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Going into this review after reading the first 10 chapters. I was immersed in the story since the first chapter. The characters, specially the young children were so adorable! We also get to see and feel the sweetness from the budding first love between Lizzy and her sapphire eyed Prince!😉 The story next becomes quite fast paced, that it keeps the readers wanting for more! Sis-author, faster updates please![img=update]
The story starts with little dumplings talking and getting know each other. the story development is slow but good .I've barely found any error so good for me, don't know about yours . A rebirth and military story, I like this genre. Also, it's an original book a must to give it a shoot. Keep going author. Don't drop it... my poor soul will be sad if you do ToT
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I AM REVIEW #10! Tragic love story? Check. Marriage? Check. Rebirth? Check. Yandere? Trivago. He likes her, she likes him... Now just kiss already! And maybe make lots of babies?
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Language is a bit choppy, but author picks up the correct vibe in time. Story is well formed, so are the characters. this is a pretty good read, that makes you anticipate the next chapter. Well done. Give it a try. Who knows, it just might be your cup of tea! After all, who doesn't like first love? keep going author
Well written book! KEEP up the great job! I’m so excited for chapter updates since I find Your book quite interesting! Hope you keep on writing!
To be honest, the synopsis is pretty catchy! I was longing to read a story full of dog food cause I was tired of action stuffs. I added the book in my library. you do too guys! 💚💚
The plot seems promising and hella interesting. Apart from the grammatical errors, I don't find anything unpleasant. This story is my cup of tea and I hope in the future it will play out to be well. Thumbs up to the author! Full support! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Great start, really enjoyed reading. MC is likeable and humorous. The world background is creative and imaginative. The flow of the story is great, keep up the great work author!
A well written book.. five stars because it deserves it. hooked me from the very first chapter. keep going author 💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘 💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓
The shameless Author is here! And being so, I will say that my story is good, I have several grammatical errors, I have worked is to diminish them as much as I can. But, I accept corrections. If you like what I write, enjoy it, and please don't stop reading. I will have more stories of different caliber very soon. This being my first book, I hope you like it. There are many things that can be left out when talking, but there are many more that can be put down on paper to read. Enjoy reading my first creation book as much as I enjoy writing it.
Going into this review after reading the first 10 chapters. I was immersed in the story since the first chapter. The characters, specially the young children were so adorable! We also get to see and feel the sweetness from the budding first love between Lizzy and her sapphire eyed Prince!😉 The story next becomes quite fast paced, that it keeps the readers wanting for more! Sis-author, faster updates please![img=update]
The story starts with little dumplings talking and getting know each other. the story development is slow but good .I've barely found any error so good for me, don't know about yours . A rebirth and military story, I like this genre. Also, it's an original book a must to give it a shoot. Keep going author. Don't drop it... my poor soul will be sad if you do ToT
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I AM REVIEW #10! Tragic love story? Check. Marriage? Check. Rebirth? Check. Yandere? Trivago. He likes her, she likes him... Now just kiss already! And maybe make lots of babies?
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Language is a bit choppy, but author picks up the correct vibe in time. Story is well formed, so are the characters. this is a pretty good read, that makes you anticipate the next chapter. Well done. Give it a try. Who knows, it just might be your cup of tea! After all, who doesn't like first love? keep going author
Well written book! KEEP up the great job! I’m so excited for chapter updates since I find Your book quite interesting! Hope you keep on writing!
To be honest, the synopsis is pretty catchy! I was longing to read a story full of dog food cause I was tired of action stuffs. I added the book in my library. you do too guys! 💚💚
The plot seems promising and hella interesting. Apart from the grammatical errors, I don't find anything unpleasant. This story is my cup of tea and I hope in the future it will play out to be well. Thumbs up to the author! Full support! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Great start, really enjoyed reading. MC is likeable and humorous. The world background is creative and imaginative. The flow of the story is great, keep up the great work author!
A well written book.. five stars because it deserves it. hooked me from the very first chapter. keep going author 💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘 💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓
The shameless Author is here! And being so, I will say that my story is good, I have several grammatical errors, I have worked is to diminish them as much as I can. But, I accept corrections. If you like what I write, enjoy it, and please don't stop reading. I will have more stories of different caliber very soon. This being my first book, I hope you like it. There are many things that can be left out when talking, but there are many more that can be put down on paper to read. Enjoy reading my first creation book as much as I enjoy writing it.