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Достаточно неплохо, очень радует когда не используется система и гг выбирает много всяких способностей.....................................................................................................
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This story deserves nothing less than 5 stars, I recommend not reading any comments in the first 10 to 20 chapters, there were many readers complaining about silly things. This novel shines among hundreds, there is no harem, there is no system, the protagonist uses the knowledge of the original story to his advantage in a healthy way, the ending is perfect, there is nothing more I could ask for. I think this is the author's best story.
*MAJOR SPOILERS AHEAD* I just finished reading this all the way through. It was a real breath of fresh air to see the main character choose a different route than to enroll in UA as a student like so many other FF novels. As soon as he reincarnates the first thing he does is train his power for years and gets so overpowered that that the school takes notice and just directly hires him as a teacher. Very fun to read, doesn't force a harem subplot in there as he only falls in love with one woman, and he is considerate enough to beat many of the canon's major villains before the UA entrance exam even happens. But obviously not the main ones though. The only flaws, if I had to name any, are that he interacts with all of the teachers on a regular basis being a teacher himself but doesn't establish any deep personal connection with the main characters in class 1-A other than Aizawa. It's not like he doesn't talk to any of them at all, but I feel like there's some wasted potential there. Like the writer didn't give the students enough screen time, so to speak. You'll probably get what I mean when you read it. Other than that, it's an amazing read! Had me binge reading chapter after chapter when I had the time and I honestly wish I could find more books like this. keep up the great work author!
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I have nothung left to say, I read this tory thrice and it makes me laugh, cry, feel angry, and feel hppy, a truly good story makes you empathize, sympathize, and feel emotions. This story did just that.
A definite favorite. This is the first time I've bothered with a review and I think that speaks for itself.
This story is good, depicting the meaning of "overpowering strength + knowing who the enemy is from previous memories". with his strength he is indeed the strongest, although I still doubt whether his strength is a quirck or a devil's fruit 😅 because it only took 5 years to make him op and without side effects/weaknesses like what happens in every other quirck (maybe just stamina but I don't know ) well I like your story where op's power shows the meaning of op and it's not like other novels that suddenly make the mc become/nerf with his power 😅
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
It’s a pretty good story, a bit of things weren’t fully thought through, but they were fixed later so it isn’t a big deal. I like the MC’s personality for the most part (not being rude for no reason to everyone like I see some other fanfics do, especially MHA ones) A few problems though, one being that the MC was what 15-16 when he started dating Rumi (about 27)? Even if you wanna argue that the age of consent is 13 there, it’s obviously not normal or that accepted if many people give them weird looks due to the age difference, let alone how we view that in western countries. I understand that the MC was that age before he reincarnated, but she doesn’t know that, author said he would wait until MC was at least 18, then went back on his words very quickly. Also maybe this is what you’re here to read, but the MC is so op that he can beat anyone in the world with relative ease early on, there’s no suspense how a fight will end, makes the biggest and best parts of MHA (specifically the fighting) completly worthless since the MC will finish the fight in a chapter, add that with him knowing the entire plot of mha and you get rid of any interesting fight that could possibly happen unless the MC holds back a lot. Kind of kills my interest in reading Also this doesn’t really matter but why would most girls in class B “have a crush on him” when he’s been there for a day, maybe a few? Seems like a weird way for the author to get around people in the comments saying he’d be ugly lol
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It had an incredible start but then ending fell flat. Got too strong to fast in my opinion. Wish there was more of a struggle
................................ Just finished the novel. Thank you very much for creating a masterpiece. I'll check out the author's 2nd novel[img=recommend] ..................................
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Es un buen fanfic me gustó la representación del MC y su relación amorosa considero que es bueno aunque el MC es demasiado poderoso y no tiene rival lo cual lo vuelve un poco predecible al no tener un gran rival aparte de eso es un excelente fanfic y lo recomiendo mucho.
Light Human In MHA Humano ligero en MHA Una novela muy refrescante para leer, con un final igual de refrescante... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Достаточно неплохо, очень радует когда не используется система и гг выбирает много всяких способностей.....................................................................................................
wololo,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,............................................................................................
This story deserves nothing less than 5 stars, I recommend not reading any comments in the first 10 to 20 chapters, there were many readers complaining about silly things. This novel shines among hundreds, there is no harem, there is no system, the protagonist uses the knowledge of the original story to his advantage in a healthy way, the ending is perfect, there is nothing more I could ask for. I think this is the author's best story.
*MAJOR SPOILERS AHEAD* I just finished reading this all the way through. It was a real breath of fresh air to see the main character choose a different route than to enroll in UA as a student like so many other FF novels. As soon as he reincarnates the first thing he does is train his power for years and gets so overpowered that that the school takes notice and just directly hires him as a teacher. Very fun to read, doesn't force a harem subplot in there as he only falls in love with one woman, and he is considerate enough to beat many of the canon's major villains before the UA entrance exam even happens. But obviously not the main ones though. The only flaws, if I had to name any, are that he interacts with all of the teachers on a regular basis being a teacher himself but doesn't establish any deep personal connection with the main characters in class 1-A other than Aizawa. It's not like he doesn't talk to any of them at all, but I feel like there's some wasted potential there. Like the writer didn't give the students enough screen time, so to speak. You'll probably get what I mean when you read it. Other than that, it's an amazing read! Had me binge reading chapter after chapter when I had the time and I honestly wish I could find more books like this. keep up the great work author!
Revelar spoiler I have nothung left to say, I read this tory thrice and it makes me laugh, cry, feel angry, and feel hppy, a truly good story makes you empathize, sympathize, and feel emotions. This story did just that.
A definite favorite. This is the first time I've bothered with a review and I think that speaks for itself.
This story is good, depicting the meaning of "overpowering strength + knowing who the enemy is from previous memories". with his strength he is indeed the strongest, although I still doubt whether his strength is a quirck or a devil's fruit 😅 because it only took 5 years to make him op and without side effects/weaknesses like what happens in every other quirck (maybe just stamina but I don't know ) well I like your story where op's power shows the meaning of op and it's not like other novels that suddenly make the mc become/nerf with his power 😅
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
It’s a pretty good story, a bit of things weren’t fully thought through, but they were fixed later so it isn’t a big deal. I like the MC’s personality for the most part (not being rude for no reason to everyone like I see some other fanfics do, especially MHA ones) A few problems though, one being that the MC was what 15-16 when he started dating Rumi (about 27)? Even if you wanna argue that the age of consent is 13 there, it’s obviously not normal or that accepted if many people give them weird looks due to the age difference, let alone how we view that in western countries. I understand that the MC was that age before he reincarnated, but she doesn’t know that, author said he would wait until MC was at least 18, then went back on his words very quickly. Also maybe this is what you’re here to read, but the MC is so op that he can beat anyone in the world with relative ease early on, there’s no suspense how a fight will end, makes the biggest and best parts of MHA (specifically the fighting) completly worthless since the MC will finish the fight in a chapter, add that with him knowing the entire plot of mha and you get rid of any interesting fight that could possibly happen unless the MC holds back a lot. Kind of kills my interest in reading Also this doesn’t really matter but why would most girls in class B “have a crush on him” when he’s been there for a day, maybe a few? Seems like a weird way for the author to get around people in the comments saying he’d be ugly lol
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It had an incredible start but then ending fell flat. Got too strong to fast in my opinion. Wish there was more of a struggle
................................ Just finished the novel. Thank you very much for creating a masterpiece. I'll check out the author's 2nd novel[img=recommend] ..................................
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Es un buen fanfic me gustó la representación del MC y su relación amorosa considero que es bueno aunque el MC es demasiado poderoso y no tiene rival lo cual lo vuelve un poco predecible al no tener un gran rival aparte de eso es un excelente fanfic y lo recomiendo mucho.