World of shinobi

LV 14

Book_seeker

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LV 2

Nafsu_geass28

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LV 5

jeanpierregerardo

It is necessary to improve, but it is something, because from the beginning until now everything seemed like someone telling a story and since there is not emotion, there is not much interaction, there are no characters involved with the protagonist, a childhood friend or something that is interesting , then you went to sasuke's pov, which I don't see as important, there are mistakes, but you still have room to improve.