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you should do a izuna uchiha reborn as sasukes twin brother that would be intresting to read also more more pls god moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Very good interaction between Naruto and the Hokage Jdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdndndnjdjdndndjndndndndndndjnnnnnjdjdjdjnnnnjjjdjjjjzjjjsjn
With my experiences in reading I can say that not worth reading. Author seems like those ppl who get their knowledge about animes from so called fact post or reels from Instagram. He kinda don't apply logic and reasoning in many things. Doesn't know about much about power system of Naruto and how some forms and abilities works ( that seems to look like from his writing). I read it to last chapter only to see if he can see his errors he created in story and yeah coz it's fanfic of Naruto.
the idea is great, but the implementation is lousy. the characters are not alive, they are cardboard. too fast and not interesting. and yet, just terrible interaction between the characters. ciao.
The MC is naruto who comes across the ghosts of the 1st, 2nd and 4th hokages. Naruto does not have the personality of naruto at all, He is ruthless even though he is being trained by the 1st and 4th hokages. Also i stopped reading up until the the chununexam finals solely because the author makes the mc go and train summoning jutsu and rasengan from jiraya for one month. Why? i have no idea and its quite stupid seeing how for 6 months he was being trained by 3 former hokages. One of whom was the god of ninjas, one who created 90% of all the forbidden jutsus and the final one who created the bloody rasengan. But author makes mc go and train with jiraya when he has all these guys availa
I'm not good at giving reviews so... 9/10 would recommend...................................................................................
There is nothing wrong with this I luv it ^^. Thx for writing Author-San!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So the gist of it is that this the same old naruto story from anime but with added commentary from the hokages also along with extra chakra nature of water But the same old weak NarutO To some extent even weaker than cannon 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎☹️
Nothing new here, same as hundreds of other naruto fanfics. Writing Quality-5/5 Stability of Updates-5/5 Story Development-1/5 Why? The story follows cannon with little to no changes, some fanfics can work this way if something new, entertaining is added to it, rn there are literally hundreds of stories like this, that's why I gave this 1/5. (I only read up to Chunin exams, cuz for me personally who read hundreds of fanfics of naruto is boring) Character Design-4/5 World Background-5/5
There's not that many good naruto fanfics. The main character is either an edge lord, evil or the story is just plain smut. So we really appreciate what your doing. So no matter what anybody says just know that there are still people that love your story.
I am a simple person. I see Naruto fan fiction with No Harem Tag auto 5 stars! I am a simple person. I see Naruto fan fiction with No Harem Tag auto 5 stars!
tbh, the story is really good but its just not my type of thing really, although im sticking with it just because of the fun interactions when the author posts fights
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It is good...but now that I look better at the Image for the novel... It's an recruitment poster propaganda Naruto 'Wants us to join the shinobi forces' "I want you! DATTEBAYO!!" says Naruto. But Tobirama slaps him on thr head. "God damn it Naruto!! I Want you...I WANT YOU TO FUCKIN CONCENTRATE ON THE EXERCISE,THERE ARE NO MORE GHOSTS AROUND JUST THE THREE OF US!"
Nice. Good Story. Good Job. Make A Right Choice. Ship Naruto with hinata. ..................................................................
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Very good........................................................................................................................................................................
Gosto muito de fics que o personagem se esforça pra ficar forte em vem de ficar dependente de sistemas o hacks por favor não pare ..........
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typical author review but I think it will turn out to be pretty good. if you have any questions about my story let me know.
you should do a izuna uchiha reborn as sasukes twin brother that would be intresting to read also more more pls god moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Very good interaction between Naruto and the Hokage Jdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdndndnjdjdndndjndndndndndndjnnnnnjdjdjdjnnnnjjjdjjjjzjjjsjn
With my experiences in reading I can say that not worth reading. Author seems like those ppl who get their knowledge about animes from so called fact post or reels from Instagram. He kinda don't apply logic and reasoning in many things. Doesn't know about much about power system of Naruto and how some forms and abilities works ( that seems to look like from his writing). I read it to last chapter only to see if he can see his errors he created in story and yeah coz it's fanfic of Naruto.
the idea is great, but the implementation is lousy. the characters are not alive, they are cardboard. too fast and not interesting. and yet, just terrible interaction between the characters. ciao.
The MC is naruto who comes across the ghosts of the 1st, 2nd and 4th hokages. Naruto does not have the personality of naruto at all, He is ruthless even though he is being trained by the 1st and 4th hokages. Also i stopped reading up until the the chununexam finals solely because the author makes the mc go and train summoning jutsu and rasengan from jiraya for one month. Why? i have no idea and its quite stupid seeing how for 6 months he was being trained by 3 former hokages. One of whom was the god of ninjas, one who created 90% of all the forbidden jutsus and the final one who created the bloody rasengan. But author makes mc go and train with jiraya when he has all these guys availa
I'm not good at giving reviews so... 9/10 would recommend...................................................................................
There is nothing wrong with this I luv it ^^. Thx for writing Author-San!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So the gist of it is that this the same old naruto story from anime but with added commentary from the hokages also along with extra chakra nature of water But the same old weak NarutO To some extent even weaker than cannon 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎☹️
Nothing new here, same as hundreds of other naruto fanfics. Writing Quality-5/5 Stability of Updates-5/5 Story Development-1/5 Why? The story follows cannon with little to no changes, some fanfics can work this way if something new, entertaining is added to it, rn there are literally hundreds of stories like this, that's why I gave this 1/5. (I only read up to Chunin exams, cuz for me personally who read hundreds of fanfics of naruto is boring) Character Design-4/5 World Background-5/5
There's not that many good naruto fanfics. The main character is either an edge lord, evil or the story is just plain smut. So we really appreciate what your doing. So no matter what anybody says just know that there are still people that love your story.
I am a simple person. I see Naruto fan fiction with No Harem Tag auto 5 stars! I am a simple person. I see Naruto fan fiction with No Harem Tag auto 5 stars!
tbh, the story is really good but its just not my type of thing really, although im sticking with it just because of the fun interactions when the author posts fights
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Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
It is good...but now that I look better at the Image for the novel... It's an recruitment poster propaganda Naruto 'Wants us to join the shinobi forces' "I want you! DATTEBAYO!!" says Naruto. But Tobirama slaps him on thr head. "God damn it Naruto!! I Want you...I WANT YOU TO FUCKIN CONCENTRATE ON THE EXERCISE,THERE ARE NO MORE GHOSTS AROUND JUST THE THREE OF US!"
Nice. Good Story. Good Job. Make A Right Choice. Ship Naruto with hinata. ..................................................................
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Very good........................................................................................................................................................................
Gosto muito de fics que o personagem se esforça pra ficar forte em vem de ficar dependente de sistemas o hacks por favor não pare ..........
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typical author review but I think it will turn out to be pretty good. if you have any questions about my story let me know.