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Hey uhh you said this is on hiatus but i am still waiting everyday after a week. And I've been thinking about if you are dropping this... If you are please don't. The story and everything was great and please continue.
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I found the story idea very interesting at first, but the development of the main character, not so much. The problems I see with the main character is that he becomes too powerful in too short a time and he continually keeps getting new OP powers too quickly and without explanation. When faced with a challenge or situation where the reader assumes that he will use his already known powers in an intelligent or novel way, he simply pulls out of nowhere a new power or ability that he had gained very conveniently and without explanation for some inexplicable reward and thus he avoids the challenge. I liked how Percy Jackson's plot changed, but I don't like that he relies too much on his divine father to solve all his problems for him.
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Writing quality is great. Stability of updates are good. The rest is horrible, but as it is written at the start, this basicaly is a rough draft.
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I'm not here to be negative but when you make a story you have character building and world building. You rushed the story and plot way too fast. I like op characters but half of what was listed as his abilitys he's popping new ones every chapter, what was the point of the system ? I guess nice world backround I like how u blended xman and marvel with Percy jackson that was cool! also get a proofreader A bit of grammer issues
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You're doing a great work man. I don't know how to write a review but all I have to say is that I'M LOVING IT. Hope you continue to post new chapter and don't drop in between.
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Great book We hope you continue with This and your Other books as their all good and i pray that you upload more everyweek as each chapter is great
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I like this Story! just ignore all these negative people/comments! Keepu it up author!.......................................................
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it's quite good novel also I think you to hasty when you give the people to technology. also I hope you finish the novel and I also suggest you use grammarly to check the error.
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ТОП..............................................................................КЛЬОВО МАТИ СІМЮ БОГІВ НО ЦІКАВО ЛІНІЯ ВРКУВАННЬ З СМЕРТЮ ПЕРЕЙДЕ В ОТНОШЕНИЯ......ММММ
Im gonna give an honnest review/opinion i feel like to me the story is too rushed and that it should be slowed down cause i was getting lost sometimes but other than that love the story and keep improving and making good stories.👍🙂
I'm loving this it's completely different in regards to it being a MCU and PJO crossover world. But in the earlier chapter where the author explains the time-line could you also add a bit to do with the x-men as I've posted a comment to do with me not understanding the x-men time-line as laura(X-23) has already been born/created but Charles Xavier and Magnito are still working together like in x-men first class.
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This is too good, Considering this is a stress relief fanfic. Author just go through this on your own pace. You enjoy writing, we enjoy reading, that's a win win for both sides so good luck. I just hope you don't drop this too soon, it's a rough draft anyway.
Author, please do not get affected by the bad comments and bad reviews, you are doing great and trying your best. The story so far is great, grammar is a little off sometimes, but overall the story progressing is fantastic.
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Hey uhh you said this is on hiatus but i am still waiting everyday after a week. And I've been thinking about if you are dropping this... If you are please don't. The story and everything was great and please continue.
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I found the story idea very interesting at first, but the development of the main character, not so much. The problems I see with the main character is that he becomes too powerful in too short a time and he continually keeps getting new OP powers too quickly and without explanation. When faced with a challenge or situation where the reader assumes that he will use his already known powers in an intelligent or novel way, he simply pulls out of nowhere a new power or ability that he had gained very conveniently and without explanation for some inexplicable reward and thus he avoids the challenge. I liked how Percy Jackson's plot changed, but I don't like that he relies too much on his divine father to solve all his problems for him.
Revelar spoiler Writing quality is great. Stability of updates are good. The rest is horrible, but as it is written at the start, this basicaly is a rough draft.
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I'm not here to be negative but when you make a story you have character building and world building. You rushed the story and plot way too fast. I like op characters but half of what was listed as his abilitys he's popping new ones every chapter, what was the point of the system ? I guess nice world backround I like how u blended xman and marvel with Percy jackson that was cool! also get a proofreader A bit of grammer issues
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You're doing a great work man. I don't know how to write a review but all I have to say is that I'M LOVING IT. Hope you continue to post new chapter and don't drop in between.
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Great book We hope you continue with This and your Other books as their all good and i pray that you upload more everyweek as each chapter is great
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I like this Story! just ignore all these negative people/comments! Keepu it up author!.......................................................
I need mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooioooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeereeeeeeeeeeeereeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it's quite good novel also I think you to hasty when you give the people to technology. also I hope you finish the novel and I also suggest you use grammarly to check the error.
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ТОП..............................................................................КЛЬОВО МАТИ СІМЮ БОГІВ НО ЦІКАВО ЛІНІЯ ВРКУВАННЬ З СМЕРТЮ ПЕРЕЙДЕ В ОТНОШЕНИЯ......ММММ
Im gonna give an honnest review/opinion i feel like to me the story is too rushed and that it should be slowed down cause i was getting lost sometimes but other than that love the story and keep improving and making good stories.👍🙂
I'm loving this it's completely different in regards to it being a MCU and PJO crossover world. But in the earlier chapter where the author explains the time-line could you also add a bit to do with the x-men as I've posted a comment to do with me not understanding the x-men time-line as laura(X-23) has already been born/created but Charles Xavier and Magnito are still working together like in x-men first class.
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This is too good, Considering this is a stress relief fanfic. Author just go through this on your own pace. You enjoy writing, we enjoy reading, that's a win win for both sides so good luck. I just hope you don't drop this too soon, it's a rough draft anyway.
Author, please do not get affected by the bad comments and bad reviews, you are doing great and trying your best. The story so far is great, grammar is a little off sometimes, but overall the story progressing is fantastic.
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