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a very good novel, glad I discovered this story right now. like you already know this story contains mature content, that's also one of the reasons I read this and I'm quite sure many other readers also read because of this matter. firstly, the plot is good not all about ***, but still for me personally, author the proportion between normal chapter and *** was not that much hope the author can increase and make it more constant like 18-25 normal chapter to enco.unter *** chapter. also hope author can make it kinkier and full fill our reader's fantasy, after all, it's the point of writing and reading a fantasy novel. so far ****** with the aunt is already hot . but mc need other like cuckold other powerhouse/enemy, duo sister and many other fantasy 😏😏
Author here, I just want to thank all you for reading my novel. English is not my native language, so I hope you will forgive me for my grammatical errors and misuse of words sometimes. Please read at least 80 chapters before dropping, because It's my first novel, so the first chapters aren't that great. But it gets better with time. You will like it. Now Some Spoilers.. 1. This novel is going to be an R-18 Harem novel with lots of mature content. 2. No Rape, No NTR, 3. MC is OP, smart, calm, not rushing things, don't provoke everyone he meet, ruthless to the enemy, have pervert nature and soft spot for women. 4. There will be not much arrogant young masters in this novel like other Xianxia novels. (Hate it) 5. He will not leave any girl behind, a little separation but later reunion. I hope to improve more and more to give you a good story. Thanks again to everyone, and hopefully, you enjoy it as much as I enjoy writing.
Yes, the English is a bit bad but the story is good. I liked it so much i read the whole thing twice. Now the question is, why is it in Hiatus? *knock knock knock* Hello Author, are you there?
did the author drop this novel? this is one of the best xianxia smut that I've read I'll be upset if this novel was drop😢
This is a good webnovel & I love it very much.🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳, and I want to ask a question to author that are you a indian then it is very nice I am also a indian living in jodhpur, rajasthan. Thanks for the novel.
I like the novel but i have to skip it. Way way to many mistakes, words just put together that make no sense, etc. And it's not even getting better, but worse with every chapter. This is my 3rd language, i can imagine how it is for native speakers.
Action, nice scenes, good amount of detail. The story hardly gets boring at times. It's great.
i love/like this novel please keep updating i love/like this novel please keep updating
Dear author, please update new chapter a bit frequently. The long wait is torturous. Otherwise it is a very very very good novel. Please be more frequent.
Happy new year author thank you for bringing us Chapter of your novel many blessings and have a good time this day December 31 Mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm
Amazing book i can’t wait for more! I’ve read about 410 ch so far and im really enjoying it I like the characters background and the plot. Definitely one of my favourites.
Dear Author are you high while writing this do you remember the pasts of heroines and MC's why is MC bowing his head and asking premission from Zi Ling's Master or some old woman and this Zi Ling she didn't oppose to the idea of getting together with with some sects young master. MC still keeps begging like simp dog why bother since she does not place importance on their past reletionship and values him. If not for MC she would be dead like how ungrateful you need to be
Only read the 1st 3 chapters and it looks like it was someone's first attempt at writing, there are no typos or grammar mistakes but the sentences & paragraphs look like something I would write, and I never wrote anything
can someone recommend me something like this like even of fight and world building and 18 stuff
how are people giving this a 5-star the grammar is so awful anyone who speaks English (primary language or not) can easily write better grammar than this author
please, more caps, this novel is very good 🤗🙂.....................................................................................................................................
Starting from Fan Clan arc or close to it author or translator loses his or her english and creates their own language writing wasn't perfect to begin with but since the Long Clan and Fan Clan arc it hit the all time low. Feels like author was lazy to construct a sentence just and threw some random words to fill in
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Yo digo que falta las chicas zzorro y la chica dragón en perder la fruta proibida jjjajaja autor no nos dejes en suspenso todos queremos ver el DELICIOSO 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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honestly,I am still in early chapters(20-30).but problem is,it looks like exact copy of Sword moved the ninth heaven with some change...but that isnt the problem...It feels like story is going too fast...writter,pls,can you at least edit these first chapters...early chapters are really going fast without any plots!!I will continue to read...then I will change the review again...Sorry for current low rating..I really like R rated story...So,its sure that I will give the story at least 4.5 stars..please,keep writting..but pls,dont follow sword moved the ninth heaven too much...those who read that story previously,It would make them or me irritated..
I will start to see this novel the two proprojects that you are doing are good well I will see how it is while the other novel is uploaded uwu
I got a piece of solid advice for you Author if you got some time please edit the earlier chapters. If you do it I guarantee you that your book will get more readers. I've been trying to read this novel for 4 months (4 fking months or maybe even longer waiting for it to be edited) and guess which chapter am I currently reading chapter 29 I repeat chapter 29. I know English isn't your native language and mine too but at least use Grammarly even the Grammarly free version can help you write a decent chapter.
Plot is excellent, story starts with Feng Yun the MC with no cultivation on the clan, but still train his butt off every years, somehow he obatin a inheritance from the Evil clan that dual cultivates, on merging with the inheritance that he got, he was able to cultivate normally like others and also by dual cultivating with the females he likes or love whatever, and so he journey starts from there on.
amazing, dear author, I'm waiting for the continuation of the story amazing, dear author, I'm waiting for the continuation of the story amazing, dear author, I'm waiting for the continuation of the story
this is a very good story.. .. good plot development ...... just the appropriate amount of everything ... .action, drama, ***, ect... i hope we get to see emotional development of character in upcoming chapters and this will be a perfect novel. .. EAGERLY WAITING FOR FURTHER UPDATES
a very good novel, glad I discovered this story right now. like you already know this story contains mature content, that's also one of the reasons I read this and I'm quite sure many other readers also read because of this matter. firstly, the plot is good not all about ***, but still for me personally, author the proportion between normal chapter and *** was not that much hope the author can increase and make it more constant like 18-25 normal chapter to enco.unter *** chapter. also hope author can make it kinkier and full fill our reader's fantasy, after all, it's the point of writing and reading a fantasy novel. so far ****** with the aunt is already hot . but mc need other like cuckold other powerhouse/enemy, duo sister and many other fantasy 😏😏
Author here, I just want to thank all you for reading my novel. English is not my native language, so I hope you will forgive me for my grammatical errors and misuse of words sometimes. Please read at least 80 chapters before dropping, because It's my first novel, so the first chapters aren't that great. But it gets better with time. You will like it. Now Some Spoilers.. 1. This novel is going to be an R-18 Harem novel with lots of mature content. 2. No Rape, No NTR, 3. MC is OP, smart, calm, not rushing things, don't provoke everyone he meet, ruthless to the enemy, have pervert nature and soft spot for women. 4. There will be not much arrogant young masters in this novel like other Xianxia novels. (Hate it) 5. He will not leave any girl behind, a little separation but later reunion. I hope to improve more and more to give you a good story. Thanks again to everyone, and hopefully, you enjoy it as much as I enjoy writing.
Yes, the English is a bit bad but the story is good. I liked it so much i read the whole thing twice. Now the question is, why is it in Hiatus? *knock knock knock* Hello Author, are you there?
did the author drop this novel? this is one of the best xianxia smut that I've read I'll be upset if this novel was drop😢
This is a good webnovel & I love it very much.🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳, and I want to ask a question to author that are you a indian then it is very nice I am also a indian living in jodhpur, rajasthan. Thanks for the novel.
I like the novel but i have to skip it. Way way to many mistakes, words just put together that make no sense, etc. And it's not even getting better, but worse with every chapter. This is my 3rd language, i can imagine how it is for native speakers.
Action, nice scenes, good amount of detail. The story hardly gets boring at times. It's great.
i love/like this novel please keep updating i love/like this novel please keep updating
Dear author, please update new chapter a bit frequently. The long wait is torturous. Otherwise it is a very very very good novel. Please be more frequent.
Happy new year author thank you for bringing us Chapter of your novel many blessings and have a good time this day December 31 Mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm
Amazing book i can’t wait for more! I’ve read about 410 ch so far and im really enjoying it I like the characters background and the plot. Definitely one of my favourites.
Dear Author are you high while writing this do you remember the pasts of heroines and MC's why is MC bowing his head and asking premission from Zi Ling's Master or some old woman and this Zi Ling she didn't oppose to the idea of getting together with with some sects young master. MC still keeps begging like simp dog why bother since she does not place importance on their past reletionship and values him. If not for MC she would be dead like how ungrateful you need to be
Only read the 1st 3 chapters and it looks like it was someone's first attempt at writing, there are no typos or grammar mistakes but the sentences & paragraphs look like something I would write, and I never wrote anything
can someone recommend me something like this like even of fight and world building and 18 stuff
how are people giving this a 5-star the grammar is so awful anyone who speaks English (primary language or not) can easily write better grammar than this author
please, more caps, this novel is very good 🤗🙂.....................................................................................................................................
Starting from Fan Clan arc or close to it author or translator loses his or her english and creates their own language writing wasn't perfect to begin with but since the Long Clan and Fan Clan arc it hit the all time low. Feels like author was lazy to construct a sentence just and threw some random words to fill in
Mmmm no mmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm
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Yo digo que falta las chicas zzorro y la chica dragón en perder la fruta proibida jjjajaja autor no nos dejes en suspenso todos queremos ver el DELICIOSO 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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honestly,I am still in early chapters(20-30).but problem is,it looks like exact copy of Sword moved the ninth heaven with some change...but that isnt the problem...It feels like story is going too fast...writter,pls,can you at least edit these first chapters...early chapters are really going fast without any plots!!I will continue to read...then I will change the review again...Sorry for current low rating..I really like R rated story...So,its sure that I will give the story at least 4.5 stars..please,keep writting..but pls,dont follow sword moved the ninth heaven too much...those who read that story previously,It would make them or me irritated..
I will start to see this novel the two proprojects that you are doing are good well I will see how it is while the other novel is uploaded uwu
I got a piece of solid advice for you Author if you got some time please edit the earlier chapters. If you do it I guarantee you that your book will get more readers. I've been trying to read this novel for 4 months (4 fking months or maybe even longer waiting for it to be edited) and guess which chapter am I currently reading chapter 29 I repeat chapter 29. I know English isn't your native language and mine too but at least use Grammarly even the Grammarly free version can help you write a decent chapter.
Plot is excellent, story starts with Feng Yun the MC with no cultivation on the clan, but still train his butt off every years, somehow he obatin a inheritance from the Evil clan that dual cultivates, on merging with the inheritance that he got, he was able to cultivate normally like others and also by dual cultivating with the females he likes or love whatever, and so he journey starts from there on.
amazing, dear author, I'm waiting for the continuation of the story amazing, dear author, I'm waiting for the continuation of the story amazing, dear author, I'm waiting for the continuation of the story
this is a very good story.. .. good plot development ...... just the appropriate amount of everything ... .action, drama, ***, ect... i hope we get to see emotional development of character in upcoming chapters and this will be a perfect novel. .. EAGERLY WAITING FOR FURTHER UPDATES