods that sent the MC to the world. I get it, i really do, but its just not for me. I have no interest in godly drama or an overarching plot about most probably some war of the gods or some divine duality issue. Its written well and the powers and card draws are cool, but for me after last chapter the wheels fell off. I wish you the best in this venture and hope that those who do enjoy the way the story is going continue to gove support.
Good Story Man!!!! I believeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee in you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pathetic author, did u just write this by getting bored cause I feel pretty bored while reading this novel. and how do u justify main character naivety is it u imagining in his place I think so. 😑
this is good and not do many problems in the fanfic but I would like to mention that the only great problem I find is the wrong use of his/her .
Its alright to have typos or bad grammar. However, this fanfic is unreadable. Quite literally I spent three-fourths of my time rereading and even then every 5th paragraph or so just made no sense whatsoever.
Why did teuchci die? Teuchci can't die İ hate You →_→ →_→→_→→_→→_→→_→ (っ˘̩╭╮˘̩)っ(っ˘̩╭╮˘̩)っ(っ˘̩╭╮˘̩)っ Teuchi (〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(╥﹏╥)(╥﹏╥)(╥﹏╥)(╥﹏╥)(╥﹏╥)(╥﹏╥)(╥﹏╥)
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The story is good just some it has some problems because it is a machine translation. Otherwise it is pretty good.
good story....but can barely understand what's going on when the author keeps changing from he to to she for one character....like why is it so hard to understand the difference from a man and woman...
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Bro, esta cool tu idea y se ve buena la historia por las reseñas que eh leído hasta ahora, pero porque no utilizas el método que muchos han utilizado cuando publican sus historias en español y en ingles que sería hacer una en español y otro en inglés, sera el mismo libro pero en diferentes idiomas, así sería más fácil ubicar la historia y también no seria un poco molesto como tener que saltarse un capítulo y escogerlo sólo por el idioma, es mas una preferencia personal que tengo pero es tu decisión, la historia esta buena a dicer verda
The sky lyrics the Weeknd after all the human genome sequencing the same time I was there to the house now to the house and I can get the kids to the park and walk
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No es uno de las mejores fan-fic hay muchos mejores, tampoco tiene la mejor ortografía, las actualización de los capítulos es un poco lenta pero cada capítulo es un poco largo creo yo (^_^)/ y mucho menos puede ser interesante para algunas personas pero es un trabajo honesto ('ε'*) hehehe. Solo puedo agradecer a todos los que lea mi historia ¡¡MUCHAS GRACIAS, me hace fantasía saber que hay gente leyendo mi propia novela enserio Arigato prro!! Como autor yo diría que tendría una calificación de 4/5 pero como los demás autores descarados me doy ánimo y me pongo 5 estrellas ◑.◑ .... ... .. . It is not one of the best fan-fictions there are many better ones, it does not have the best spelling either, the updating of the chapters is a bit slow but each chapter is a bit long I think (^ _ ^) / and much less can be interesting for some people but it's honest work ('ε' *) hehehe. I can only thank everyone who reads my story THANK YOU VERY MUCH, it makes me fantasy to know that people are reading my novel seriously Arigato dog!! As an author, I would say that it would have a rating of 4/5 but like the other cheeky authors, I cheer myself up and get 5 stars ◑.◑
You have a good way ahead but dont give up i know its hard to write but being yourself and keep writing is important... don't be impatient to upload and get the story out try keeping calm and take your time editing and rewriting your chapters... all the best i hope you don't give up... 🙂
I tried to get into the story but sadly the plot just felt like it was everywhere there also the fact that the character dont feel like characters they feel more like going from point a to b then there the main character try as I might I just cant love him he a all over the place I hope some other people like this but this just isnt the story for me
thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
it us hard to understand it ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
to many typo and always wrong using the th verb abou he and she or him and her and wrong place for text ......................................
I like the novel but i really am not a fan of adding other reincarnators to novels to create drama and danger for the MC. In my opinion, the Naruto world is dangerous enough and this isnt needed. I understand that you are trying to create something new which is appreciated, but I would rather read a Natuto stroy where other powers from anime and stuff are integrated into it vs a novel with a major story line about drama involving the god/gods that sent the MC to the world. I get it, i really do, but its just not for me. I have no interest in godly drama or an overarching plot about most probably some war of the gods or some divine duality issue. Its written well and the powers and card draws are cool, but for me after last chapter the wheels fell off. I wish you the best in this venture and hope that those who do enjoy the way the story is going continue to gove support.
Good Story Man!!!! I believeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee in you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pathetic author, did u just write this by getting bored cause I feel pretty bored while reading this novel. and how do u justify main character naivety is it u imagining in his place I think so. 😑
this is good and not do many problems in the fanfic but I would like to mention that the only great problem I find is the wrong use of his/her .
Its alright to have typos or bad grammar. However, this fanfic is unreadable. Quite literally I spent three-fourths of my time rereading and even then every 5th paragraph or so just made no sense whatsoever.
Why did teuchci die? Teuchci can't die İ hate You →_→ →_→→_→→_→→_→→_→ (っ˘̩╭╮˘̩)っ(っ˘̩╭╮˘̩)っ(っ˘̩╭╮˘̩)っ Teuchi (〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(╥﹏╥)(╥﹏╥)(╥﹏╥)(╥﹏╥)(╥﹏╥)(╥﹏╥)(╥﹏╥)
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Revelar spoiler The story is good just some it has some problems because it is a machine translation. Otherwise it is pretty good.
good story....but can barely understand what's going on when the author keeps changing from he to to she for one character....like why is it so hard to understand the difference from a man and woman...
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Bro, esta cool tu idea y se ve buena la historia por las reseñas que eh leído hasta ahora, pero porque no utilizas el método que muchos han utilizado cuando publican sus historias en español y en ingles que sería hacer una en español y otro en inglés, sera el mismo libro pero en diferentes idiomas, así sería más fácil ubicar la historia y también no seria un poco molesto como tener que saltarse un capítulo y escogerlo sólo por el idioma, es mas una preferencia personal que tengo pero es tu decisión, la historia esta buena a dicer verda
The sky lyrics the Weeknd after all the human genome sequencing the same time I was there to the house now to the house and I can get the kids to the park and walk
.........................................................................................................................................................................
No es uno de las mejores fan-fic hay muchos mejores, tampoco tiene la mejor ortografía, las actualización de los capítulos es un poco lenta pero cada capítulo es un poco largo creo yo (^_^)/ y mucho menos puede ser interesante para algunas personas pero es un trabajo honesto ('ε'*) hehehe. Solo puedo agradecer a todos los que lea mi historia ¡¡MUCHAS GRACIAS, me hace fantasía saber que hay gente leyendo mi propia novela enserio Arigato prro!! Como autor yo diría que tendría una calificación de 4/5 pero como los demás autores descarados me doy ánimo y me pongo 5 estrellas ◑.◑ .... ... .. . It is not one of the best fan-fictions there are many better ones, it does not have the best spelling either, the updating of the chapters is a bit slow but each chapter is a bit long I think (^ _ ^) / and much less can be interesting for some people but it's honest work ('ε' *) hehehe. I can only thank everyone who reads my story THANK YOU VERY MUCH, it makes me fantasy to know that people are reading my novel seriously Arigato dog!! As an author, I would say that it would have a rating of 4/5 but like the other cheeky authors, I cheer myself up and get 5 stars ◑.◑
You have a good way ahead but dont give up i know its hard to write but being yourself and keep writing is important... don't be impatient to upload and get the story out try keeping calm and take your time editing and rewriting your chapters... all the best i hope you don't give up... 🙂