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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Honestly loved this when it was ongoing as the mc was op and I couldn't see where this was going and as its been dropped I can see the auther also didn't know where it was going
I am sorry for this Author, the "spaw" is for zhanye, some brazilians didn't watch the full video. I know my apology is not much, just ignore or report the comment that are disturbing you. I didn't read your novel but I want you to have a great future.
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
Writing Quality: Just slightly above average; not to the level of mtl, but not as high as certain masterpieces too. Stability of Updates: Similar to above, as much as I know. Story Development: Kinda bland, and there are good parts and bad ones. 3 stars should be fair. Character Design: The OCs aren't bad, however, some characters act too out of character sometimes. World Background: Average. Good for a fanfiction, but not as good as certain masterpieces.
Hurm, it's hard to say this... But it seems that your chapter seems bland more than previous one when he's in main world? Or is it just to build suspend for the main event, the competition? Anyway, good luck mate..
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It is a good story . Even if he/she/they put too muck anime atory in this fanfic, it is well done. Not too much side plot, good character development, continous story, and not too much inner monolog and plot telling just too get to the point. Overall WELL DONE👌
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This is great author san stay safe and be healthy so we you can always update hehehe {:00000:}{:00000:}{:00000:}{:00000:}{:00000:}{:00000:}{:00000:}
good story for me but hey everyone is different.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
[Translated into the Portuguese to English translator.] I don't even know why I read this story, it simply boiled down to the author writing a lot of forced material and a basic plot of 0. It's nothing more than a story where the protagonist gains new powers in each chapter, ultimately being a empty story.
SHAMELESS PROMOTION! NAME: THE GRANDSON'S JOURNEY Who was responsible for dissapearing underwears of girl's hostel? Which thief has hundred names? Why does all dog howl at moon at midnight? Who rob the ATM near the police station? Why does old ladies faints when they see Johnny depp?Why does women underwear has red spot? TO KNOW THE ANSWERS, BE SURE TO CHECK MY NOVEL!!!
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the writing is ****ed up bro, everything else is good Maybe you could yse diffetent words or stuff not that i am great myself but please ☺ .
Noice but i don't really like you add I Want to Eat Your Pancreas. because sakura ....hmmm...what do i say.....oh i don't really like the character yup that its.
its so bad that i stopped here(chap 18) cause i feel like this is just another chinese novel that baited me(fck i tired of this cliche/click bait duh) and didnt show what his ability got everyday ,so that when he fighting or do hero-thing then checking in inventory will always said "isnt there something in inventory" or "Why there nothing that help in inventory" ah yeah nerfing just for plot. if u do just for fun then better go all out. whatever u say bruh delete this. nvm but thanks
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The plot improves as the story progresses..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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your concept story bit cliche...but still okay...i'd hope he not someone fvck every girl he met...and i'd really hope too any girl who met him not love at first sight...thats too cliche...every fan-fict already use that
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Honestly loved this when it was ongoing as the mc was op and I couldn't see where this was going and as its been dropped I can see the auther also didn't know where it was going
I am sorry for this Author, the "spaw" is for zhanye, some brazilians didn't watch the full video. I know my apology is not much, just ignore or report the comment that are disturbing you. I didn't read your novel but I want you to have a great future.
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
Writing Quality: Just slightly above average; not to the level of mtl, but not as high as certain masterpieces too. Stability of Updates: Similar to above, as much as I know. Story Development: Kinda bland, and there are good parts and bad ones. 3 stars should be fair. Character Design: The OCs aren't bad, however, some characters act too out of character sometimes. World Background: Average. Good for a fanfiction, but not as good as certain masterpieces.
Hurm, it's hard to say this... But it seems that your chapter seems bland more than previous one when he's in main world? Or is it just to build suspend for the main event, the competition? Anyway, good luck mate..
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It is a good story . Even if he/she/they put too muck anime atory in this fanfic, it is well done. Not too much side plot, good character development, continous story, and not too much inner monolog and plot telling just too get to the point. Overall WELL DONE👌
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This is great author san stay safe and be healthy so we you can always update hehehe {:00000:}{:00000:}{:00000:}{:00000:}{:00000:}{:00000:}{:00000:}
good story for me but hey everyone is different.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
[Translated into the Portuguese to English translator.] I don't even know why I read this story, it simply boiled down to the author writing a lot of forced material and a basic plot of 0. It's nothing more than a story where the protagonist gains new powers in each chapter, ultimately being a empty story.
SHAMELESS PROMOTION! NAME: THE GRANDSON'S JOURNEY Who was responsible for dissapearing underwears of girl's hostel? Which thief has hundred names? Why does all dog howl at moon at midnight? Who rob the ATM near the police station? Why does old ladies faints when they see Johnny depp?Why does women underwear has red spot? TO KNOW THE ANSWERS, BE SURE TO CHECK MY NOVEL!!!
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summons spoiled the story for me summons spoiled the story for me summons spoiled the story for me summons spoiled the story for me summons spoiled the story for me summons spoiled the story for me
The Title SceAms OP.. ........................................................ ........................................................ ........................................................
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the writing is ****ed up bro, everything else is good Maybe you could yse diffetent words or stuff not that i am great myself but please ☺ .
Noice but i don't really like you add I Want to Eat Your Pancreas. because sakura ....hmmm...what do i say.....oh i don't really like the character yup that its.
its so bad that i stopped here(chap 18) cause i feel like this is just another chinese novel that baited me(fck i tired of this cliche/click bait duh) and didnt show what his ability got everyday ,so that when he fighting or do hero-thing then checking in inventory will always said "isnt there something in inventory" or "Why there nothing that help in inventory" ah yeah nerfing just for plot. if u do just for fun then better go all out. whatever u say bruh delete this. nvm but thanks
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Revelar spoiler The plot improves as the story progresses..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Revelar spoiler your concept story bit cliche...but still okay...i'd hope he not someone fvck every girl he met...and i'd really hope too any girl who met him not love at first sight...thats too cliche...every fan-fict already use that
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