How I Became the Strongest Sovereign

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TofSpades

[New notification!] [Author has entered the chat] Just an author supporting his own work. This is my first novel and I have very little experience with writing, so expect there to be some errors. However, I'll do my best to make sure there aren't any. Please point them out if you see any. The MC has a system, however the whole novel isn't based around it. There are many plot twists and the MC is reasonably OP but isn't broken, he does have a love interest but the romance is only there for spice. This novel is really a mixture of everything so if that suits your taste, Give it a read! I plan to write a couple hundred chapters for this novel, so please vote the story with power stones to keep me going and motivated :) I do urge you to read a few chapters before dropping it; that would be very generous. If you have any queries or ideas about the book, we can discuss the book on discord, feel free to join. Link: https://discord.gg/umKXWBpzmy

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The_Mad_Titan

So i finished reading all chapters and i decided to review this again. This book is one of the best books I've read so far in this app. I highly recommend this to anyone looking for a fantasy, action, male lead story. This is close to perfection or rather perfection itself. The characters were so perfectly described, each having unique personalities that brought them together. When reading this book, it felt as if i was actually living through every single moment, the pain, the happiness, the anger, the friendship, the love, the humor, every single thing in this book is amazing. If this was published i would definitely buy it. In summary, The author did a really good job with this. I cant wait for more chapters😭😭😭

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Entrail_JI

This is a review after having read 34 chapters Writing quality : Not much is needed to be said here as it is on point with very little to no mistakes Stability of updates : Top notch Story development : Absolutely intriguing as I was absorbed into the novel promoting me to read over 30 chapters without pause. Character design : Not 2D as each character is unique and has their own personality. We also explore their POV with the author changing in-between point of views World background : Very thorough. You can tell when an author has done a good job in making a world background when you (the reader) can visualize what the author is trying to paint. Overall - Unquestionable 5 star so far

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mozza_mello

Waooo this is a great book indeed! :D The premise is an interesting one, that's for sure! I also like how it started off hehe! It feels fresh to meee :D The characters also felt real, and I really like their interactions with the MC lmaoo-- A lot of potential here for sure! :D Great work, authorr! <3

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Senpai_God

Don’t bother with this one, you follow zeref through all kinds of troubles and his mental struggles with his past and constant grind trying to improve and protect his friends. Little did we know our author is a lazy bum and decided to give out free powerups to every sibgle side character, Female lead was quite weak but suddently became a strong magical beast and with 0 struggle at all became just as strong as our main character over a night. Then we have his best friend Jace who apparently just becomes unconcious and suddntly his strength skyrockets and he becomes just as strong as mc. Like stop giving away free powerups when our boy zeref is struggling to stay alive every single chapter

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dmacrulz

I barely made it to chapter 10 before giving up on this novel. The english is written correctly and the world has a background that seems to have a lot of depth. I was thrilled to see the numerous positive reviews and was blown away by the first 2 chapters. The prologue promises a story of dark fantasy, engaging combat and mystery as the world’s background begins to unfold. Then the mc wakes up in the body of a newborn still maintaining all of their knowledge of magic and combat. This is my favorite genre of all time!!! So why did things go so wrong? When the mc was revealed to be a magical prodigy the author’s brain was devoured by parasitic worms. The author has absolutely no clue what children are. Even the concept of a child is something that evades them. I imagine that if the author was given a picture of an anime girl in her youth he wouldn’t be able to differentiate between a 14 year old, a 3 year old or a 35 year old mother of 5. I truly believe that anime has destroyed their ability to imagine realistic characters or to even use the internet to research even the simplest understandings of human development. The mc obviously doesn’t have to learn how to use a toilet but at 3 years old but a little girl roughly the same age speaks like a middle schooler with a tsundere personality type and has the combat experience of a martial arts prodigy herself. AT 4 TEARS OLD. She should barely know the name of 3 colors and a few numbers at this point. She should struggle holding up the number of fingers that corresponds to her age at this point. Barely be able to speak coherent sentences. And the author just can not help but start a romance arc between this literal toddler and a 28 year old monarch whose ”family” is under incredible danger due to his magical powers. The logic of the mc only applies to him and none of the other characters that should be growing at the same rate as any of their peers. The author never even bothered saying that magic training could be done early for nobles or that it forcefully speeds up their mental or physical development as a token. It is just treated as normal that the mc who by all means should not be able to use magic learns it on their own many years before they are supposed to and then all the sudden everyone else treats it like it is easy to do that and in fact he is weak for his age? Maybe I wouldn’t be so harsh if the story had no potential but it does. If the author spent less than 5 minutes looking up a video of children the age they imagined the characters being, I know for certain that the start of the story would be such a disaster in terms of logic. The first 50 chapters could probably be reworked entirely and become a really strong project by simply changing the age of the characters to something closer to what the author is familiar with. A total shame.

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JJL_BP

The cliffhanger is killing me!!!! 😤 I love the gore and definetly would recommend to anyone who likes action, fantasy ect. Please update!!!😫

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Crazy_Cronie_1

Wow! fantastic start of the novel.. Even though there are only few chapters this story still hooked me.. Would really really want more chaps of the novel

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_AiRen_

A great novel with a fine storyline and splendidly crafted characters, the authors capability is tested with how intricately he tailored the plotline, back ground and event following up. good work!

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AnimeTagz

Amazing... This was truly a fun read and I can't wait for more chapters. NC thought process are hilarious and the story progression is great. I couldn't think of many books to compare to his to because it just felt so fresh. Fantastic job author

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darlingnellyy

I love the intensity of the story and the build-up towards it all. It's very enjoyable and I love the character's personalities. The story is well written, so the author keeps up the great work.

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Khawla_Amini

This is wonderful, I'm totally in love with this book... The plot is interesting, the style of writing is more than unique, and I'm totally hooked by the characters... The book is already in my library, and I can't stop myself from being addicted [img=update]

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d_elfe

I had so much fun reading this story. It is complex, and well written, with lots of depth which gives so much room for a good plot. Beware, if you start reading this ,you won't want to stop !

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Mel_Aniv

This novel was well planned! Great ideas from the author that made me feel at awe. I will definitely read this and put it to my library. The ideas of monarchs ruling the lower realm made me think that it was an idea that was very hooking and made my interest to be captivated. I will leave more comments in the future! See yah!

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le_shounenboi

The story is well planned, the author knows what he is doing. A really interesting concept, it can definitely grow into a great story. All the best author added the book to my collection.

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Aniki1

For starters, your characters have a well thought out thought process. Plot is deep and interesting. Your writing can face a little improvement but it's near perfect. The life before him dying is certainly amusing and overall I'd say if you updated a little often, you'd easily gain more popularity. Great job and keep doing a good job.

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oyslyness

I was hooked in from the very first chapter and I can say I can't wait to read more. I like the way the pace of the plot is moving .this is def worth a read! Can't wait for more chaps!

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Mila_Alaia

A superb novel. Grt background description. Good Language. The storyline urges to keep reading. The magic is in the air 😉 Grt work author!! I'm rooting for u👍

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The_divine_oracle

I really loved the first-person perspective. The characters and the story development are also moving in a good direction. Setting the rules of the world before going in too deep makes it easy to relate to the events. Looking forwards to seeing how the story progresses forwards.

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uhjuihoijio

I'm excited about this story! I like how the writer builds the world and the characters up. The plot was easy to follow and read. It's really well written. definitely going to continue reading :D