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The story is good, so is the mc, and its also a touhou fic. But the main big issue, is the grammar, there are soo many errors im almost certain this is a MTL fic, since the author didnt bother to fix the errors even in the later chapters. Untill the author fixes this error it wont get more than 2-3 stars from me. I suggest grammarly, its pretty easy to use.
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-1 star for update stability. It's great, except when it's not (there were some gag chapters that I think were edited after or I simply erased them from my memory to read further). But if you know me, then you will know that this is worth a read since I bothered giving a positive review. (looking at you profile stalkers, "waah you only leave negative comments, waah")
where new chapter? me this like. me want more. I am the exp of my sword. webnovel is my body, and power stones are my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. unknown to death, nor known to life. have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those eyes will never read something good. So, as I pray... Unlimited Exp Works!
Too bad there are no more chapters, it would have better if there was at least million more chapters ☺️. But authors is not uploading anymore ┻━┻ ︵ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ︵ ┻━┻ [[[N:Just ignore it if you want]]] Wake up to reality! Nothing ever goes as planned in this accursed world. The longer you live, the more you realize that the only things that truly exist in this reality are merely pain, suffering and futility. Listen, everywhere you look in this world, wherever there is light, there will always be shadows to be found as well. As long as there is a concept of victors, the vanquished will also exist. The selfish intent of wanting to preserve peace, initiates war and hatred is born in order to protect love. There are nexuses causal relationships that cannot be separated. By- Madara Uchiha
This book is so.....Girly....yeah, the most striking thing in this book is the comedy and mischievous little girl. this good but not suit for my taste
Why no more updates it was just getting better pls continue !!! 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙
I JUST WANT TO ASK ONE THING. IS THIS YURI?................. ...............................................................................
The story is very nice so far 👍 i do hope you plan on making mc’s stats a bit more balanced next world since it usually makes the plot harder to adapt and create due to how much routes and possibilities it uses up especially when you can go from weak to strong.
I forgot to review about this. Bruh, this is a masterpiece just please update! Its been 2 months since last chapter I need more! Uururuururururururururu
Mai waifu . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . .. .. ... ... .. .. .. . .. .. . I was the one how broke it btw
Revelar spoiler
I (and I think you, too) really like this work. Because: 1) ORIGINAL and interesting plot; 2) MC (and system) -interesting personality (character and behavior); 3) very funny jokes and references; 4) appropriate humor).
An amazing hard to find touhou fanfic, to which the author is actually dedicated to, with an OC character. Only problem being the updating stability, but the story more than makes up for the slow updates.
Its hard to find good Touhou stories, and this one doesn't disappoint. The system and mc have a unique and lovable personality. Keep up the good work. I need Mai Waifu and Mai Friend.
Super awesome. The characters are charismatic, interesting, there are lots of memes and funny scenes. Although I don't know much about touhou and this is the first experience I have with that whole universe, I enjoy it ^^.
kissu~kissu~kissu~kissu~keep~kissu~kissu~kissu~kiuppu~kissu~kithesu~kissu~kissu~kissu~kissu~kigresu~kissu~atkissu~kissu~kissu~kissu~kissu~kissu~work~kissu~kissu~
Very good story, ... Contains comedy, ... character background is pretty good especially she is my favorite character from Touhou ... it's just that the stability of the update is 7x1 ... But I still give all my power stone for the new chapter ... (Thanks For Chapter and Keep Your Nice Work)
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT PLEASE DO NOT DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T
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Great comedy fanfic with perfect Main Character, but the grammar might be a little off as cautioned. I recommend this because of the comedy, if you like funny stuff and system/gamer type fanfics then read it (as well as Touhou).
It's a slow one, but this is the most cultured book I've ever read! You can find so many references, and laugh while other reader maybe don't know what the **** is that
⠄⠄⠄⢰⣧⣼⣯⠄⣸⣠⣶⣶⣦⣾⠄⠄⠄⠄⡀⠄⢀⣿⣿⠄⠄⠄⢸⡇⠄⠄ ⠄⠄⠄⣾⣿⠿⠿⠶⠿⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣦⣤⣄⢀⡅⢠⣾⣛⡉⠄⠄⠄⠸⢀⣿⠄ ⠄⠄⢀⡋⣡⣴⣶⣶⡀⠄⠄⠙⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣴⣿⣿⣿⢃⣤⣄⣀⣥⣿⣿⠄ ⠄⠄⢸⣇⠻⣿⣿⣿⣧⣀⢀⣠⡌⢻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠿⠿⠿⣿⣿⣿⠄ ⠄⢀⢸⣿⣷⣤⣤⣤⣬⣙⣛⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⣿⣿⡍⠄⠄⢀⣤⣄⠉⠋⣰ ⠄⣼⣖⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⢇⣿⣿⡷⠶⠶⢿⣿⣿⠇⢀⣤ ⠘⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣽⣿⣿⣿⡇⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⣶⣥⣴⣿⡗ ⢀⠈⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡟⠄ ⢸⣿⣦⣌⣛⣻⣿⣿⣧⠙⠛⠛⡭⠅⠒⠦⠭⣭⡻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⠃⠄ ⠘⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡆⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠹⠈⢋⣽⣿⣿⣿⣿⣵⣾⠃⠄ ⠄⠘⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠄⣴⣿⣶⣄⠄⣴⣶⠄⢀⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠃⠄⠄ ⠄⠄⠈⠻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡄⢻⣿⣿⣿⠄⣿⣿⡀⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣛⠛⠁⠄⠄⠄ ⠄⠄⠄⠄⠈⠛⢿⣿⣿⣿⠁⠞⢿⣿⣿⡄⢿⣿⡇⣸⣿⣿⠿⠛⠁⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄ ⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠉⠻⣿⣿⣾⣦⡙⠻⣷⣾⣿⠃⠿⠋⠁⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⢀⣠⣴ ⣿⣿⣿⣶⣶⣮⣥⣒⠲⢮⣝⡿⣿⣿⡆⣿⡿⠃⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⣠⣴⣿⣿⣿
For me, it's fascinating! Keep up the good work, Author-san!!! lalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalal
It hard too find a Touhou fanfic, but I just came across your fanfic and after reading around 10 chapter you didn’t disappoint me. Your work is great and I like want to keep going on the book till the ends. My favorite Touhou character is Remilia.
meh it got boring really fast and it does not really go anywhere ...........................................
если кратко гг становится он и за ней постояно ходит какойто сталкер ищё большый оп и постояно говорит ооооо как интересно, ооооо как итересно, оооо как итересно,оооо как итересно,оооо как итересно,оооо как итересно,оооо как итересно,оооо как итересно и портит весь фанфик
Revelar spoiler The story is good, so is the mc, and its also a touhou fic. But the main big issue, is the grammar, there are soo many errors im almost certain this is a MTL fic, since the author didnt bother to fix the errors even in the later chapters. Untill the author fixes this error it wont get more than 2-3 stars from me. I suggest grammarly, its pretty easy to use.
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Could be better ……………………………………….,,,……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..
-1 star for update stability. It's great, except when it's not (there were some gag chapters that I think were edited after or I simply erased them from my memory to read further). But if you know me, then you will know that this is worth a read since I bothered giving a positive review. (looking at you profile stalkers, "waah you only leave negative comments, waah")
where new chapter? me this like. me want more. I am the exp of my sword. webnovel is my body, and power stones are my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. unknown to death, nor known to life. have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those eyes will never read something good. So, as I pray... Unlimited Exp Works!
Too bad there are no more chapters, it would have better if there was at least million more chapters ☺️. But authors is not uploading anymore ┻━┻ ︵ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ︵ ┻━┻ [[[N:Just ignore it if you want]]] Wake up to reality! Nothing ever goes as planned in this accursed world. The longer you live, the more you realize that the only things that truly exist in this reality are merely pain, suffering and futility. Listen, everywhere you look in this world, wherever there is light, there will always be shadows to be found as well. As long as there is a concept of victors, the vanquished will also exist. The selfish intent of wanting to preserve peace, initiates war and hatred is born in order to protect love. There are nexuses causal relationships that cannot be separated. By- Madara Uchiha
This book is so.....Girly....yeah, the most striking thing in this book is the comedy and mischievous little girl. this good but not suit for my taste
Why no more updates it was just getting better pls continue !!! 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙
I JUST WANT TO ASK ONE THING. IS THIS YURI?................. ...............................................................................
The story is very nice so far 👍 i do hope you plan on making mc’s stats a bit more balanced next world since it usually makes the plot harder to adapt and create due to how much routes and possibilities it uses up especially when you can go from weak to strong.
I forgot to review about this. Bruh, this is a masterpiece just please update! Its been 2 months since last chapter I need more! Uururuururururururururu
Mai waifu . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . .. .. ... ... .. .. .. . .. .. . I was the one how broke it btw
Revelar spoiler I (and I think you, too) really like this work. Because: 1) ORIGINAL and interesting plot; 2) MC (and system) -interesting personality (character and behavior); 3) very funny jokes and references; 4) appropriate humor).
An amazing hard to find touhou fanfic, to which the author is actually dedicated to, with an OC character. Only problem being the updating stability, but the story more than makes up for the slow updates.
Its hard to find good Touhou stories, and this one doesn't disappoint. The system and mc have a unique and lovable personality. Keep up the good work. I need Mai Waifu and Mai Friend.
Super awesome. The characters are charismatic, interesting, there are lots of memes and funny scenes. Although I don't know much about touhou and this is the first experience I have with that whole universe, I enjoy it ^^.
kissu~kissu~kissu~kissu~keep~kissu~kissu~kissu~kiuppu~kissu~kithesu~kissu~kissu~kissu~kissu~kigresu~kissu~atkissu~kissu~kissu~kissu~kissu~kissu~work~kissu~kissu~
Very good story, ... Contains comedy, ... character background is pretty good especially she is my favorite character from Touhou ... it's just that the stability of the update is 7x1 ... But I still give all my power stone for the new chapter ... (Thanks For Chapter and Keep Your Nice Work)
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT PLEASE DO NOT DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T
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Great comedy fanfic with perfect Main Character, but the grammar might be a little off as cautioned. I recommend this because of the comedy, if you like funny stuff and system/gamer type fanfics then read it (as well as Touhou).
It's a slow one, but this is the most cultured book I've ever read! You can find so many references, and laugh while other reader maybe don't know what the **** is that
⠄⠄⠄⢰⣧⣼⣯⠄⣸⣠⣶⣶⣦⣾⠄⠄⠄⠄⡀⠄⢀⣿⣿⠄⠄⠄⢸⡇⠄⠄ ⠄⠄⠄⣾⣿⠿⠿⠶⠿⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣦⣤⣄⢀⡅⢠⣾⣛⡉⠄⠄⠄⠸⢀⣿⠄ ⠄⠄⢀⡋⣡⣴⣶⣶⡀⠄⠄⠙⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣴⣿⣿⣿⢃⣤⣄⣀⣥⣿⣿⠄ ⠄⠄⢸⣇⠻⣿⣿⣿⣧⣀⢀⣠⡌⢻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠿⠿⠿⣿⣿⣿⠄ ⠄⢀⢸⣿⣷⣤⣤⣤⣬⣙⣛⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⣿⣿⡍⠄⠄⢀⣤⣄⠉⠋⣰ ⠄⣼⣖⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⢇⣿⣿⡷⠶⠶⢿⣿⣿⠇⢀⣤ ⠘⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣽⣿⣿⣿⡇⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⣶⣥⣴⣿⡗ ⢀⠈⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡟⠄ ⢸⣿⣦⣌⣛⣻⣿⣿⣧⠙⠛⠛⡭⠅⠒⠦⠭⣭⡻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⠃⠄ ⠘⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡆⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠹⠈⢋⣽⣿⣿⣿⣿⣵⣾⠃⠄ ⠄⠘⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠄⣴⣿⣶⣄⠄⣴⣶⠄⢀⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠃⠄⠄ ⠄⠄⠈⠻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡄⢻⣿⣿⣿⠄⣿⣿⡀⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣛⠛⠁⠄⠄⠄ ⠄⠄⠄⠄⠈⠛⢿⣿⣿⣿⠁⠞⢿⣿⣿⡄⢿⣿⡇⣸⣿⣿⠿⠛⠁⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄ ⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠉⠻⣿⣿⣾⣦⡙⠻⣷⣾⣿⠃⠿⠋⠁⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⢀⣠⣴ ⣿⣿⣿⣶⣶⣮⣥⣒⠲⢮⣝⡿⣿⣿⡆⣿⡿⠃⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⣠⣴⣿⣿⣿
For me, it's fascinating! Keep up the good work, Author-san!!! lalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalal
It hard too find a Touhou fanfic, but I just came across your fanfic and after reading around 10 chapter you didn’t disappoint me. Your work is great and I like want to keep going on the book till the ends. My favorite Touhou character is Remilia.
meh it got boring really fast and it does not really go anywhere ...........................................
если кратко гг становится он и за ней постояно ходит какойто сталкер ищё большый оп и постояно говорит ооооо как интересно, ооооо как итересно, оооо как итересно,оооо как итересно,оооо как итересно,оооо как итересно,оооо как итересно,оооо как итересно и портит весь фанфик
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