I just wanted to make it clear.
This is a fanfiction not a serious novel.
I write it in my free time when I get inspired.
I even mentioned it in synopsis.
So I honestly don't understand why there are people asking for me to rewrite it as a better story when it's not meant to be one. This is not a serious book. I already made it clear in the synopsis it's "self indulgent" and for "leisure".
I don't know what you expect a from a self indulgent fanfic except that's it's written on a whim.
Also Pokemon is not mine!
Thank you for the time!