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Post more please I beg you please I am on my knees begging for you to write more pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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honestly didnt want to read it and now im mad i did. the story was extremly good and drew me in by the first chapter. now im mad that its only at 8 chapters and seems the author droped it. but heres me writing a review in the hops that he hasnt, so i will support how ever o can in the hopes that he continues. so take all my stones and am willing to donate on your pateron if you hqbe it.
Please update sooni love how this book is coming out and voting for it[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
it's a very good and interesting story. it's just that there is no update even after so long which in very depressing matter.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It's not great, to be honest. There's a power creep, but the kind of power creep where the MC randomly gets new abilities, instead of creatively using or training a preexisting power. Alot of odd changes have been put in place for no apparent reason, and instead of any noteworthy character interactions we just get our MC magically making Petunia and girl!Dudley more powerful.
When I read the synopsis the first thing I thought of was "I am speed!" Noja! Thats all Via wanted to say Noja! Noja Power GO! Noja! Noja! Noja! NOJA! done~
very great so far~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~°
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ok... I read it.. before i thoughtbits not good and it was dropped but after reading it i thought there's no way this was it was to good so please please continue this thanks...
Post more please I beg you please I am on my knees begging for you to write more pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
please keep writing more chapters 👍👍👏👍👏👏👍👏👍👏👏👍[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]and please don't drop it
great novel please keep writing more chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=recommend][img=coins][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=recommend][img=coins][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update] and please don't drop it
honestly didnt want to read it and now im mad i did. the story was extremly good and drew me in by the first chapter. now im mad that its only at 8 chapters and seems the author droped it. but heres me writing a review in the hops that he hasnt, so i will support how ever o can in the hopes that he continues. so take all my stones and am willing to donate on your pateron if you hqbe it.
Please update sooni love how this book is coming out and voting for it[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
it's a very good and interesting story. it's just that there is no update even after so long which in very depressing matter.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It's not great, to be honest. There's a power creep, but the kind of power creep where the MC randomly gets new abilities, instead of creatively using or training a preexisting power. Alot of odd changes have been put in place for no apparent reason, and instead of any noteworthy character interactions we just get our MC magically making Petunia and girl!Dudley more powerful.
When I read the synopsis the first thing I thought of was "I am speed!" Noja! Thats all Via wanted to say Noja! Noja Power GO! Noja! Noja! Noja! NOJA! done~
very great so far~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~°
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________de panaaaaaaa
Revelar spoiler
ok... I read it.. before i thoughtbits not good and it was dropped but after reading it i thought there's no way this was it was to good so please please continue this thanks...