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esta buena la historia,falta actualizar más seguido . .......................................... ................ 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Buena historia. Porfavor continúe con el trabajo, autor. Recomiendo NO usar miedas de novelas chinas, xianxian, cultivo, joven maestro. Definitivamente sería lo peor. Gracias, autor. ,.,.,.,.,',',',.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.-'-'-'-','-','-'-'-'-'-'-''-'-'-'-'-''-+!+!+¡+(«(«(;;&«;(+(+(+¡¡+¡+¡++(+(+(+(+(+((+(+(+(++(+(+(+(+(+(+¡+¡+¡+¡+¡/¡¡ ¡/¡+!+!+¡+!/!/!/!//(/&;3;$;$8¡;&/(/,.,.,.,.,',',',.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.-'-'-'-','-','-'-'-'-'-'-''-'-'-'-'-''-+!+!+¡+(«(«(;;&«;(+(+(+¡¡+¡+¡++(+(+(+(+(+((+(+(+(++(+(+(+(+(+(+¡+¡+¡+¡+¡/¡¡ ¡/¡+!+!+¡+!/!/!/!//(/&;3;$;$8¡;&/(/
Me gusta la historia es divertida y entretenida. Una opinión mía es que no metas personajes de otros mundos ya que de por sí to love ru tiene muchas chicas, sino quedaría todo un rompecabezas, no digo que no pongas personajes de otros mundos, solo que no lo pongas en la trama
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Well.... this is basically a NTR novel where each girl is stolen by saruyama. I will wait until it reaches 50 chapters to give it a read since most authors here dont even reach that number. Do at least its safe to asume that if authlr could write 50 chapters he is less likely to drop it than others
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la serie está bien pero la actualización es lenta [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
es un gran fan-fic el que creaste por favor no pares [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
solo esperando mas actualizaciones ,y tambien leer los pov de las chicas , por ejemplo de mikan , donde llega el protagonista cuando se la estan declarando , tambien de haruna de como se siente con este nuevo saruyama , que lo alienta a ser mas asetiva y de pasada poco a poco va entrando en su corazon . - tambien esperando la llegada de las hermanas deviluke.
good story, considering that the MAC is gaining the love of haruna little by little and at this moment she considers him a friend you should make the MC meet haruna's sister Akiho and try to make her fall in love with him.
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
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I haven't read it yet, but If you don't take every girl, you'll be a disappointment as a casanova, much less a superior one. So here, have my blessings. Good luck!
Why is synopsis in english but the novel is in whatever it is? Can you please change the synopsis and write that it is NOT written in english?
por ahora todo bien pero has los capítulos mas largos_________ ________________________________________________________ exp exp exp exp exp
Que gusto es ver fanfic de To Love Ru. Y una bueno More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more.
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more plz mais porfavor ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
one more "fanfic" of To love Ru, just don't drop it like the other authors that only reach 10 chapters or 40 and then disappear. ..................................................................................
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para cuando mas capitulos ?. .................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Revelar spoiler esta buena la historia,falta actualizar más seguido . .......................................... ................ 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Buena historia. Porfavor continúe con el trabajo, autor. Recomiendo NO usar miedas de novelas chinas, xianxian, cultivo, joven maestro. Definitivamente sería lo peor. Gracias, autor. ,.,.,.,.,',',',.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.-'-'-'-','-','-'-'-'-'-'-''-'-'-'-'-''-+!+!+¡+(«(«(;;&«;(+(+(+¡¡+¡+¡++(+(+(+(+(+((+(+(+(++(+(+(+(+(+(+¡+¡+¡+¡+¡/¡¡ ¡/¡+!+!+¡+!/!/!/!//(/&;3;$;$8¡;&/(/,.,.,.,.,',',',.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.-'-'-'-','-','-'-'-'-'-'-''-'-'-'-'-''-+!+!+¡+(«(«(;;&«;(+(+(+¡¡+¡+¡++(+(+(+(+(+((+(+(+(++(+(+(+(+(+(+¡+¡+¡+¡+¡/¡¡ ¡/¡+!+!+¡+!/!/!/!//(/&;3;$;$8¡;&/(/
Me gusta la historia es divertida y entretenida. Una opinión mía es que no metas personajes de otros mundos ya que de por sí to love ru tiene muchas chicas, sino quedaría todo un rompecabezas, no digo que no pongas personajes de otros mundos, solo que no lo pongas en la trama
............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ...............
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Well.... this is basically a NTR novel where each girl is stolen by saruyama. I will wait until it reaches 50 chapters to give it a read since most authors here dont even reach that number. Do at least its safe to asume that if authlr could write 50 chapters he is less likely to drop it than others
more chapters --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
...............................................................................................................................................................
la serie está bien pero la actualización es lenta [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
es un gran fan-fic el que creaste por favor no pares [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
solo esperando mas actualizaciones ,y tambien leer los pov de las chicas , por ejemplo de mikan , donde llega el protagonista cuando se la estan declarando , tambien de haruna de como se siente con este nuevo saruyama , que lo alienta a ser mas asetiva y de pasada poco a poco va entrando en su corazon . - tambien esperando la llegada de las hermanas deviluke.
good story, considering that the MAC is gaining the love of haruna little by little and at this moment she considers him a friend you should make the MC meet haruna's sister Akiho and try to make her fall in love with him.
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
need more chapter More chapter more chapter more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD
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Revelar spoiler I haven't read it yet, but If you don't take every girl, you'll be a disappointment as a casanova, much less a superior one. So here, have my blessings. Good luck!
Why is synopsis in english but the novel is in whatever it is? Can you please change the synopsis and write that it is NOT written in english?
por ahora todo bien pero has los capítulos mas largos_________ ________________________________________________________ exp exp exp exp exp
Que gusto es ver fanfic de To Love Ru. Y una bueno More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more.
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more plz mais porfavor ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
one more "fanfic" of To love Ru, just don't drop it like the other authors that only reach 10 chapters or 40 and then disappear. ..................................................................................
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para cuando mas capitulos ?. .................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Protagonista que precisa drogar as mulheres para ter algum tipo de satisfação sexual. Protagonista que precisa drogar as mulheres para ter algum tipo de satisfação sexual. Protagonista que precisa drogar as mulheres para ter algum tipo de satisfação sexual. Protagonista que precisa drogar as mulheres para ter algum tipo de satisfação sexual. Protagonista que precisa drogar as mulheres para ter algum tipo de satisfação sexual.
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