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Reborn in One piece with Pain's ability
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young man dies -> meets god -> gets wishes
reborn in one piece with the rinnegan and the body of pain (yahiko)
[i dont own anything other than my OC]
my first fan fic so dont murder me, updates will be when i have time and feel like writing, my grammer is not that good so i'm trying to get better
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please don't drop please don't drop great 😌👍👍💪👍👍💪👍👍💪👍👍💪👍👍💪👍👍💪👍👍💪👍👍💪👍👍💪👍👍💪👍👍💪👍👍💪👍👍 Good good good good good
I can't smash my powerstone in your story. what happened? I thibk this is worth it. I hope the author is dedicated in this. We will just comment if there is something wrong to be corrected. lovelots❤
To be onist thought it wasnt gonna be good but holy💩 it is a beautiful piece of work fantastic and keep on work so you dont drop it please😘
really good so far hope for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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hey man this is super cool and i like my op mc's so just keep writing ok 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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as the author i want to say i just write it for fun so it could be really shitty but i am trying my best so to those who like it cool those who hate idk