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i love the story hope it ends good thank you for writting this novel and good luck with the oder storys yul writh.................…..............
Im really enjoying this book so far, it is definitely a must read. I like how it goes from one person's perspective to another person's perspective.
Nineve, I am looking forward to this book continuing the concept is great and the characters are built well and show great potential! Please don't lose heart or courage because of a glitch you have made a great start ,read what you have written and get the flow of the story back in your heart and let the words come out of your heart!
the quality of English in this story is honestly shocking. with some basic editing it could have been acceptable even with the generally poor quality writing outside of the grammatical mistakes. the story in the first chapter jumps from in a parking lot to suddenly take off the school day is over it's very confusing to follow what is going on
This a very romantic story. I like it so far. I have only gotten to chapter 15. I suggest more protectors from the vampire. He scares me more than Jacob.
I would love to apologize for my rudeness to author💖 had no idea that app it's self makes repeating chapter mistakes, 😔I love your book🥰 and waiting for new chapters ☺️ the story is amazing not only that it's original😍 not stolen like some other people does 😑 wishing you good luck ❤️❤️❤️
I do love this book. I love the way it has been written. But i dont Know how but out of know where, i started reading the few same pages Over and over again. i hope this gets fixed.
This is an amazing story i Am still catching up but what i have read so far is wonderful :) You are doing a great Job author Keep it up. :) :) i cant wait to keep reading.
i love the story hope it ends good thank you for writting this novel and good luck with the oder storys yul writh.................…..............
Im really enjoying this book so far, it is definitely a must read. I like how it goes from one person's perspective to another person's perspective.
Nineve, I am looking forward to this book continuing the concept is great and the characters are built well and show great potential! Please don't lose heart or courage because of a glitch you have made a great start ,read what you have written and get the flow of the story back in your heart and let the words come out of your heart!
the quality of English in this story is honestly shocking. with some basic editing it could have been acceptable even with the generally poor quality writing outside of the grammatical mistakes. the story in the first chapter jumps from in a parking lot to suddenly take off the school day is over it's very confusing to follow what is going on
This a very romantic story. I like it so far. I have only gotten to chapter 15. I suggest more protectors from the vampire. He scares me more than Jacob.
I would love to apologize for my rudeness to author💖 had no idea that app it's self makes repeating chapter mistakes, 😔I love your book🥰 and waiting for new chapters ☺️ the story is amazing not only that it's original😍 not stolen like some other people does 😑 wishing you good luck ❤️❤️❤️
I do love this book. I love the way it has been written. But i dont Know how but out of know where, i started reading the few same pages Over and over again. i hope this gets fixed.
This is an amazing story i Am still catching up but what i have read so far is wonderful :) You are doing a great Job author Keep it up. :) :) i cant wait to keep reading.