Invisible Curse

Story development and character design are owesom. Good Language. Fantastic imagination. I really like it. Eagerly Waiting for the next chapter .

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Kiraran

Great start! The characters themselves were designed well. I love how the interaction between the characters are so smooth and how the story transitions! Great writing style!

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MildredIU

Nice work. This story is very relatable even though it's a fantasy novel. Lots of people suffer from self-hate especially teenagers and It's usually very hard to overcome. I really love this book and I genuinely recommend it to everyone. Keep the updates coming and good work author.

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tarastone_

wow this book is amazing ... nice character development and the book in itself is a road less taken.. keep going .. cant wait for the next chapter!!

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vinthakadha

nicely written. i always love a good story and this looks like one. kudos to the writer for spinning up a good story. i will just have to see how the story progresses from here.

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Bort_Patgia

Great story. The introduction kicks of the mood and I love the narrative as well. The character is well written. Hope to see more of this novel.

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WolfyHime_Writes

I'm currently reading this and I love the flow your story from the first chapter... I will add this to my library to get notified for the upcoming chapters💕💕💕

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BlueSapphire_dust

I really love how you describe every characters this story have. I also love how you do the narration. I will surely read some more during my free time.

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karen290100

When I was in high school, I too had many identity issues. I sometimes loathed myself as well. Hence why i can relate to this story so much. I love the setting of the book so far. Really keen so see how this plot unfolds

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Luciar_A

I love how you describe everything 😍. Your story is flowing perfectly well and I'm looking forward to your updates. Please don't delay, update me daily. It's my humble request 🙏 I'm adding this to my lib and turning on the notification!

I am doing a good role in this ❤️It’s cool waiting for more books from your side.so keep goingggggg hehe Okay byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Tatatatatattatatatatatatatstatstststststststtstsststs

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Bellamerce

A***, this is unique and interesting.. It has some good mystery to it.. Definately One for the library. Following very closely. Good job 🤗🤗🤗

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nia_94

Nicely written story. The synopsis and the cover picture are both intriguing enough to keep me hooked on the book. Highly recommended for reading.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Kazmicink

Love this novel. Get past the first 2 chapters and you will love it. Love the family, love the group of friends and your descriptions of the characters. So many underlying plots, love it. Some love, mystery and tension. 🥰

The communication is vivid and there is pretty good articulation and flow of events. What i like most is her lucid presentation. In the three chapters I read there is no grey area or ambiguity. It gives a view into family life in the developed world and what schools are like there. This perspective is important for teenagers who are stepping into global scenario where they may have to work in any part of the world or work from home in a global environment.

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Nande_K

The synopsis is soo hooking and I've enjoyed reading the very few chapters of this book. It soo relatable and I loved how the writer developes its characters. Job well done author.

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Lancee

Beautifully written. The plot develops well throughout the chapters and the picture created is undeniably beautiful. Good use of words from the author.

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Joondabest_

The chapters were insanely good! Language and vocabulary were a thing to talk about! they're so perfect! highly impressed with your work! keep it up :)

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Alisa_Leslie269

Incredibly riveting.A very moving and intense story.The contrast between the two leads adds a unique element and makes you eager to see how it plays out.Truly entertaining!