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Ceritanya bagus dan menarik. Semangat dan tetap terus berkarya,,saya akan tetap kasih bintang 5 dan saya harap makin cepat updated ya author... Ditunggu kelanjutannya.... Hehehe
Well... I decided to read this without bothering to read the reviews after seeing ATG and Solo leveling... and I have to say I was truly an idiot. I wasted so much time in this on **** fanfic. I only read this becuase I saw that the world included atg and solo leveling. At first I truly enjoyed it.... but the author decided to f*** up the story and thought it was nice to make all the time he spent in those two world as nothing but a dream. This was major turnoff that made me decide to drop this. I honestly enjoyed and loved the atg arc, only to realize that it was all fake. I truly believe that this would have been better if the author decided to stick to his original plan take it from there.
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One of the best stories i have read so far. And i liked that plot twist. Hats off for the author. And i wonder if he would get the shadow monarch powers at some point with glowing eyes and all that. Any way this story is 9.5 out 10 for sure
The thing is, the story was good, the writing was awesome and the direction the author took it was excellent, brilliant even and I looked forward to the MCs progress with his girls and an op life as he was taking a slightly different and complex route to getting his harem than usual, it even made my top ten even with it's simple plot, it was good. But the everything changed, everything, it wasn't a plot twist, no, the story direction, tone and premise, everything was ripped apart for the sake of originality, Jujutsu Kaisen ain't original but its a masterpiece, this novel had potential to be great and the author could have just started with another story but no, the story the readers were invested in was just torn apart and the author didn't care one bit about the reader's reaction coz why the hell not. it was good run while it lasted😔
At this point, his way more worse than yunche. To all degenrates out there hating Yunche, you should hate this guy also. And all this planning and how he thinks that his playing "chess" on a chess board without enemies made me see how the Author really is still new on writing. His 'plan' i dont even know if it can be called that but its all 99% Canon 1% his delusion. Previous dialouge of qingyue and lingxi was garbage as crap, Characters bland as washboard with the mindset of "Mysterious" bias on how a stranger are with their midst. To be honest, all i see is a kid, a child whos attitude is not worth to have that power if were basing for someone who's worthy in ranking worth reincarnating, this guy is much worser than yunche so hell wont be enough. I dont know what kind of shiet the author made, or if even he know what the hell his writing, contradictions after contradictions on how he keeps saying who he should not be, but the author said fahck it and made hi worse than a Crappy chinese Mc. Really pathetic writing. I dont even know how this shiet last long and still updating. Well lets see if theres progress down the line. Writing quality wise - Is readable but lacks information on small things like not explaining if its Night just skips straight to " After eating he sleeps" should be "After eating he went straight to his room. Its already late in the evening so he went to rest" Ever miner tidbit information helps bring color to the world your are describing. Story Development - Still at Chapter 7, like what i said above his worse than yunche and can be a labeled as your typical chinese young master with the knowledge of a modern day useless rich boy. You can already see how trash and pathetic his personality and how contradicting he is. I dont if theres progress but if theres not, then this story is crap.
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not trying to be a dick or something but the reason I started to read novels was to get away from the preachiness of modern entertainment, I liked the Idea a the beginning and I think is commendable to go for an out of the common background for your MC but it started to feel like I was been preached at, it may be a misconception but this is how it felt for me. It's cool that you thought of going by the trauma route however I think most people get into fanfics because of the self-inserts or the catharsis that a power fantasy provides them, I wish you luck in your FF however it is not for me.
Really good for the chapters available so far. Put a nice twist on the transmigration story and a good path for development on the MC. Even the preview of how powerful he can become was well laid out.
Guy! your story is very good, it is not perfect ... but it is very good. I took the essence of what you want to do, and I thought it was good. I confess that seeing the criticisms in the comments made me abandon it... but I persisted and did not regret it. I never called your type of MC, after all not all the protagonists of this type of story have to be perfect or legible... we are talking about humans, right! He was corrupt by power or by lucifer wanted... that was good. I hope you don't drop it... I am very excited about the sequence.
Ahh It's frustrating. First few chapters was so good but after ATG arc it becomes shit I couldn't read it anymore the way MC think was so mess up manipulative my ass it's down right mind control and lying MC nothing more than a scum read at your own risk
This is my first review, I put this garbage 1.I do not recommend reading this, the author does not understand what he is writing about, the character of MC is terrible.I've read a lot of horror novels, but this one is probably one of the worst.
The story seems like a cliche wish-fulfillment fic with sh!tty MC at the start, but that changed after a few chapters with a huge twist...I thought the fic would go really downhill after that as not many would like such a twist...I kept reading anyway and felt the fic became much better...it is still early right now, but I feel it is going in a good direction after he meets the main waifu...
No me llama la atención osea apuesta.... claro esa es mi opion que yo ofrezco si alguien piensa lo contrario bien, cada quien es un mundo diferente y basura si al autor le molesta. lo siento pero es lo que pienso xD y se que no les importa pero igual opino ....
Si eres capaz de leer más de 20 capítulos,entonces dale una oportunidad No voy a mentir,al principio hay un poco de bullsh*t mc op harem Pero conforme avanza la historia,también se ve un progreso en la historia,así como las habilidades del autor. Solo trata de no tomar muy enserio los primeros capítulos,son algo genéricos,pero es como dice el dicho "llegue buscando cobre y encontré oro". Quizás no sea oro,pero creo que vale la pena darle una oportunidad. Increíble progreso autor,espero que siga avanzando y poder llegar a una gran obra ,más grande de lo que parece ser.
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Sorry author I really liked it in the early chapters before the og plot even after enduring the og plot, I was still fine. But you had to send him in highschool of the dead before even spending time in the other worlds neglecting all his women and I absolutely didn't like the og, it totally changed the personality and made the story dark.I am still going to give 5 stars and read this in hopes that the novel will gradually become better.
Its well enough written, but the order of the worlds just prevents any existing buildup. In my opinion, it would have been better to start with highschool of the dead, and work ones way up the difficulty ladder from there..
It was good before the plot twist... my only question would be why the author would write that plot twist. It is so frustrating when the story gets to the good part when there was a sudden plot twist.
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Espero actualizacion xD. La aterradora talentosidad del mc contra el combate contra Saeko fue buena y mas cuando dejo una muy buena impresion en ella, espero con ansias el siguiente cap.
you need to keep up more chapter just seeing the amount of people reading it shows you have you have a duty okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
... I really dont know what to feel about this story, the beginning was good, then everything got really confusing, and it was mentioned how he remembered his past life, but after that we heard nothing more about it, and then everything got really confusing, then after chapter 17 or 18, almost everything was starting to make sense, and plot is starting to get really good! Looking forward to keep reading this work, tho I do hope it wont get as confusing again. Anyway, I’d describe this as a diamond in the rough. would be truly helpful for future readers if you took sometime in the future to maybe try to not exactly redo, but try and idk maybe reshape some of it to make it less confusing and leave some more obvious hints in earlier chapters about how the plot will come along, as you have experienced it yourself how angry some of your readers were, and how a lot might have dropped it early out of anger. To summarise it all, it was a good experience reading this, just leave plot hints earlier on instead of right before it happens, as it may seem forced and confusing to the readers. Anyhow, I shall take my leave for now and come back when some more chapters have been released. I wish you a good day.
good ideas but not thw best execution , the beggining is perfect but after a while it turns out the mc isnt powerfull at all he was tricked by a devil to have his powers, in the latest chapter lilith(which is a woman that will join the harem) is bisexual and has been sleeping with other women for 1000 thousand years , the author left a note that said that yuri wont happen again i n this ff. mc personality is confusing and not likable. it is not wish-fufilment at all. one thing that i liked was the development between his realionship and the girls from atg but right when its getting good he goes to another world 🤦🏻♂️. wouldnt recommending reading.
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I had made a comment expressing how good this novel was, but with the last chapters I realize that the author by wanting to be "original" in his plot (showing that the ROB was actually a demon who deceived him, that the MC was raped by his butler, that the demon Lilith fell in love with the mc for a silly reason, etc) I think he is going in a bad direction, however it is the author's story, so good luck with your novel, but I'm out
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Ceritanya bagus dan menarik. Semangat dan tetap terus berkarya,,saya akan tetap kasih bintang 5 dan saya harap makin cepat updated ya author... Ditunggu kelanjutannya.... Hehehe
Well... I decided to read this without bothering to read the reviews after seeing ATG and Solo leveling... and I have to say I was truly an idiot. I wasted so much time in this on **** fanfic. I only read this becuase I saw that the world included atg and solo leveling. At first I truly enjoyed it.... but the author decided to f*** up the story and thought it was nice to make all the time he spent in those two world as nothing but a dream. This was major turnoff that made me decide to drop this. I honestly enjoyed and loved the atg arc, only to realize that it was all fake. I truly believe that this would have been better if the author decided to stick to his original plan take it from there.
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One of the best stories i have read so far. And i liked that plot twist. Hats off for the author. And i wonder if he would get the shadow monarch powers at some point with glowing eyes and all that. Any way this story is 9.5 out 10 for sure
The thing is, the story was good, the writing was awesome and the direction the author took it was excellent, brilliant even and I looked forward to the MCs progress with his girls and an op life as he was taking a slightly different and complex route to getting his harem than usual, it even made my top ten even with it's simple plot, it was good. But the everything changed, everything, it wasn't a plot twist, no, the story direction, tone and premise, everything was ripped apart for the sake of originality, Jujutsu Kaisen ain't original but its a masterpiece, this novel had potential to be great and the author could have just started with another story but no, the story the readers were invested in was just torn apart and the author didn't care one bit about the reader's reaction coz why the hell not. it was good run while it lasted😔
At this point, his way more worse than yunche. To all degenrates out there hating Yunche, you should hate this guy also. And all this planning and how he thinks that his playing "chess" on a chess board without enemies made me see how the Author really is still new on writing. His 'plan' i dont even know if it can be called that but its all 99% Canon 1% his delusion. Previous dialouge of qingyue and lingxi was garbage as crap, Characters bland as washboard with the mindset of "Mysterious" bias on how a stranger are with their midst. To be honest, all i see is a kid, a child whos attitude is not worth to have that power if were basing for someone who's worthy in ranking worth reincarnating, this guy is much worser than yunche so hell wont be enough. I dont know what kind of shiet the author made, or if even he know what the hell his writing, contradictions after contradictions on how he keeps saying who he should not be, but the author said fahck it and made hi worse than a Crappy chinese Mc. Really pathetic writing. I dont even know how this shiet last long and still updating. Well lets see if theres progress down the line. Writing quality wise - Is readable but lacks information on small things like not explaining if its Night just skips straight to " After eating he sleeps" should be "After eating he went straight to his room. Its already late in the evening so he went to rest" Ever miner tidbit information helps bring color to the world your are describing. Story Development - Still at Chapter 7, like what i said above his worse than yunche and can be a labeled as your typical chinese young master with the knowledge of a modern day useless rich boy. You can already see how trash and pathetic his personality and how contradicting he is. I dont if theres progress but if theres not, then this story is crap.
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Revelar spoiler not trying to be a dick or something but the reason I started to read novels was to get away from the preachiness of modern entertainment, I liked the Idea a the beginning and I think is commendable to go for an out of the common background for your MC but it started to feel like I was been preached at, it may be a misconception but this is how it felt for me. It's cool that you thought of going by the trauma route however I think most people get into fanfics because of the self-inserts or the catharsis that a power fantasy provides them, I wish you luck in your FF however it is not for me.
Really good for the chapters available so far. Put a nice twist on the transmigration story and a good path for development on the MC. Even the preview of how powerful he can become was well laid out.
Guy! your story is very good, it is not perfect ... but it is very good. I took the essence of what you want to do, and I thought it was good. I confess that seeing the criticisms in the comments made me abandon it... but I persisted and did not regret it. I never called your type of MC, after all not all the protagonists of this type of story have to be perfect or legible... we are talking about humans, right! He was corrupt by power or by lucifer wanted... that was good. I hope you don't drop it... I am very excited about the sequence.
Ahh It's frustrating. First few chapters was so good but after ATG arc it becomes shit I couldn't read it anymore the way MC think was so mess up manipulative my ass it's down right mind control and lying MC nothing more than a scum read at your own risk
This is my first review, I put this garbage 1.I do not recommend reading this, the author does not understand what he is writing about, the character of MC is terrible.I've read a lot of horror novels, but this one is probably one of the worst.
The story seems like a cliche wish-fulfillment fic with sh!tty MC at the start, but that changed after a few chapters with a huge twist...I thought the fic would go really downhill after that as not many would like such a twist...I kept reading anyway and felt the fic became much better...it is still early right now, but I feel it is going in a good direction after he meets the main waifu...
No me llama la atención osea apuesta.... claro esa es mi opion que yo ofrezco si alguien piensa lo contrario bien, cada quien es un mundo diferente y basura si al autor le molesta. lo siento pero es lo que pienso xD y se que no les importa pero igual opino ....
Si eres capaz de leer más de 20 capítulos,entonces dale una oportunidad No voy a mentir,al principio hay un poco de bullsh*t mc op harem Pero conforme avanza la historia,también se ve un progreso en la historia,así como las habilidades del autor. Solo trata de no tomar muy enserio los primeros capítulos,son algo genéricos,pero es como dice el dicho "llegue buscando cobre y encontré oro". Quizás no sea oro,pero creo que vale la pena darle una oportunidad. Increíble progreso autor,espero que siga avanzando y poder llegar a una gran obra ,más grande de lo que parece ser.
XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXOOOOOOOOOOOO It's nice :)
I like this fanfic 💯💯👌👌👌👌==========================================================================================================================
Sorry author I really liked it in the early chapters before the og plot even after enduring the og plot, I was still fine. But you had to send him in highschool of the dead before even spending time in the other worlds neglecting all his women and I absolutely didn't like the og, it totally changed the personality and made the story dark.I am still going to give 5 stars and read this in hopes that the novel will gradually become better.
Its well enough written, but the order of the worlds just prevents any existing buildup. In my opinion, it would have been better to start with highschool of the dead, and work ones way up the difficulty ladder from there..
It was good before the plot twist... my only question would be why the author would write that plot twist. It is so frustrating when the story gets to the good part when there was a sudden plot twist.
Revelar spoiler Espero actualizacion xD. La aterradora talentosidad del mc contra el combate contra Saeko fue buena y mas cuando dejo una muy buena impresion en ella, espero con ansias el siguiente cap.
you need to keep up more chapter just seeing the amount of people reading it shows you have you have a duty okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
... I really dont know what to feel about this story, the beginning was good, then everything got really confusing, and it was mentioned how he remembered his past life, but after that we heard nothing more about it, and then everything got really confusing, then after chapter 17 or 18, almost everything was starting to make sense, and plot is starting to get really good! Looking forward to keep reading this work, tho I do hope it wont get as confusing again. Anyway, I’d describe this as a diamond in the rough. would be truly helpful for future readers if you took sometime in the future to maybe try to not exactly redo, but try and idk maybe reshape some of it to make it less confusing and leave some more obvious hints in earlier chapters about how the plot will come along, as you have experienced it yourself how angry some of your readers were, and how a lot might have dropped it early out of anger. To summarise it all, it was a good experience reading this, just leave plot hints earlier on instead of right before it happens, as it may seem forced and confusing to the readers. Anyhow, I shall take my leave for now and come back when some more chapters have been released. I wish you a good day.
good ideas but not thw best execution , the beggining is perfect but after a while it turns out the mc isnt powerfull at all he was tricked by a devil to have his powers, in the latest chapter lilith(which is a woman that will join the harem) is bisexual and has been sleeping with other women for 1000 thousand years , the author left a note that said that yuri wont happen again i n this ff. mc personality is confusing and not likable. it is not wish-fufilment at all. one thing that i liked was the development between his realionship and the girls from atg but right when its getting good he goes to another world 🤦🏻♂️. wouldnt recommending reading.
Revelar spoiler I had made a comment expressing how good this novel was, but with the last chapters I realize that the author by wanting to be "original" in his plot (showing that the ROB was actually a demon who deceived him, that the MC was raped by his butler, that the demon Lilith fell in love with the mc for a silly reason, etc) I think he is going in a bad direction, however it is the author's story, so good luck with your novel, but I'm out
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