Demon God

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Zaysay

Hello guys, this is the author. Another shameless review, hahaha. There really ain't much to say, but I'll tell you what to expect in the early stage of the story. Right now, the released chapters (55 chapters) could be considered early stage because of its slow start. So, read if you vibing with that. The mc, Desire, is a baby that grows old in time. He is weak, and naive. However, that will change as he grows older. By the way, on the early stage of the story, the MC is a fool/simp for monsters. (Yes, until now.) And he hates humans. So, after meeting a character in the story, he tries to 'fix' that problem quite literally. The MC will go on an adventure where he would then meet many people. The plot of the story...Now, that's for you to read. I hope to see you guys in the latest chapter!

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Nafsu_geass28

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gg_gg_7901

Grammar is good I just hate the MC he is childish (understandable since he is one) and he is very naive. also he just hates humans and loves monsters, i get the author said that it will be explained later but it seems like it is something that is relevant to early events in the book and needs to be explained early on. Honestly i have a hard time sitting through the book.

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Matthew_Adesina_6688

lllllllloooovvvvvvveeeee iiiiiiiiiiiittttttttt, really fits my bill, keep going author you aren't half bad in my opinion give me a good time will you

LV 14

SkinnyPenis

Stopped on chapter 15, this novel is extremely creative and is good at having you wonder about the world/mc, however, it is hard to immerse yourself in due to its serious need of an editor. If English isn’t your first language it might be your cup of tea. Had to give world building a 3/5 as not really anything has been explained as of yet. Gave character building a 4/5 because the side characters are decently fleshed out thus far except for a few minor details. I believe with an editor both issues can be easily recitfied.

LV 15

Colin_Blaydes

Great story so far, grammar here in there is wonky but nothing to wild. Very intersted to learn more about our OP MC and his Harem. This should blow Up anyday now keep it up Author[img=recommend]

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MrfwuffymilkSan

Ive not read it yet this is just so hopefully it can get a star rating but it looks pretty good to me ive seen the first chapter and i like it no large grammer mistakes and sentences seem to flow good, So far like 4.7/5

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Dao_of_Melancholy

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Lord_Phychopomp

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No words, my friend, no words. Hope ALL is famous just like you lol. But anyway noice one. This is a nice novel. All I can say is HOPE ALL.

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Ollo_780

this is really good. I stand by my ratings. Some that I have read written by people with English as their first language had worse grammar than this. I recommend you give it a read

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Mattigician

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Lianlaris

This story is building up nicely. The mystery about his live and the development of his character want me to read more about what he will become in the future

LV 13

_Frost_

only a few chapters in and first thoughts on the story is that its confusing and weird. Constant switching between 1st and 3rd person every other sentence doesn't help either. Looking at the last upload makes the novel looked dropped so thats my main reason not going to continue. No point getting invested in a story for it to never continue.

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Kyaw_Htet_Aung_1548

I don't know about other people but I can't really sit through and read although the stuff might be explained later. I just can't bear the fact that "Desire" knows things that are not supposed to be known by infants. Maybe this is supposed to be some reincarnation type but I'm dropping here. Bye

LV 13

Lianlaris

It is an interesting story and I want to know what happens so I keep reading. But story is written with overly detailed explanation. So the same thing is explained often in many different ways. Often I can skip half the page because it explains the same thing. And it repeats information to often. It makes me question if the writer is scared that the reader forgot thinks. But because the story itself is nice and it keeps me interested for how the character will develop himself in the further future I want to see it until the end. Hopefully the writer will know tro time that it is not required to explain some think repeatedly. Atthis moment it can be seen as filler story but I don’t think that that is the intention of the writer.

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Kindread4440

Good story author! Keep it up! I'm not going to be one of those readers that are just simping for the author in the reviews section, so I'mma tell you straight up. This book could be better. But hey! I'm liking this book a lot anyway, so do I care really? No, lol. An extra chapter a day wouldn't hurt though...

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laZybaka

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Edwin_Snowman

It's Really lovely author am just addicted to the novel. It fit my bills ... I have more cions and power stones for you author ... Will be expecting the 6 chapters this ...week.... You're not half bad but you're awesome. So fluently written. Am amaze good job author

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ChaMy

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