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good Book................. àaàaassssssdghjkgvfhhhggvvvvvbhhjjjbbbbbvghhhhhhhhhgggvvggghhhghhhjjii if gghv did Riddick odi is so idk n Shiv adi iv dj if atlast 140 ..
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This is an incredible story that takes common tropes in these types of stories and gives them a very unique twist, the humor is good too; Unless you're one of those offended of s**t who wander around wanting to correct everything according to their way of seeing the world. Those who are not able to take a slightly risque joke and are dedicated to criticizing the story based on this, instead of the plot that although it seems a bit repetitive has very unique and interesting twists. Perhaps the strongest point in the story is the system, which forces the MC to work hard for any gain, with the fabulous way of taking tropes in a new light as second place.
Une histoire interessante d'une transmigration au premier abord cliché... Dans le but de démonter ces clichés ! (veuillez ignorer les accusations de racisme, elles sont basées sur une seule phrase mal tournée par l'auteur ayant depuis été réécrite...) Le protagoniste doit gérer le caractère et la personnalité méprisables du précédent propriétaire du corps, ainsi que sa relation avec une vraie famille complète avec ses qualités et ses défaults au lieu d'être orphelin avec éventuellement un petit(e) frère/soeur comme dans 90% des novels du genre... Le résultat est à la fois comique et sérieux dans le démontage du genre, sans pour autant oublier d'avancer dans l'histoire doucement et régulièrement. Aucun risque de s'ennuyer, une perle à lire absolument !
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I hope that this book will be selected is much better than similar novels (the mc has to find out how to improve his skeleton himself, and not, as in others, the system gives step by step what you need to do to improve the pet)
Really don't know why so many people are giving such a low rating just because of one vaguely racist comment, which had already been removed from the story. I wonder if some of these people had actually read the story before they reviewed or liked the reviews saying that this novel is racist and decided to ditch the novel. Personally, I feel this is an interesting read. I could see a lot of potential in the story and character development, and I really like the comedic way the story is delivered. I feel that this book is much better than some other books that get selected and I really hope to see what happens next in the novel.
This novel is exactly the type that I would be interested in with the easy-going and comedy feel. I do hope that this novel will get selected as I would love to know what will happen next.
Quick question is the story actually good ignoring the racist parts or is it just bad djisjdjdjdkddjdjdjjdjdjdjdkdkdkkdkdkdkskdkskskskskskkeke
im gonna have to make this a one star after reading dio99 review go read it for yourself and boycott this rascist novel so that it may get dropped
4cgjgkdmv,d,fh.hr,fu,gu,f.fh,f.ff.fu.fu.ug.fu,vu.fh,fu.uf,bjvu,vu,fhfhvh,.vc,vh,c.v.,vc.h,vh.gh,fh..fh,f.,r.uf,ug,c,f.fh,.hf,v,ch,fh,fh,dh,d,ch,f,,hf,your,fh,v,v,fy,fh.fy,fy,, h,hc,ryr
the book was great and awesome and the character development was good also and the story development was amazing and we'll made and the writing quality was closer and nice
it is good book I say especially character development, it has huge potential to become one of best novel and I personally think it one of only summoner theme novel in webnovel which has great quality.
Pretty good read, I think the overall story could use some work. But it certainly has a lot of potential. I will admit it does have some similarities with Pokemon but not in any big way. I like what you've done thus far and hope to read more.
overall good need further chapter to find out how awesome it is.......................... hopefully it will keep up the quality and introduce new elements
MC doesn’t face slap characters, characters face slap themselves. Growing his beasts? He rather buys it! This novel doesn’t follow the usual routine. It’s not cliche at all. I love this. It's been a very satisfying read. Flaw: There is no exact closure to Arcs or Characters. Nothing conclusive. Just expect slow development. But I really love the Comedy-Style.
Apart from that one racist part, its good, The mc is actually working for his power and the story build is close too perfect, just wish it can be updated more often
Don't let the poor ratings fool you. A bunch of people are made about a single sentence that is vaguely racist (which was removed) and are judging the whole novel based on that. So far this criticism is completely at odds with the rest of the novel's contents. This is a fun, wholesome novel similar to other beast cultivation novels and I recommend giving it a try.
Disgusting and racist Disgusting and racist Disgusting and racist Disgusting and racist Disgusting and racist Disgusting and racist Disgusting and racist
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Trash story. Not going to get picked anyways. xx xxxxxxxxxxwcefwfwcacwfwfwfwfwfwf wcwfwcwcscscsvscsfwfwcwcwcwfwfwcwfwvwvwvwvwvwvwvegef
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Although I gave a high review, I'm here to vent my feelings and a little detailed spoilers. Once upon a time, there was a protagonist template who for the sake of his first love, go on a template journey of wooing girls and increasing strength with an op grandpa. Later, he finished his journey and dumped the 99 women he tricked to live a quiet and normal life with his first love who knew nothing. And the story starts with the son of this seemingly protagonist template. At the start, mc's cheat is not too op, mc is very hardworking, typical pet evolution, cute interactions and face slapping. Mc encountering problems half his own and the other left by his dad, his struggles and journey is comedic and interesting. Here's the reason why I really respect the author. As he encounter more and more problems and unveil the secrets layer by layer, the vibe of the story slowly changed before I knew it. With allies that keep mc in the dark about everything or were straight up traitors, and the enemies who keep pulling him deeper into the currents, there are fewer and fewer people alive that mc can trust. The story keep getting darker and I just realized why I was feeling depressed these two days. Some won't understand but I'm the type of reader who engross myself into the character's feelings and here's what I felt. A person suddenly arrived a foreign world in the body of another person and now having a family that really isn't his. He felt very akward and conscious about this family and try to bury all his energy in the wish of the previous owner of the body. Of course his own ambition should also be there. He tried to distance himself from the new family due to the akwardness but it backfired and made him guilty. At that time, the words and actions of the seemingly ordinary but tightly bonded family touched him and he started accepting his new ordinary family. A little after that, he got to know a person who let him in about a secret of his father. And he who realized that the touching words of his ordinary father has lost their meanings try to self deny and swallow all his questions. He got a parental figure who cares about him but also use him and he let it be cuz the other person's genuine concerns for him and the emotional debts his father owe her. And then, he lost a friend. Troubles approaches him half of which are his father's fault and people who protects him keeps getting harmed. During the midst of allies who keep trying to keep him out of the secrets and enemies who sink him into the vortex of undercurrents people around him were either traitors or got harmed again and again. The chapter I'm currently reading? The heroine is dead. The friends dead. Mc ain't given time to prepare mentally and the tragedies and enemies keep appearing. Now, mc can't even trust people who he thought were parental figures and friend who he thought died. The story goes darker and darker and I can't find the elements of the story that make me laugh an smile anymore. Anyway, people who like depressing novels can go read this. I dropped this now.
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Ok its a little boring but at some parts its really funmy which is the reason that I am still reading this rn but idk hiw long the comedy can keep me here
Good book. SiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuUuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuUuuuuuuuuuuuUuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuiuuuuuuuuuuuu
the story is pretty good, not as good as the elite Magus academy bit way better than trash like the mech army... the story is above Average and is extremely good in the regular beast taming tropes! the side characters are Intersesting but kinda annoying-ish. do give it a try it's worth checking out!
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A boy gets reincarnated in a world where summons are a thing. He wakes up to find that the summon his predecessor summoned was one of the trashiest of trash that you could summon— a skeleton. Unresigned, he plans to train the skeleton to become stronger by devising a training manual for it with the help of his golden finger. Along the way, this ‘average-looking’ boy will encounter many set backs and will overcome them along side his trusty skeleton and his gold finger system.
Yes , i know this story have racism however , the reviews are meant to be constructive.... not a place to complain. If you can ignore the racism, you will be brought into a world which monster pet evolution couldnt achieve. Mc is actually trying hard to achieve his goals of upgrading the monsters. More time and effort needs to been dedictated for the mc to upgrade his monsters.THIS IS NOT FOR PEOPLE WHO LIKE VERY OP MC WITH NO HARDWORK(MONSTER PARADISE) This is one of the best trial read i have read and its rating is getting destroyed by ONE racist comment . Ffs ppl
pretty good all things considered, a bit of some words that arent PC but oh well, I honestly enjoy the little bit of vulgar speech as being to polite or nice is just a total turn off. I'm enjoying the pacing and would definitely recommend giving it a read. Story is aight but I'm mostly here to see more funny ways this dude can trigger people🤣🤣🤣🤣
I say this novel is pretty good if you look over the racism and fat-shaming so XPXPPXPXPXPPXPXXPXPPXPXPPXPXPXPPXPXPXPXPPXPXPXPXPPXPXPXPPXPXPXPXPPXPXPPXPXPPXPXPPXPXPXP
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please bring this back, I love the story and those hating on it are upset because he makes fun of his lovable fat friend when he really doesnt want to since its muscle.memory from the bodies previous memory. it's a fun story that I'm fully enjoying and really want brought back!!!
Revelar spoiler good Book................. àaàaassssssdghjkgvfhhhggvvvvvbhhjjjbbbbbvghhhhhhhhhgggvvggghhhghhhjjii if gghv did Riddick odi is so idk n Shiv adi iv dj if atlast 140 ..
Revelar spoiler This is an incredible story that takes common tropes in these types of stories and gives them a very unique twist, the humor is good too; Unless you're one of those offended of s**t who wander around wanting to correct everything according to their way of seeing the world. Those who are not able to take a slightly risque joke and are dedicated to criticizing the story based on this, instead of the plot that although it seems a bit repetitive has very unique and interesting twists. Perhaps the strongest point in the story is the system, which forces the MC to work hard for any gain, with the fabulous way of taking tropes in a new light as second place.
Une histoire interessante d'une transmigration au premier abord cliché... Dans le but de démonter ces clichés ! (veuillez ignorer les accusations de racisme, elles sont basées sur une seule phrase mal tournée par l'auteur ayant depuis été réécrite...) Le protagoniste doit gérer le caractère et la personnalité méprisables du précédent propriétaire du corps, ainsi que sa relation avec une vraie famille complète avec ses qualités et ses défaults au lieu d'être orphelin avec éventuellement un petit(e) frère/soeur comme dans 90% des novels du genre... Le résultat est à la fois comique et sérieux dans le démontage du genre, sans pour autant oublier d'avancer dans l'histoire doucement et régulièrement. Aucun risque de s'ennuyer, une perle à lire absolument !
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I hope that this book will be selected is much better than similar novels (the mc has to find out how to improve his skeleton himself, and not, as in others, the system gives step by step what you need to do to improve the pet)
Really don't know why so many people are giving such a low rating just because of one vaguely racist comment, which had already been removed from the story. I wonder if some of these people had actually read the story before they reviewed or liked the reviews saying that this novel is racist and decided to ditch the novel. Personally, I feel this is an interesting read. I could see a lot of potential in the story and character development, and I really like the comedic way the story is delivered. I feel that this book is much better than some other books that get selected and I really hope to see what happens next in the novel.
This novel is exactly the type that I would be interested in with the easy-going and comedy feel. I do hope that this novel will get selected as I would love to know what will happen next.
Quick question is the story actually good ignoring the racist parts or is it just bad djisjdjdjdkddjdjdjjdjdjdjdkdkdkkdkdkdkskdkskskskskskkeke
im gonna have to make this a one star after reading dio99 review go read it for yourself and boycott this rascist novel so that it may get dropped
4cgjgkdmv,d,fh.hr,fu,gu,f.fh,f.ff.fu.fu.ug.fu,vu.fh,fu.uf,bjvu,vu,fhfhvh,.vc,vh,c.v.,vc.h,vh.gh,fh..fh,f.,r.uf,ug,c,f.fh,.hf,v,ch,fh,fh,dh,d,ch,f,,hf,your,fh,v,v,fy,fh.fy,fy,, h,hc,ryr
the book was great and awesome and the character development was good also and the story development was amazing and we'll made and the writing quality was closer and nice
it is good book I say especially character development, it has huge potential to become one of best novel and I personally think it one of only summoner theme novel in webnovel which has great quality.
Pretty good read, I think the overall story could use some work. But it certainly has a lot of potential. I will admit it does have some similarities with Pokemon but not in any big way. I like what you've done thus far and hope to read more.
overall good need further chapter to find out how awesome it is.......................... hopefully it will keep up the quality and introduce new elements
MC doesn’t face slap characters, characters face slap themselves. Growing his beasts? He rather buys it! This novel doesn’t follow the usual routine. It’s not cliche at all. I love this. It's been a very satisfying read. Flaw: There is no exact closure to Arcs or Characters. Nothing conclusive. Just expect slow development. But I really love the Comedy-Style.
Apart from that one racist part, its good, The mc is actually working for his power and the story build is close too perfect, just wish it can be updated more often
Don't let the poor ratings fool you. A bunch of people are made about a single sentence that is vaguely racist (which was removed) and are judging the whole novel based on that. So far this criticism is completely at odds with the rest of the novel's contents. This is a fun, wholesome novel similar to other beast cultivation novels and I recommend giving it a try.
Disgusting and racist Disgusting and racist Disgusting and racist Disgusting and racist Disgusting and racist Disgusting and racist Disgusting and racist
Revelar spoiler Trash story. Not going to get picked anyways. xx xxxxxxxxxxwcefwfwcacwfwfwfwfwfwf wcwfwcwcscscsvscsfwfwcwcwcwfwfwcwfwvwvwvwvwvwvwvegef
Revelar spoiler Although I gave a high review, I'm here to vent my feelings and a little detailed spoilers. Once upon a time, there was a protagonist template who for the sake of his first love, go on a template journey of wooing girls and increasing strength with an op grandpa. Later, he finished his journey and dumped the 99 women he tricked to live a quiet and normal life with his first love who knew nothing. And the story starts with the son of this seemingly protagonist template. At the start, mc's cheat is not too op, mc is very hardworking, typical pet evolution, cute interactions and face slapping. Mc encountering problems half his own and the other left by his dad, his struggles and journey is comedic and interesting. Here's the reason why I really respect the author. As he encounter more and more problems and unveil the secrets layer by layer, the vibe of the story slowly changed before I knew it. With allies that keep mc in the dark about everything or were straight up traitors, and the enemies who keep pulling him deeper into the currents, there are fewer and fewer people alive that mc can trust. The story keep getting darker and I just realized why I was feeling depressed these two days. Some won't understand but I'm the type of reader who engross myself into the character's feelings and here's what I felt. A person suddenly arrived a foreign world in the body of another person and now having a family that really isn't his. He felt very akward and conscious about this family and try to bury all his energy in the wish of the previous owner of the body. Of course his own ambition should also be there. He tried to distance himself from the new family due to the akwardness but it backfired and made him guilty. At that time, the words and actions of the seemingly ordinary but tightly bonded family touched him and he started accepting his new ordinary family. A little after that, he got to know a person who let him in about a secret of his father. And he who realized that the touching words of his ordinary father has lost their meanings try to self deny and swallow all his questions. He got a parental figure who cares about him but also use him and he let it be cuz the other person's genuine concerns for him and the emotional debts his father owe her. And then, he lost a friend. Troubles approaches him half of which are his father's fault and people who protects him keeps getting harmed. During the midst of allies who keep trying to keep him out of the secrets and enemies who sink him into the vortex of undercurrents people around him were either traitors or got harmed again and again. The chapter I'm currently reading? The heroine is dead. The friends dead. Mc ain't given time to prepare mentally and the tragedies and enemies keep appearing. Now, mc can't even trust people who he thought were parental figures and friend who he thought died. The story goes darker and darker and I can't find the elements of the story that make me laugh an smile anymore. Anyway, people who like depressing novels can go read this. I dropped this now.
Revelar spoiler Ok its a little boring but at some parts its really funmy which is the reason that I am still reading this rn but idk hiw long the comedy can keep me here
Good book. SiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuUuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuUuuuuuuuuuuuUuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuiuuuuuuuuuuuu
the story is pretty good, not as good as the elite Magus academy bit way better than trash like the mech army... the story is above Average and is extremely good in the regular beast taming tropes! the side characters are Intersesting but kinda annoying-ish. do give it a try it's worth checking out!
morw............................................................................................................................................
A boy gets reincarnated in a world where summons are a thing. He wakes up to find that the summon his predecessor summoned was one of the trashiest of trash that you could summon— a skeleton. Unresigned, he plans to train the skeleton to become stronger by devising a training manual for it with the help of his golden finger. Along the way, this ‘average-looking’ boy will encounter many set backs and will overcome them along side his trusty skeleton and his gold finger system.
Yes , i know this story have racism however , the reviews are meant to be constructive.... not a place to complain. If you can ignore the racism, you will be brought into a world which monster pet evolution couldnt achieve. Mc is actually trying hard to achieve his goals of upgrading the monsters. More time and effort needs to been dedictated for the mc to upgrade his monsters.THIS IS NOT FOR PEOPLE WHO LIKE VERY OP MC WITH NO HARDWORK(MONSTER PARADISE) This is one of the best trial read i have read and its rating is getting destroyed by ONE racist comment . Ffs ppl
pretty good all things considered, a bit of some words that arent PC but oh well, I honestly enjoy the little bit of vulgar speech as being to polite or nice is just a total turn off. I'm enjoying the pacing and would definitely recommend giving it a read. Story is aight but I'm mostly here to see more funny ways this dude can trigger people🤣🤣🤣🤣
I say this novel is pretty good if you look over the racism and fat-shaming so XPXPPXPXPXPPXPXXPXPPXPXPPXPXPXPPXPXPXPXPPXPXPXPXPPXPXPXPPXPXPXPXPPXPXPPXPXPPXPXPPXPXPXP
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please bring this back, I love the story and those hating on it are upset because he makes fun of his lovable fat friend when he really doesnt want to since its muscle.memory from the bodies previous memory. it's a fun story that I'm fully enjoying and really want brought back!!!
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