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okay dude I am not happy with you I mean I understand that you don't want to continue this but literally if you were just going to sit there and brighten it up you could have just brightened up the one that you had done already wrote I'm I get tired of every time I find it good Harry Potter fanfiction where the character is Merlin and really half the time they do 50 chapters and drop it just like you're doing you're dropping this after so long and to be honest I like you so much that I gave a lot of like the I voted a lot for your stuff because I really thought hey if I voted more you would sit there and update it some more but to this point I'm not happy I'm like I understand that you want to drop it but at the end of the day why can't you just transfer ownership because not letting someone else finish it kind of makes me upset because as a person at read it and really loved it and was like craving for more and more like a lot of these Fanfictions I always forget what I've read and I really liked him yours has always stuck in my mind because I really liked it I like the mystery I can't find much mystery around my Harry Potter Fanfictions I like that he was a descendant of Merlin I also like the fact that he wouldn't roll over for Dumbledore and he was also a black character and at this point it's like I don't know if you're if you if you're going to drop this and you sit there and already done a 100 one but you drop this just because you ain't updated I don't know if I can trust you as an author because I don't know if you're going to update on anything else you post I'm not trying to be mean but I really liked your story and I have to give like the world background of three after this point because you didn't sit there and updated if you would have done more chapters character design Flawless store development I gave you a one because you ain't developed the story and over 3 months and now you're dropping it the same goes for your writing quality you're writing quality was through the race I thought that was good so I don't know if I'm going to continue to follow you and to be honest if anyone else feels the way I think you should comment on what I have to say because doesn't it for me as a person not trying to come out as rude but like half the time for me and I don't know if y'all when we get a good fanfiction that is something when you're looking for something involving Merlin and with Harry Potter they do like 50 chapters and then I just oh I'm not going to continue it either that's on here or on WhatsApp or webinarville
Excellent novel and very glad with the rewrite as it’a been done spectacularly however I would like to know when why or if there will be more update at all or has the novel been dropped for various personal reasons ?
Will his name be Oz???? .........................................................................................................................
Really enjoying this book so far, hope to see more! Hope you’re doing ok Author!
I'm a new reader and I don't know how the previous story would have been before the rewrite but from what I've seen this story is very well done and I seriously need more chapters, every day I reload the page to see if a new chapter has already been uploaded xd
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tbh one of the better FF of hp and till now story has been good but i wanna see how the rest of the wizard World outside UK is shown after he starts traveling around.
Me parece una versión mucho mejor que el fanfic original siendo la historia y el desarrollo de personaje mucho más fluido. Además el protagonista sí tuvo buenos deseos cuando murió, ya que en el original desperdicio totalmente la oportunidad. Espero que siga manteniendo la buena calidad
This fic gets me going it gives me a will to live lol, I’m eagerly awaiting the next chapter can’t wait for Oz to start traveling the world and him visiting different parts of the magical world and it’s culture.
Continua a história!!! Não a largues agora plz! É literalmente a merlhor história de hp que li, e a melhor história que tenho na minha bibloteca!
Bland boring cliched and stupid to the core. Avada kadavra to this fanfic. wouldn't recommend this to anybody. wasted my time reading this BS
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me encanta la historia sobre todo el prota con su previsión y su madures jejeje esta historia me inspiro ami para terminar la mía muy buena de verdad un cordial saludo al autor y sigue superándote que vas por buen camino
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Are English?? Because the doctor charged then for a check up…in the Uk that can get a Doctor in serious trouble you know. And the moment Nans fainted she would’ve been taken to the hospital or even forced to go if she was neglecting her health There are also a few other minor inconsistencies within but those are point I’m bringing up
Preferred the original this all seems just unrealistic. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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I like this story, and I also wanted to ask a question, will there be romance?[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A much deserved and needed rewrite. The motivation of the MC and backstory is much stronger for it. The character is much more believable and likeable. Let's see where it goes from here.
This story is great I haven't read the previous one but the rewrite is pretty good it fleshes out the MC's early years and his loved one so we feel a connection. Also this is one of the few stories that doesn't show learning magic as too easy, no you can learn magic just by meditating
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How different will this rewrite be from your original story? Will you still change the personality of the main cast and daphne? So far it’s a great read and I can’t wait to see the reactions when he reveals himself. And about his dragon form. Will he register himself as the full-grown or baby/young dragon? In the original he registered as a small dragon, but it kinda seems lame to me to be registered as a young dragon.
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well better than the last one for now. .........................................................................................................
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lol didn't even notice that... thought that it was just taking a break.now I just accidentally saw this lol...................hehehehe......
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Author should stop trying to make long novels and just make a short one that can be done in maybe a month. That way, you won't struggle to keep these long ones going.
okay dude I am not happy with you I mean I understand that you don't want to continue this but literally if you were just going to sit there and brighten it up you could have just brightened up the one that you had done already wrote I'm I get tired of every time I find it good Harry Potter fanfiction where the character is Merlin and really half the time they do 50 chapters and drop it just like you're doing you're dropping this after so long and to be honest I like you so much that I gave a lot of like the I voted a lot for your stuff because I really thought hey if I voted more you would sit there and update it some more but to this point I'm not happy I'm like I understand that you want to drop it but at the end of the day why can't you just transfer ownership because not letting someone else finish it kind of makes me upset because as a person at read it and really loved it and was like craving for more and more like a lot of these Fanfictions I always forget what I've read and I really liked him yours has always stuck in my mind because I really liked it I like the mystery I can't find much mystery around my Harry Potter Fanfictions I like that he was a descendant of Merlin I also like the fact that he wouldn't roll over for Dumbledore and he was also a black character and at this point it's like I don't know if you're if you if you're going to drop this and you sit there and already done a 100 one but you drop this just because you ain't updated I don't know if I can trust you as an author because I don't know if you're going to update on anything else you post I'm not trying to be mean but I really liked your story and I have to give like the world background of three after this point because you didn't sit there and updated if you would have done more chapters character design Flawless store development I gave you a one because you ain't developed the story and over 3 months and now you're dropping it the same goes for your writing quality you're writing quality was through the race I thought that was good so I don't know if I'm going to continue to follow you and to be honest if anyone else feels the way I think you should comment on what I have to say because doesn't it for me as a person not trying to come out as rude but like half the time for me and I don't know if y'all when we get a good fanfiction that is something when you're looking for something involving Merlin and with Harry Potter they do like 50 chapters and then I just oh I'm not going to continue it either that's on here or on WhatsApp or webinarville
Excellent novel and very glad with the rewrite as it’a been done spectacularly however I would like to know when why or if there will be more update at all or has the novel been dropped for various personal reasons ?
Will his name be Oz???? .........................................................................................................................
Really enjoying this book so far, hope to see more! Hope you’re doing ok Author!
I'm a new reader and I don't know how the previous story would have been before the rewrite but from what I've seen this story is very well done and I seriously need more chapters, every day I reload the page to see if a new chapter has already been uploaded xd
Revelar spoiler tbh one of the better FF of hp and till now story has been good but i wanna see how the rest of the wizard World outside UK is shown after he starts traveling around.
Me parece una versión mucho mejor que el fanfic original siendo la historia y el desarrollo de personaje mucho más fluido. Además el protagonista sí tuvo buenos deseos cuando murió, ya que en el original desperdicio totalmente la oportunidad. Espero que siga manteniendo la buena calidad
This fic gets me going it gives me a will to live lol, I’m eagerly awaiting the next chapter can’t wait for Oz to start traveling the world and him visiting different parts of the magical world and it’s culture.
Continua a história!!! Não a largues agora plz! É literalmente a merlhor história de hp que li, e a melhor história que tenho na minha bibloteca!
Bland boring cliched and stupid to the core. Avada kadavra to this fanfic. wouldn't recommend this to anybody. wasted my time reading this BS
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me encanta la historia sobre todo el prota con su previsión y su madures jejeje esta historia me inspiro ami para terminar la mía muy buena de verdad un cordial saludo al autor y sigue superándote que vas por buen camino
Good stuff! pppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppqppppppppppppp
Are English?? Because the doctor charged then for a check up…in the Uk that can get a Doctor in serious trouble you know. And the moment Nans fainted she would’ve been taken to the hospital or even forced to go if she was neglecting her health There are also a few other minor inconsistencies within but those are point I’m bringing up
Preferred the original this all seems just unrealistic. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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I like this story, and I also wanted to ask a question, will there be romance?[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A much deserved and needed rewrite. The motivation of the MC and backstory is much stronger for it. The character is much more believable and likeable. Let's see where it goes from here.
This story is great I haven't read the previous one but the rewrite is pretty good it fleshes out the MC's early years and his loved one so we feel a connection. Also this is one of the few stories that doesn't show learning magic as too easy, no you can learn magic just by meditating
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How different will this rewrite be from your original story? Will you still change the personality of the main cast and daphne? So far it’s a great read and I can’t wait to see the reactions when he reveals himself. And about his dragon form. Will he register himself as the full-grown or baby/young dragon? In the original he registered as a small dragon, but it kinda seems lame to me to be registered as a young dragon.
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well better than the last one for now. .........................................................................................................
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lol didn't even notice that... thought that it was just taking a break.now I just accidentally saw this lol...................hehehehe......
Me gustó buena historia buena historia[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Author should stop trying to make long novels and just make a short one that can be done in maybe a month. That way, you won't struggle to keep these long ones going.