Snow Curse (GOT SI)

LV 4

Uncle_Sheogorath

Read around 9 chapters. Mc is boring, just plain boring. He has OP powers reborn into Jon Snow a Targaryen but has no ambition. He just refuses to use his powers for any worthwhile ambitions. (I mean its game of thrones the point of it is medieval wars, conquest/intrigue.) He has silly excuses. All the time he says 'i wanna go to summer isles and retire' or something. Boring. Also, I get the feeling like he wants to submit to Daenerys. In conclusion not fun to read. Should of NOT SI'ed into Jon snow Author(MY opinion).

LV 12

dscot345

Do you have a great writing skills and I don’t have to struggle while reading your story. your version of Jon has no ambition has no drive and just seems to blonder to scenario to scenario. This love that he has for the Starks is utter nonsense. If he comes in with a clean slate he should have more respect for Daenerys than he does for the Starks. I’ve always hated main characters that have no ambition to take all who’s willing to give everyone else everything. You’re writing a story that takes place during medieval time. Titles mean things even a commoner isn’t going to follow you if you don’t titles. I only got to the point where he was eating soup or whatever with the start children and I just couldn’t I might try this again but the character seem so useless and I mean by the way he thinks.

LV 4

Hit1903

This is shit. And I even had a lot of hope for this story. But after 10 chapters this turned into cringy, wish fulfilment and god knows how many other categorical shits. I mean turning into a dragon, really

LV 5

Evil_Jesus

Didn't like the premise at first but it was nice after all.

LV 10

Marcelinho_Ggazeli

for now it's 5 stars, but if the MC helps daenerys to become queen I change to 1 star, I can even forgive if the MC just "sleeps" in daenerys' bed, but she dies in the end, crazy woman who has 3 dragons, imagine the MC sleeping soundly when he is burned alive by 3 dragons just because the crazy woman thought it was fun, after all she is crazy

LV 3

Great_Abby

Very great story! Can't wait to read more chapters!! Hope the author won't drop this, and I'm really impressed with the Mc character so far.

LV 14

black_lamp

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LV 3

Great_Abby

Great fanfic! Really looking forward towards more! Amazing usage of correct grammar, with good introduction and solid foundation of a fanfic. Really excited to see more of this!

LV 6

Phoenix1998

Author I binged this story and really liked it. Cant wait to read more. Author I binged this story and really liked it. Cant wait to read more.

LV 3

Great_Abby

breathtaking story!

LV 10

Marcelinho_Ggazeli

continue continue, but kill daenerys continue continue, but kill daeneryscontinue continue, but kill daeneryscontinue continue, but kill daeneryscontinue continue, but kill daeneryscontinue continue, but kill daeneryscontinue continue, but kill daenerys

LV 3

Zan_M

😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

LV 13

97126205

The story is going well, the new protagonist has more of backbone and less of useless feel to him, it's seems much better than the TV shows protagonist. keep the great work. Release more, please. I want to read more before I go back to the hell called school.

LV 14

Fallout_Armageddon

fabulous don't drop .......................................................................................................................

LV 3

Great_Abby

Breathtaking!

LV 13

Nikano_Johnson

Would be nice if I could see a clear indication of what drives "New Jon" but overall I'm entertained and would like to see more! 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽

LV 3

Daoist571053

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LV 2

Zero01010100

This tar I'mted put amazingly, please continue to write! This tarted put amazingly, please continue to write! This tarted put amazingly, please continue to write!

LV 4

CookieFighter

at first, it was like bland, but as the story began to unfold it became more interesting, continu like this .