Lucifer's horrors circus

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sae_boo

This is a really good story. I don't know why but I got Caroline(stop motion animated movie) vibes from it. The story is just so well laid out. Am really surprised, writing quality is extremely good! The author is superb at describing the dread that Jonah is going through as well as building up the world around him. The grammar is excellent, minor mistakes In some parts but nothing to stress over. I just got to say this is one of the best horror's & thrillers I've read!! Best novels, I've read PERIOD!! (IDC if that makes me biased lol) Jonah and alma's story is really sad. He seems to bounce from one plight to another and the pacing is well organized. The internalization of the characters is really relatable. None of the characters are flat, the worm guy was the deal breaker for me... so sad Man lucifer!.......uhhh, i feel angry for jonah. its not even his fault Continue on author, you have something amazing here am going to be following to see where this goes!... P.S i shed one tear, while reading this.. it really gets you!

I love this story, the fear that it produces is incredible. I want to continue reading more chapters.... Please! Please![img=recommend][img=update]

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LV 11

Zanyyy

Thrilling, so bloody thrilling. The way the author described every scene, every event in this book is just mind blowing. The mild fear i get reading this book is quite amazing. I will recommend this book to anyone interested in horror novel.

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SnowPenguin

The setting and premise is very unique and is executed extremely well too. The writing is amazing and the character drama and motivations just suck you in and leave you begging for more.

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DaoistA3fMPC

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Johnurfriend

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Hender

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D1vineMonarch

I was trying to start reading this story, But I'm not trying to make a pact, so I'm giving up to start reading ... why think with me, if the terms of the agreement are 1-you started reading this story means you are interested in the pact. 2-finished this story counts as a sealed pact, Your soul is mine. Totally giving up to start reading.

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RallonWolfheart

good story, keep it going [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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Lee_Ches

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Michael_Oey

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Devil_79

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Web_Novel_1095

nice story. thank you for sharing. ............................................................................... ........................ .

LV 5

_Kaitlin_

Webnovel may have recremended it but I’ve already read-ed it. (Kinda sing-songy, no? LOL)... Anyways this is a really good book you have here. Keep it up!!

LV 11

Nekonigiri001

If you are into horror/thriller, this is definitely the book for you! It is well-written, it brings out the reader's emotion. I, for one, unable to stop feeling sorry and continue to hope for Jonah's happiness and for that, it made me want to read more so well done author!!! 👏🏼👏🏼 you managed to capture your reader's attention! definitely worth it to put in your collection 😍

LV 2

Ephipanians

Okay, I'm impressed for sure, Kind of creep out in a way, but I'm loving the feeling, Love how you describe the scene and you said you aren't a native speaker? Well, I think you did better than some native speakers.

LV 14

Gery_

Amazing plot, characters and vocab. It has a really good potential, so the only thing I can tell you is that keep up the good work, because it's fantastic.

LV 3

NakedApron

The writing quality and stability of updates is very good, I also like the character design and story development, but so far it has only been the story of how a kid is having the worst time of his life. I mean seriously, what did Jonah ever do to you. But as advice from another author, I'd like to tell you that the readers here don't really like to read too much heavy stuff. I understand how good it would feel, when the story actually gets to the point where Jonah gets a moment of peace, but it's a difficulty to get to that point, is what i'm trying to say. Add some hope and humor in it if you can. But, in the end it's your novel and I am curious of the outcome.

LV 2

BooksWithRamen

To be honest, I am not a fan horror genre exactly but I love the storyline and style. The start of the book has won my heart. I hope you update soon. Can't wait to see this book in my shelf as a bestseller.