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I don't like MC. He also has a god complex. And a bit crazy and psycho. And then how did he learn ninjutsu? I have no idea.!
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I am giving this 5 stars purely because chapter 21 got a serious laugh out of me. Shame the author abandoned the book. Shame.Shame.Shame.ShameShame.Shame.Shame.ShameShame.Shame.Shame.ShameShame.Shame.Shame.ShameShame.Shame.Shame.ShameShame.Shame.Shame.ShameShame.Shame.Shame.ShameShame.Shame.Shame.Shame.
Esta interesante, por fin una historia con un protagonista con una personalidad simple pero al mismo lo hace entretenido las hazañas del protagonista. el protagonista no es amigo de izuku ese tipo de historias simplemente es interezante de leer
Amazing story i love it. Completely different from the normal reincarnation ones. The story progresses well. The MC doesnot want to be hero but bring change. I AM COMPLETELY SPEECHLESS
The main character is too op you should debuff him a lot also there is a new mha volume and deku is now a "vigilante" but he has a hero licence and izuku is also a problem since he defeated Nine by using full cowl 100% and bakugo got it for the fight and Overhaul also did and all might doesn't have one for all and all for one is possessing a new body called Tomura Shigaraki and tomuras hair is now white and he wears a suit.
this is cool .....................:).......................................................................................................
Yes! I just caught up to the current chapter in about 24 hrs. And, can I say, I LOVED IT SO FAR! Keep up the good work Author - Chan. Read you later….
story is alright yahiko isn't that good as in one chapter his entire personality changes but other than that and the awful update frequency is quite good
Revelar spoiler
I kinda don't like the mc's character. he is full of himself like duh you just got the power of pain not the attitude you don't need to act like pain.its like his not himself anymore. his impersonating someone.HIS NOT PAIN!the first part of the chapter tells that he like reading and watching the MHA anime and that he was hit by Truck kun and then he got 3 wishes. like author you don't have to imitate /copy pain's attitude it's not Naruto world okay?it's MHA where you can't kill!except if he want to be a villain. like yow the MC really think that he's god himself. I like reading fanfic so much like I've got obsessed with it these days. but its just I don't like the way the MC act.
for this being a first book, your doing great. i've seen books way worse than this and it actually updates. good job overall. :) your going great
I like the idea no I like everything about this fanfic of yours. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Es muy mala... Durante la lectura me tuve que tomar pausas en cada capítulo para reflexionar si debería continuar leyendo, el cap 7 fue mí límite. La novela es muy forzada al máximo lo cual se deja claro con las barras de metal (quién se perfora el cuerpo con barras de metal, solo para verse mejor?) Es un Don el cual se puede desarrollar como un músculo no es totalmente necesario el uso de las barras, o como mínimo no de las grandes.
All in all a really enjoyable story mc is like the real Pain seeking world peace and creating the akatsuki but not a carbon copy of him. I like that there's no harem since its typical for mha fanfic and harem ruins the romance when a story has it. The author creates his own scenarios and isn't heavily reliant on the main scenarios in the anime which are the ua villian invasion, the stain attack, the training camp attack, the all for one fight and the overhall fight. Also I miss the mc's god complex but people were complaining so the author gave up on it. its definitely one of the best if not the best mha fanfic I've ever read. keep up the good work author.
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Haven't read it yet but it looks interesting i just hope this ain't slow ............................................................................
I don't know what to feel, I thought it was some random trash novel but once I read it... P A I N X H I M I K O WHY DOES IT WORK SO WELL? Good writing, very interesting story development. Please continue the hard work (release new chapter pls..) -Deathho
Remember that the “battle is the Lord's” (1 Samuel 17:47). David reminds us that our God is God, who is worthy to be worshipped. He is worthy of being our delight, worthy of our dependence, and worthy of our devotion. He is worthy to be loved; to be praised; to be exalted and to be followed.
For someone who wrote this as his first story I am dammed impressed. There was nothing too cliche, the transitions were smooth, there were breaks and good writing quality over all. But most of all, I utterly respect you for not having a harem in it.
I really like this novel i like how right when he gets transported to mha world he not only becomes pain but thinks and acts like him and adds some of his ideologies in the novel.Good work i really am excited for every new chapter hopefully you can do a mass release one Day
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Good story in my opinion, though the updates arent much the storu itself is well made. People readong this review should give this a try unless you like a edgy op mc thats in love with a blood yandere
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love this novel so much..the plot and the fight is amazing..i like it how author add some chpter about mc daily life which really make it seem mc is not just some emotionless OP mc..most importantly waifu is not nejire or momo...bored of them already..only problem is the chapter update which took a few day each..but as long author continue the novel im fine with it[img=update][img=recommend]
I love how the author made the story have some twists in it my favorite is how the author made some Naruto characters enter the MHA world and I hope he makes like Nagito enter and the MC like takes his eyes and makes Nagito on of the Paths along with the original akatsuki members
AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI
I don't like MC. He also has a god complex. And a bit crazy and psycho. And then how did he learn ninjutsu? I have no idea.!
Love this and need more...........NOW.[img=coins].......................................................................................................:)
I am giving this 5 stars purely because chapter 21 got a serious laugh out of me. Shame the author abandoned the book. Shame.Shame.Shame.ShameShame.Shame.Shame.ShameShame.Shame.Shame.ShameShame.Shame.Shame.ShameShame.Shame.Shame.ShameShame.Shame.Shame.ShameShame.Shame.Shame.ShameShame.Shame.Shame.Shame.
Esta interesante, por fin una historia con un protagonista con una personalidad simple pero al mismo lo hace entretenido las hazañas del protagonista. el protagonista no es amigo de izuku ese tipo de historias simplemente es interezante de leer
Amazing story i love it. Completely different from the normal reincarnation ones. The story progresses well. The MC doesnot want to be hero but bring change. I AM COMPLETELY SPEECHLESS
The main character is too op you should debuff him a lot also there is a new mha volume and deku is now a "vigilante" but he has a hero licence and izuku is also a problem since he defeated Nine by using full cowl 100% and bakugo got it for the fight and Overhaul also did and all might doesn't have one for all and all for one is possessing a new body called Tomura Shigaraki and tomuras hair is now white and he wears a suit.
this is cool .....................:).......................................................................................................
Yes! I just caught up to the current chapter in about 24 hrs. And, can I say, I LOVED IT SO FAR! Keep up the good work Author - Chan. Read you later….
story is alright yahiko isn't that good as in one chapter his entire personality changes but other than that and the awful update frequency is quite good
Revelar spoiler I kinda don't like the mc's character. he is full of himself like duh you just got the power of pain not the attitude you don't need to act like pain.its like his not himself anymore. his impersonating someone.HIS NOT PAIN!the first part of the chapter tells that he like reading and watching the MHA anime and that he was hit by Truck kun and then he got 3 wishes. like author you don't have to imitate /copy pain's attitude it's not Naruto world okay?it's MHA where you can't kill!except if he want to be a villain. like yow the MC really think that he's god himself. I like reading fanfic so much like I've got obsessed with it these days. but its just I don't like the way the MC act.
for this being a first book, your doing great. i've seen books way worse than this and it actually updates. good job overall. :) your going great
I like the idea no I like everything about this fanfic of yours. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Es muy mala... Durante la lectura me tuve que tomar pausas en cada capítulo para reflexionar si debería continuar leyendo, el cap 7 fue mí límite. La novela es muy forzada al máximo lo cual se deja claro con las barras de metal (quién se perfora el cuerpo con barras de metal, solo para verse mejor?) Es un Don el cual se puede desarrollar como un músculo no es totalmente necesario el uso de las barras, o como mínimo no de las grandes.
All in all a really enjoyable story mc is like the real Pain seeking world peace and creating the akatsuki but not a carbon copy of him. I like that there's no harem since its typical for mha fanfic and harem ruins the romance when a story has it. The author creates his own scenarios and isn't heavily reliant on the main scenarios in the anime which are the ua villian invasion, the stain attack, the training camp attack, the all for one fight and the overhall fight. Also I miss the mc's god complex but people were complaining so the author gave up on it. its definitely one of the best if not the best mha fanfic I've ever read. keep up the good work author.
Fasterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr 44444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444 moreeeeeeeeeee plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Author filler for 140 letters
Haven't read it yet but it looks interesting i just hope this ain't slow ............................................................................
I don't know what to feel, I thought it was some random trash novel but once I read it... P A I N X H I M I K O WHY DOES IT WORK SO WELL? Good writing, very interesting story development. Please continue the hard work (release new chapter pls..) -Deathho
Remember that the “battle is the Lord's” (1 Samuel 17:47). David reminds us that our God is God, who is worthy to be worshipped. He is worthy of being our delight, worthy of our dependence, and worthy of our devotion. He is worthy to be loved; to be praised; to be exalted and to be followed.
For someone who wrote this as his first story I am dammed impressed. There was nothing too cliche, the transitions were smooth, there were breaks and good writing quality over all. But most of all, I utterly respect you for not having a harem in it.
I really like this novel i like how right when he gets transported to mha world he not only becomes pain but thinks and acts like him and adds some of his ideologies in the novel.Good work i really am excited for every new chapter hopefully you can do a mass release one Day
Nice [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Good story in my opinion, though the updates arent much the storu itself is well made. People readong this review should give this a try unless you like a edgy op mc thats in love with a blood yandere
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love this novel so much..the plot and the fight is amazing..i like it how author add some chpter about mc daily life which really make it seem mc is not just some emotionless OP mc..most importantly waifu is not nejire or momo...bored of them already..only problem is the chapter update which took a few day each..but as long author continue the novel im fine with it[img=update][img=recommend]
I love how the author made the story have some twists in it my favorite is how the author made some Naruto characters enter the MHA world and I hope he makes like Nagito enter and the MC like takes his eyes and makes Nagito on of the Paths along with the original akatsuki members
AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI AKATSUKI
Great story and good character development!