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I really enjoy your book. lavender is my favorite although Tilly is not far behind. you constantly are updating and upload chapters daily which is really nice that I don't have to wait so longggg 😖
shameless review! Join Dave on his journey to rescue the girls trapped as side characters and bring them into the folds of reborn to play the game!
This is a great story the update speed is stable, the characters are great and the world-building is unique I hope to read the future chapters of this book.
awesome story. It incorporates multiple genres at once. I like the way the author surprises you with certain things. like for example, when the MC said that he was playing with fate, I didn't expect fate to later on be an actual person. and then with destiny and the fairy it all merged into a rich plot that makes me crave for more. Overall 5 stars
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Firts of all - I love your cover page! it's really catchy! An idea about poor reborn is also great! That's something new and fresh on Webnovel. The storyline is interesting, the characters also. For me this is a ready screenplay for a good computer game... Beautiful English - so nice to read it
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Very interesting story that took me to worlds, places and situations I could never have imagined. Dave has to deal with Goddesses (Destiny and Transmigration), with "Random World Transmigration Act" (which I won't begin to explain), a fairy, and most importantly, Lavendar. One of my favorite lines is, "This place defies the law of... well I think it defies all of them." That is what this tale does, it defies the usual and predictable, which is one of its best features.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
The book is very interesting! Though I have read system stories, this one definitely stands out in a unique way. Keep up the good work, can't wait to read more chapters 👍
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I really enjoy your book. lavender is my favorite although Tilly is not far behind. you constantly are updating and upload chapters daily which is really nice that I don't have to wait so longggg 😖
shameless review! Join Dave on his journey to rescue the girls trapped as side characters and bring them into the folds of reborn to play the game!
This is a great story the update speed is stable, the characters are great and the world-building is unique I hope to read the future chapters of this book.
awesome story. It incorporates multiple genres at once. I like the way the author surprises you with certain things. like for example, when the MC said that he was playing with fate, I didn't expect fate to later on be an actual person. and then with destiny and the fairy it all merged into a rich plot that makes me crave for more. Overall 5 stars
Revelar spoiler Firts of all - I love your cover page! it's really catchy! An idea about poor reborn is also great! That's something new and fresh on Webnovel. The storyline is interesting, the characters also. For me this is a ready screenplay for a good computer game... Beautiful English - so nice to read it
Revelar spoiler Very interesting story that took me to worlds, places and situations I could never have imagined. Dave has to deal with Goddesses (Destiny and Transmigration), with "Random World Transmigration Act" (which I won't begin to explain), a fairy, and most importantly, Lavendar. One of my favorite lines is, "This place defies the law of... well I think it defies all of them." That is what this tale does, it defies the usual and predictable, which is one of its best features.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
The book is very interesting! Though I have read system stories, this one definitely stands out in a unique way. Keep up the good work, can't wait to read more chapters 👍
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