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i remember seeing something similar with harry getting adams abilities and huracan. i remember seeing something similar with harry getting adams abilities and huracan. i remember seeing something similar with harry getting adams abilities and huracan.
It's a very good story but he does not really get the respect and fear a Campione always get. Like Paolo calling his name casually or even when he went to visit Paolo in his office, Paolo didn't even get up from his desk to greet him, it was just a "oh! you are here Harry.
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Now on a fair view i should point out my dislike for hogwarts and everything about it but i will try not to reflect that in this review. The author's writing is very good, havent seen a mistake so far, the world he involved were uniquely mixed. The characters and their interaction sucks to be completely honest, how he presented sirechz is extremely weird and inconsistent, my main view of sirechz is a strong siscon, which doesnt come in view in the story due to him described as a prideful villian, harry is rias's friend while dangerous, sirechz would never vote to eliminate him due to his pacifist nature seen in anime, also the old devils were his enemies that have been against them for centuries, working with them sounds stupid.
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you are no longer going to upload chapters? because you left me with too much emotion. please don't leave the story ;(;( ;( ;( ;( ;( ;( ;( ;(;( ;( ;( ;(
Solo puedo pedir que se publiquen más rápido y lo más rápido posible porque está de poca madre, y me tiene en suspenso y eso que ya no sé cuántas veces la e leído desde el inicio y no puede salir más capítulos
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Go update one of your other stories instead of this. It's not wanted. It's just a complete jumble. Save yourself the trouble.................
Really hope we get an update soon, and please don't drop this it's one of the most interesting ideas for a harry potter story in a long while
Good Good Good 👌😊📑📒📓📔📕📖📗📘📙📚📙📘📗📖📕📔📓📒📑📒📓📔📕📖📗📘📙📚📚📙📘📗📖📕📔📓📒📑🔖📚📙📘📗📕📖📔📓📒📑📒📓📔📕📗📗📘📙📚 This book is extremely good
It was so interesting I never seen a book so interesting and this one is a good read plus it will get you off the edge of your seat so read it I’m not gonna spoil it
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It's one of the best fanfics I've seen in a long time, unfortunately the updating stability sucks, I even thought it had been dropped by the author weeks ago.
okey i read upto chapter 4 .. the writing is good .. the crossover are also okey but you are underselling what a Champione is .. the Mages wait on hand foot to serve them .. they are 90% time worried that they would offend the Champione and in your story the guy from italian assosiation is talking to a Champione blandly like he is trying to hire Harry . Champion are like BabaYaga .. anyway i find that this storyline is not for me . i"ll just enjoy your other work .. anyway Happy New year to you and hope to read more of ylur stories
This is such a great and unique idea. More often than not fanfics that combine anime and western stories don't do very well or are never finished because the author can't tie them together very well. This is not one of those stories. The author did an amazing job of tying the three different worlds together in such a seamless way that it can take the story in any direction and tie it to plot points of 3 different worlds. Great job! I definitely recommend a read.
looking forward to seeing more..............................................................................................................
Good story good world building very lovely store😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Though it is an amalgamation of different worlds, so far, it was done in a way that makes the character more enjoyable. I, personally, was totally hooked by the story development and the interaction between the different worlds. I am looking forward to more posts. Author, please continue. I have a lot of expectations for this story.
Uso al mundo mágico para destruirlo y hacerlo ver como idiotas y después revolvió un montón de historias,. no entiendo la lógica de robarle y atacar aurores y Dumbledore líder de confederación internacional de magos. eso lo hace un delincuente y deberían buscarlo en el mundo mágico y muggle como lo hicieron con sirius black. te acusan de usar magia oscura y atacas a policias y robas una Varita que es sumamente importante para los magos y Arrancas, grita culpable por todos lados.
soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood ...................................................................................................................
Autor-san, venía a usted cómo un humilde lector con un par de ideas... Bueno, si sigue leyendo esto me alegra que estés interesado, pero llendo al grano: Mi idea principal es la siguiente: si autor-san leyó DxD y Percy Jackson, sabrá que en ambas historias abran enemigos y/o guerras formidables, por lo que yo estaba pensando en hacer lo siguiente: Yo creó que el protagonista no se unirá a la facción del diablo como demonio reencarnado, estoy seguro de que la iglesia no lo aceptará y no se que pasará con los caídos pero bueno, llendo al grano... ¿Por qué no hacer de la gran Bretaña mágica la "facción/reino" de harry? Ya que es un campione, es prácticamente un Rey... Por lo que necesita un reino ¿Y que mejor que el lugar que lo desprecio? A demás, en lo personal adoro ese tipo de capítulos en el que el protagonista consquista o arregla una ciudad/imperio owo
....................................i just like how u combine my two fav things......................😂😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
Great fanfic, I really enjoyed reading it. I hope you can keep the chapters coming. I really liked the story development so far. Keep up the good work!
Would you consider to continue Sasuke with control fanfic? Pretty please 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
I really tried man.but can't read it past fleur chapter.lots of plot holes ,cliches and cringiness.i don't know if I have a taste for this kind fic or not.but I predicted he will meet fleur in the world cup chap and her char will be different.so they can be compatible.but also going for Gabrielle....argh just too much cliches and plot holes.and feel like he has plot armour of both Harry and issei .u changed ot of characters behaviour especially Harry so much.it gives me the feeling of reading betrayed ash or neglected naruto fics.so gonna drop this.try to have less plot holes and cliches.good luck author 👍
i remember seeing something similar with harry getting adams abilities and huracan. i remember seeing something similar with harry getting adams abilities and huracan. i remember seeing something similar with harry getting adams abilities and huracan.
It's a very good story but he does not really get the respect and fear a Campione always get. Like Paolo calling his name casually or even when he went to visit Paolo in his office, Paolo didn't even get up from his desk to greet him, it was just a "oh! you are here Harry.
Revelar spoiler Now on a fair view i should point out my dislike for hogwarts and everything about it but i will try not to reflect that in this review. The author's writing is very good, havent seen a mistake so far, the world he involved were uniquely mixed. The characters and their interaction sucks to be completely honest, how he presented sirechz is extremely weird and inconsistent, my main view of sirechz is a strong siscon, which doesnt come in view in the story due to him described as a prideful villian, harry is rias's friend while dangerous, sirechz would never vote to eliminate him due to his pacifist nature seen in anime, also the old devils were his enemies that have been against them for centuries, working with them sounds stupid.
Revelar spoiler Not good Don't bother rewriting! -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Moremoremore more more more more more more more more more more more mMmmmmmmmmMmmmmooooOoooooOooooOorrrrRrrrrrrRrrrrrRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i wanna read whats next i wanna read whats next i wanna read whats next i wanna read whats next i wanna read whats next i wanna read whats next i wanna read whats next i wanna read whats next wanna read whats next wanna read whats next wanna read whats next wanna read whats next wanna read whats next wanna read whats next wanna read whats next wanna read whats next wanna read whats next wanna read whats next wanna read whats next wanna read whats next wanna read whats next wanna read whats next wanna read whats next wanna read whats next
you are no longer going to upload chapters? because you left me with too much emotion. please don't leave the story ;(;( ;( ;( ;( ;( ;( ;( ;(;( ;( ;( ;(
Solo puedo pedir que se publiquen más rápido y lo más rápido posible porque está de poca madre, y me tiene en suspenso y eso que ya no sé cuántas veces la e leído desde el inicio y no puede salir más capítulos
Revelar spoiler Go update one of your other stories instead of this. It's not wanted. It's just a complete jumble. Save yourself the trouble.................
Really hope we get an update soon, and please don't drop this it's one of the most interesting ideas for a harry potter story in a long while
Good Good Good 👌😊📑📒📓📔📕📖📗📘📙📚📙📘📗📖📕📔📓📒📑📒📓📔📕📖📗📘📙📚📚📙📘📗📖📕📔📓📒📑🔖📚📙📘📗📕📖📔📓📒📑📒📓📔📕📗📗📘📙📚 This book is extremely good
It was so interesting I never seen a book so interesting and this one is a good read plus it will get you off the edge of your seat so read it I’m not gonna spoil it
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It's one of the best fanfics I've seen in a long time, unfortunately the updating stability sucks, I even thought it had been dropped by the author weeks ago.
okey i read upto chapter 4 .. the writing is good .. the crossover are also okey but you are underselling what a Champione is .. the Mages wait on hand foot to serve them .. they are 90% time worried that they would offend the Champione and in your story the guy from italian assosiation is talking to a Champione blandly like he is trying to hire Harry . Champion are like BabaYaga .. anyway i find that this storyline is not for me . i"ll just enjoy your other work .. anyway Happy New year to you and hope to read more of ylur stories
This is such a great and unique idea. More often than not fanfics that combine anime and western stories don't do very well or are never finished because the author can't tie them together very well. This is not one of those stories. The author did an amazing job of tying the three different worlds together in such a seamless way that it can take the story in any direction and tie it to plot points of 3 different worlds. Great job! I definitely recommend a read.
looking forward to seeing more..............................................................................................................
Good story good world building very lovely store😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Though it is an amalgamation of different worlds, so far, it was done in a way that makes the character more enjoyable. I, personally, was totally hooked by the story development and the interaction between the different worlds. I am looking forward to more posts. Author, please continue. I have a lot of expectations for this story.
Uso al mundo mágico para destruirlo y hacerlo ver como idiotas y después revolvió un montón de historias,. no entiendo la lógica de robarle y atacar aurores y Dumbledore líder de confederación internacional de magos. eso lo hace un delincuente y deberían buscarlo en el mundo mágico y muggle como lo hicieron con sirius black. te acusan de usar magia oscura y atacas a policias y robas una Varita que es sumamente importante para los magos y Arrancas, grita culpable por todos lados.
soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood ...................................................................................................................
Autor-san, venía a usted cómo un humilde lector con un par de ideas... Bueno, si sigue leyendo esto me alegra que estés interesado, pero llendo al grano: Mi idea principal es la siguiente: si autor-san leyó DxD y Percy Jackson, sabrá que en ambas historias abran enemigos y/o guerras formidables, por lo que yo estaba pensando en hacer lo siguiente: Yo creó que el protagonista no se unirá a la facción del diablo como demonio reencarnado, estoy seguro de que la iglesia no lo aceptará y no se que pasará con los caídos pero bueno, llendo al grano... ¿Por qué no hacer de la gran Bretaña mágica la "facción/reino" de harry? Ya que es un campione, es prácticamente un Rey... Por lo que necesita un reino ¿Y que mejor que el lugar que lo desprecio? A demás, en lo personal adoro ese tipo de capítulos en el que el protagonista consquista o arregla una ciudad/imperio owo
....................................i just like how u combine my two fav things......................😂😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
Great fanfic, I really enjoyed reading it. I hope you can keep the chapters coming. I really liked the story development so far. Keep up the good work!
Would you consider to continue Sasuke with control fanfic? Pretty please 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
I really tried man.but can't read it past fleur chapter.lots of plot holes ,cliches and cringiness.i don't know if I have a taste for this kind fic or not.but I predicted he will meet fleur in the world cup chap and her char will be different.so they can be compatible.but also going for Gabrielle....argh just too much cliches and plot holes.and feel like he has plot armour of both Harry and issei .u changed ot of characters behaviour especially Harry so much.it gives me the feeling of reading betrayed ash or neglected naruto fics.so gonna drop this.try to have less plot holes and cliches.good luck author 👍
love the story sad it stoped