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Honestly story is good but writing is horrible. Names are misplaced a lot, conversations are messed up you need to read multiple times to understand it and announces are messed up he/she/they/him (you won't understand who author is referring to).
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I love this book it’s a different to other cultivation books in certain aspects. I hope the author isn’t gonna drop the novel and start posting chapters again
Let me give you All Five Stars for making This Book 😍📖🍻 Thanks for the Works 🍟📖🍔 Please Continue up until the very end 😆📖🍎
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
it is a story with great potential, but because of the grammar errors and how it is written, it makes it hard to understand what is being said. if it is able to be edited and redone to an extent, it would be a pretty decent novel .
SO I JUST READ THE DESCRIPTION AND NOTHING ABOUT THIS BOOK SAYS ANYTHING ABOUT A WHITE DRAGON... IM NOT SAYING THE BOOK IS BAD IR ANYTHING BUT IF U WHERE TO AT LEAST SAY SOMETHING THAT PERTAINS TO THE WHITE DRAGON THEN IT WOULD BE WAY BETTER AND THIS WAY WE CAN KINDA KNOW WITCH WAY THE BOOK WILL GO... JUST SAYING.. LIKE I SAID IM NOT SAYING ANYTHING BAD ABOUT THE BOOK JUST THE TITLE AND THE DESCRIPTION IS WEIRD!! AND DONT MIND THE CAPS MY PHONE IS BROKE!!
It fell?................................................................................................................................... ............... ......................... ..................
top 20 of my best novels mc is strong and intelligent, the heroine is strong but gets a bit carried away by the mc with her techniques and pills at the end the mc still has a second wife but that doesn't change anything, it's is even better, I advise you to read it
Useless review, only to give a rate: I loved this novel. Is like a chinese novel but western, is like a system novel but without system. There are others novels like this but i falled in love with this.
Look, the novel is fine, but it sucks that every so often it tries to hide, whether it's erasing people's memories for such simple things, or simply telling others not to say anything, and above all for things that don't even have to to do with the cultivation, it is not for nothing but that it is hidden only makes the novel boring. In addition, the characters tend to draw conclusions without any foundation, which makes them irritable and annoying, and finally, I come with the premise of an apocalypse novel, but I don't know how many chapters I have to wait for it to start, almost 100 chapters and nothing has happened, in addition to zero interesting plots.
Well, i like it, but i read till 203 when i have time i will read the next chapters but can anyone's tell me who are in the mc harem? Beside that this have a great story, the world development is fine and the romance between the MC and the FML is good.
Is this story dropped/ Hiatus or smthing like that? I liked it till chapter 150, but when i checked how many chaps were available i saw that no chaps were posted for 3 months. soo im conflicted, ill continue reading if author wont drop as i saw that the apocalypse had just started from this arc which is ongoing rn . hyped!
Revelar spoiler
Yo can the author just do a mass release rather releasing chapter here and there if it not a everyday release. I would rather wait a few weeks and get a mass release then not getting constant update.
I tribute 2 monsters to summon the legendary blue eyes white dragon go obliterate
it was good at beginning but later on the quality of plot is decreasing, and the mc is now like a simp to his girlfriend, ingrid
It is phenomenal novel, perfect execution of drama, action & adventure. I like how writer writes about ingrates & cheated people getting justice they deserve, and this not mc doing but our writer finishing them off in worst ways. THANKS FOR THIS MASTERPIECE 🤩😍
I only read 50 chapters and these story is quite good but i dont understand one thing? the mc dude came back to present time after thousands of years and instead of going to see his parents he told her to wait for 30 days? it was already shown that he host his family in his previous life and instead of going to see them immediately he waited for 30 days and other reviewers are like 'Mc is not naive but he's soo good with his family'
I really enjoyed the story for the characters until recently. The few updated there are, less than 6-8 chapters a month for three months so you have to pay full privelege for 20 minutes of reading, all seem to be kind of pointless. The story hasn’t gone anywhere in a while and seems to have devolved into a few irrelevant plot lines and the main character slapping some faces.
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Came back to this novel after a few months and it barely got 30+ chapters in. I won't lie the author's update stability is very discouraging. Good novel, essentially dropped for me.
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Im on the wayyyyyyyy free starrss ....................................................................................................................................
This story is great and quite entertaining dear author, keep it up. In my opinion you shouldn't make her a harem - because the genre isn't really to my liking. I feel sorry for Nora for all the time I've searched and tried to find Luan over the years. But many times, even if you have been loving and yearning for a person for years, it does not mean that the other person will have reciprocal feelings for you. The truth is that I really like the couple Ingrid and Luan, it would be a bit shocking for me the integration of an additional person in this case Nora. I would suggest that you make Nora manage to resign herself and she can turn the page. Because maybe he just didn't stop loving and waiting for Luan due to the fact that he died unexpectedly and he couldn't have closure in their relationship which at that point was <ambiguous> because according to Luan himself he had already resigned himself to his love for her as a woman and changed it to love her as a sister. So if he can do it... so can she. And according to what I read, it seems that Luan has a friend/rival from her old life... you could make Nora fall in love with him over time since, according to what was implied, he already reached the seventh order and to be a rival of Luan must be someone incredibly powerful. So out there there might be a chance that Nora finds her happy ending. That's my honest opinion and it's not like I expect you to take it into account. Removing the #harem or #noharem... I really like your story. You have talent keep writing and bringing your ideas to life. 😍✨
Gosto muito dessa obra, faz um tempinho que eu lir ela mas realmente é ótima,🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷
On okayish book with a good plot and is better than most cultivation books with like an fallen immortal or something and I like the fact the man has a disciple (ignore the last part I just wanted to post this review)
Revelar spoiler
Was good other than a few grammar things. I just finished reading the "completed" story and the last 100 or so chapters you gave up. You have multiple chapters for things that didn't need multiple chapters and could have just been a longer chapter to keep it consistent. The ending isn't really an ending of a book, more like a chapter. I don't mind harem novels, but if you're going to create one, don't have the MC do favorite one member by doing a technique that can kill if betrayal happens on either end, then have him split himself for the other harem member. It seemed like you wanted to have a single relationship, then changed it to harem mid writing the book.
Honestly story is good but writing is horrible. Names are misplaced a lot, conversations are messed up you need to read multiple times to understand it and announces are messed up he/she/they/him (you won't understand who author is referring to).
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I love this book it’s a different to other cultivation books in certain aspects. I hope the author isn’t gonna drop the novel and start posting chapters again
Let me give you All Five Stars for making This Book 😍📖🍻 Thanks for the Works 🍟📖🍔 Please Continue up until the very end 😆📖🍎
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
it is a story with great potential, but because of the grammar errors and how it is written, it makes it hard to understand what is being said. if it is able to be edited and redone to an extent, it would be a pretty decent novel .
SO I JUST READ THE DESCRIPTION AND NOTHING ABOUT THIS BOOK SAYS ANYTHING ABOUT A WHITE DRAGON... IM NOT SAYING THE BOOK IS BAD IR ANYTHING BUT IF U WHERE TO AT LEAST SAY SOMETHING THAT PERTAINS TO THE WHITE DRAGON THEN IT WOULD BE WAY BETTER AND THIS WAY WE CAN KINDA KNOW WITCH WAY THE BOOK WILL GO... JUST SAYING.. LIKE I SAID IM NOT SAYING ANYTHING BAD ABOUT THE BOOK JUST THE TITLE AND THE DESCRIPTION IS WEIRD!! AND DONT MIND THE CAPS MY PHONE IS BROKE!!
It fell?................................................................................................................................... ............... ......................... ..................
top 20 of my best novels mc is strong and intelligent, the heroine is strong but gets a bit carried away by the mc with her techniques and pills at the end the mc still has a second wife but that doesn't change anything, it's is even better, I advise you to read it
Useless review, only to give a rate: I loved this novel. Is like a chinese novel but western, is like a system novel but without system. There are others novels like this but i falled in love with this.
Look, the novel is fine, but it sucks that every so often it tries to hide, whether it's erasing people's memories for such simple things, or simply telling others not to say anything, and above all for things that don't even have to to do with the cultivation, it is not for nothing but that it is hidden only makes the novel boring. In addition, the characters tend to draw conclusions without any foundation, which makes them irritable and annoying, and finally, I come with the premise of an apocalypse novel, but I don't know how many chapters I have to wait for it to start, almost 100 chapters and nothing has happened, in addition to zero interesting plots.
Well, i like it, but i read till 203 when i have time i will read the next chapters but can anyone's tell me who are in the mc harem? Beside that this have a great story, the world development is fine and the romance between the MC and the FML is good.
Is this story dropped/ Hiatus or smthing like that? I liked it till chapter 150, but when i checked how many chaps were available i saw that no chaps were posted for 3 months. soo im conflicted, ill continue reading if author wont drop as i saw that the apocalypse had just started from this arc which is ongoing rn . hyped!
Revelar spoiler Yo can the author just do a mass release rather releasing chapter here and there if it not a everyday release. I would rather wait a few weeks and get a mass release then not getting constant update.
I tribute 2 monsters to summon the legendary blue eyes white dragon go obliterate
it was good at beginning but later on the quality of plot is decreasing, and the mc is now like a simp to his girlfriend, ingrid
It is phenomenal novel, perfect execution of drama, action & adventure. I like how writer writes about ingrates & cheated people getting justice they deserve, and this not mc doing but our writer finishing them off in worst ways. THANKS FOR THIS MASTERPIECE 🤩😍
I only read 50 chapters and these story is quite good but i dont understand one thing? the mc dude came back to present time after thousands of years and instead of going to see his parents he told her to wait for 30 days? it was already shown that he host his family in his previous life and instead of going to see them immediately he waited for 30 days and other reviewers are like 'Mc is not naive but he's soo good with his family'
I really enjoyed the story for the characters until recently. The few updated there are, less than 6-8 chapters a month for three months so you have to pay full privelege for 20 minutes of reading, all seem to be kind of pointless. The story hasn’t gone anywhere in a while and seems to have devolved into a few irrelevant plot lines and the main character slapping some faces.
It has Chinese vibes but in the acceptable range This novel has potential 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Came back to this novel after a few months and it barely got 30+ chapters in. I won't lie the author's update stability is very discouraging. Good novel, essentially dropped for me.
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Im on the wayyyyyyyy free starrss ....................................................................................................................................
This story is great and quite entertaining dear author, keep it up. In my opinion you shouldn't make her a harem - because the genre isn't really to my liking. I feel sorry for Nora for all the time I've searched and tried to find Luan over the years. But many times, even if you have been loving and yearning for a person for years, it does not mean that the other person will have reciprocal feelings for you. The truth is that I really like the couple Ingrid and Luan, it would be a bit shocking for me the integration of an additional person in this case Nora. I would suggest that you make Nora manage to resign herself and she can turn the page. Because maybe he just didn't stop loving and waiting for Luan due to the fact that he died unexpectedly and he couldn't have closure in their relationship which at that point was <ambiguous> because according to Luan himself he had already resigned himself to his love for her as a woman and changed it to love her as a sister. So if he can do it... so can she. And according to what I read, it seems that Luan has a friend/rival from her old life... you could make Nora fall in love with him over time since, according to what was implied, he already reached the seventh order and to be a rival of Luan must be someone incredibly powerful. So out there there might be a chance that Nora finds her happy ending. That's my honest opinion and it's not like I expect you to take it into account. Removing the #harem or #noharem... I really like your story. You have talent keep writing and bringing your ideas to life. 😍✨
Gosto muito dessa obra, faz um tempinho que eu lir ela mas realmente é ótima,🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷
On okayish book with a good plot and is better than most cultivation books with like an fallen immortal or something and I like the fact the man has a disciple (ignore the last part I just wanted to post this review)
Revelar spoiler
Was good other than a few grammar things. I just finished reading the "completed" story and the last 100 or so chapters you gave up. You have multiple chapters for things that didn't need multiple chapters and could have just been a longer chapter to keep it consistent. The ending isn't really an ending of a book, more like a chapter. I don't mind harem novels, but if you're going to create one, don't have the MC do favorite one member by doing a technique that can kill if betrayal happens on either end, then have him split himself for the other harem member. It seemed like you wanted to have a single relationship, then changed it to harem mid writing the book.