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Escribe una reseñaNot bad, could use a bit more proof reading! But liking the story so far! Character development is ok. main character is lacking in personality and side characters need some serious Overhaul to Make this book something i would spend money On coins to purchase privileges!
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i read till chapter 13 and lost millions of brain cells. no character background, no world background, no consistency of the character, level systems in not understandable most important the story is too random. not worth reading.
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interesting concept... but the author doesn't even have the mc follow the rules of the system , and the system itself keeps changing. honestly, it's not worth the read.
I've been reading pretty bad original novels written by people with horrible English lately. While the English is better here thanks to the translator, the story doesn't even compare. I'd rather read something with bad English than this. The story makes no sense. He leaves, and comes back the next chapter. Where did he go? What was he doing? All the other characters are idiots. "The flame spirit was gone so the lions attacked. They never considered that the flame spirit would just burn them all when he came back, so they gain nothing and lose everything. Their attack was super well coordinated and even though everyone else has a strength boost, they attacked the people who didn't get one. There's no reason they didn't get one." He has an indestructible clone that is useless and just gets forgotten. He says the clone can't save some people, but he can easily do so in literally five seconds. He strengthens to kill, gets 120m points from the kill, then had 20m in his status. Idiots argue it got spent on strengthening himself. That's not how time works, and even if you're right, the author is trash for not making the story easy to understand. So it's a moot point. The MC says a girl is smart, but she'd only said basic dialogue and looked pretty. She's basically his waifu after chapter like four, and her entire dialogue has basically been "I'll be your maid because you're fire." This could have been good, maybe, but either the translator is a world tier **** up with perfect English, or the source novel is just trash. I assume the later. In fact I'm insulted WN even put this forward, while dropping tons of novels that were actually good. I recommend everyone just read elsewhere. I dropped premium, and stopped giving them money. There's a few good novels I still read, but new stuff is very disappointing.
The concept is good. The divine spirit angle could be explored a little more and how he could of earned his godhead could have been more in depth instead of poof here it is.
it's so happy and sad . and i hop not be no said os ener and morty is the best hent in love 5AM I am ow and morty and Morty and Morty are you all wrong
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Bad... I cannot stress this anymore. it’s just bad. Translation isn’t that of amazing quality, at times you jjst don’t know what is going on in the least or why things happen as they do. Author just might have been very bad at math, maybe he skipped over something that explained why. Dunno. MC is very dumb, no development, no actual personality. Boring. Unexplained things happen for no particular reason. Story just feels super forced and uncontrolled. Amateurish. Nothing stands out.
Revelar spoilerThis is so similar to another novel that i read but it wasnt translated properly i dont remember the name but the storyline is practically the same
The novel is rushed, the world building isn't there, the characters including the MC are stale, just mention he/she is there and that's it. the numbers are all over the place, one chapter it said he gained 100 million energy points, next chapter he has 20million, one time he has some weird stats named flame intensity at level 2 the next one it is lvl9 or something... he gains powers without explaination or reason like he got "godly" seeds or something OUT OF NOWHERE and nothing to explain how the feck does the flame even have those things on it's person without burning it to the ground... plus the fact that they are special and can be planted into barren earth and somehow still bear food... I mean even fanfictions are written better than this novel honestly... This feels like a cheap novel with nothing interesting about it other than the initial concept.
The setup is cool, not gonna lie. However, what is up with this world building? Why does the author just pull things out of thin air? Why is the pacing so fast that it could outrun a cheetah on steroids? Why does every other chapter give me whiplash with how fast the MC changes personality?
People reviews make no sense and it makes me doubt if they even read this novel. This is very similar to Tensei Slime Isekai. Just a flame instead of a Slime. If you like fast-paced novels read this. But people are ridiculous expecting a lot from only 40 chapters! You shouldn't judge when it's still the first arc! Unless It's a very trashy novel then I get it. But this one isn't that bad. MC is reincarnated in a very primitive world and he's decisive to kill to try to maintain some balance.
numbers al over the place. no skills per evo despite it mentioning that. no mention of using points and points disappear. wish fulfillment. and what happened to the draw chance every 1000 faith points?
Wow! Power Fantasies are even getting added to the translation list these days, I mean they've always been there but it seems there popping up in batches these days, did they run out of quality novels to translate, or just unable to get the licensing rights?
A really trashy novel, dont bother reading it. So little is explained of the MC, his System, or the world in general. The whole thing reads like the author is just spewing out random plot and the readers are supposed to just know what he was thinking at the time. It's atrocious. In regards to the MC, he comes across as an actual MMO character. As in, someone logged into a random MMO then without care for the story, plot, or quests, just ran about killing things and showing off like they're a boss.
Ahhhh, is this how the original novel is or did the translation make it worse. The MC is stupid, the novel has so many question yet to be answer, and this novel is rush. They didn’t explain the MC action and didn’t explain about the world. For example, the MC evolved to a Yellow grade flame and the author still didn’t explain the difference between yellow and black grade, they just say yellow grade and expect you to go along with it.
Please follow what is written in the introduction i don't want to see flame transforming into human in chapter 2. Please i beg you... Keep being flame.. Please
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Nice novel author keep it up but we need update so please update it always will be waiting for the updates................................................
Has so much potential but the story is all over the place. Starts out nice enough, lays out the method of leveling and such. Then proceeds to discard the method and throws around big numbers with no real explanation of how he is leveling at all. Easily kills opponents who from the description should be plenty stronger than the mc. And at one point pulls either an inventory or item creation method out of no where with no explanation. If you’re just looking for a fun read and can ignore the flaws its alright but if you want consistency then go elsewhere.
sorry I dropped this after 2 chapters i really can't read it. no grammar errors but is this even a story? this isn't fhn to read, the system doesn't make sense, random rewards, etc.
IT IS NOT OKAY TO STEAL ANOTHER TRANSLATION PROJEKT. STOP DOING THIS. AND TRANSLATE THOSE YOU STOPPED OTHERS FROM TRANSLATING Hate this shit
1. No background story for the characters 2. Bland characters 3. Story development is just burn things, find/help people, get stronger/unlock things then repeat 4. Rules for the system is not explained and followed 5. The story is not using writing techniques to deepen the plot progression
Not bad, could use a bit more proof reading! But liking the story so far! Character development is ok. main character is lacking in personality and side characters need some serious Overhaul to Make this book something i would spend money On coins to purchase privileges!
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i read till chapter 13 and lost millions of brain cells. no character background, no world background, no consistency of the character, level systems in not understandable most important the story is too random. not worth reading.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
interesting concept... but the author doesn't even have the mc follow the rules of the system , and the system itself keeps changing. honestly, it's not worth the read.
I've been reading pretty bad original novels written by people with horrible English lately. While the English is better here thanks to the translator, the story doesn't even compare. I'd rather read something with bad English than this. The story makes no sense. He leaves, and comes back the next chapter. Where did he go? What was he doing? All the other characters are idiots. "The flame spirit was gone so the lions attacked. They never considered that the flame spirit would just burn them all when he came back, so they gain nothing and lose everything. Their attack was super well coordinated and even though everyone else has a strength boost, they attacked the people who didn't get one. There's no reason they didn't get one." He has an indestructible clone that is useless and just gets forgotten. He says the clone can't save some people, but he can easily do so in literally five seconds. He strengthens to kill, gets 120m points from the kill, then had 20m in his status. Idiots argue it got spent on strengthening himself. That's not how time works, and even if you're right, the author is trash for not making the story easy to understand. So it's a moot point. The MC says a girl is smart, but she'd only said basic dialogue and looked pretty. She's basically his waifu after chapter like four, and her entire dialogue has basically been "I'll be your maid because you're fire." This could have been good, maybe, but either the translator is a world tier **** up with perfect English, or the source novel is just trash. I assume the later. In fact I'm insulted WN even put this forward, while dropping tons of novels that were actually good. I recommend everyone just read elsewhere. I dropped premium, and stopped giving them money. There's a few good novels I still read, but new stuff is very disappointing.
The concept is good. The divine spirit angle could be explored a little more and how he could of earned his godhead could have been more in depth instead of poof here it is.
it's so happy and sad . and i hop not be no said os ener and morty is the best hent in love 5AM I am ow and morty and Morty and Morty are you all wrong
Revelar spoilerGoooooood gooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooood oooooooooooood oooooooooooood oooooooooooood goooooood gooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooood oooooooooooood
Bad... I cannot stress this anymore. it’s just bad. Translation isn’t that of amazing quality, at times you jjst don’t know what is going on in the least or why things happen as they do. Author just might have been very bad at math, maybe he skipped over something that explained why. Dunno. MC is very dumb, no development, no actual personality. Boring. Unexplained things happen for no particular reason. Story just feels super forced and uncontrolled. Amateurish. Nothing stands out.
Revelar spoilerThis is so similar to another novel that i read but it wasnt translated properly i dont remember the name but the storyline is practically the same
The novel is rushed, the world building isn't there, the characters including the MC are stale, just mention he/she is there and that's it. the numbers are all over the place, one chapter it said he gained 100 million energy points, next chapter he has 20million, one time he has some weird stats named flame intensity at level 2 the next one it is lvl9 or something... he gains powers without explaination or reason like he got "godly" seeds or something OUT OF NOWHERE and nothing to explain how the feck does the flame even have those things on it's person without burning it to the ground... plus the fact that they are special and can be planted into barren earth and somehow still bear food... I mean even fanfictions are written better than this novel honestly... This feels like a cheap novel with nothing interesting about it other than the initial concept.
The setup is cool, not gonna lie. However, what is up with this world building? Why does the author just pull things out of thin air? Why is the pacing so fast that it could outrun a cheetah on steroids? Why does every other chapter give me whiplash with how fast the MC changes personality?
People reviews make no sense and it makes me doubt if they even read this novel. This is very similar to Tensei Slime Isekai. Just a flame instead of a Slime. If you like fast-paced novels read this. But people are ridiculous expecting a lot from only 40 chapters! You shouldn't judge when it's still the first arc! Unless It's a very trashy novel then I get it. But this one isn't that bad. MC is reincarnated in a very primitive world and he's decisive to kill to try to maintain some balance.
numbers al over the place. no skills per evo despite it mentioning that. no mention of using points and points disappear. wish fulfillment. and what happened to the draw chance every 1000 faith points?
Wow! Power Fantasies are even getting added to the translation list these days, I mean they've always been there but it seems there popping up in batches these days, did they run out of quality novels to translate, or just unable to get the licensing rights?
A really trashy novel, dont bother reading it. So little is explained of the MC, his System, or the world in general. The whole thing reads like the author is just spewing out random plot and the readers are supposed to just know what he was thinking at the time. It's atrocious. In regards to the MC, he comes across as an actual MMO character. As in, someone logged into a random MMO then without care for the story, plot, or quests, just ran about killing things and showing off like they're a boss.
Ahhhh, is this how the original novel is or did the translation make it worse. The MC is stupid, the novel has so many question yet to be answer, and this novel is rush. They didn’t explain the MC action and didn’t explain about the world. For example, the MC evolved to a Yellow grade flame and the author still didn’t explain the difference between yellow and black grade, they just say yellow grade and expect you to go along with it.
Please follow what is written in the introduction i don't want to see flame transforming into human in chapter 2. Please i beg you... Keep being flame.. Please
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Nice novel author keep it up but we need update so please update it always will be waiting for the updates................................................
Has so much potential but the story is all over the place. Starts out nice enough, lays out the method of leveling and such. Then proceeds to discard the method and throws around big numbers with no real explanation of how he is leveling at all. Easily kills opponents who from the description should be plenty stronger than the mc. And at one point pulls either an inventory or item creation method out of no where with no explanation. If you’re just looking for a fun read and can ignore the flaws its alright but if you want consistency then go elsewhere.
sorry I dropped this after 2 chapters i really can't read it. no grammar errors but is this even a story? this isn't fhn to read, the system doesn't make sense, random rewards, etc.
IT IS NOT OKAY TO STEAL ANOTHER TRANSLATION PROJEKT. STOP DOING THIS. AND TRANSLATE THOSE YOU STOPPED OTHERS FROM TRANSLATING Hate this shit
1. No background story for the characters 2. Bland characters 3. Story development is just burn things, find/help people, get stronger/unlock things then repeat 4. Rules for the system is not explained and followed 5. The story is not using writing techniques to deepen the plot progression