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The grammar is killing me. this is all I have to say. PLEASE fix this author...
I saw "chat group" plus "yuri", decided to give it a try. I always wanted to read something with a chat group thing, but refrained after seeing 1000+ chapters and all that. Unfortunately, this try was quite disappointing. The author has an extremely sporadic writing style. He's telling us something and makes me intrigued... and then it's never mentioned (at least not in the nest chapters), and the author jumps to the next topic. And so on in a circle. It's like writing an essay without a draft and a plan. PS. Having the talent of accelerated learning * 100, I doubt that such a person would devote most of their time to dull CEO work.
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Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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the story is pretty funny how the girl from other dimension easy to fall in love with mc how charming and interaction they have I can't wait if author will write about irregular at magic highschool❤❤
Ceritanya menarik tidak seperti yg lain karena kebanyakan fanfic melakukan quest dari grub chat + ini adalah fanfic yuri pertama yg mengunakan tema grub chat yg saya Baca
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Not bad but far too many things author is trying to include at once, makes it almost unreadable when you won't let something finish before introducing another 10 different plot points. And that's just up to chapter 11
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I like this a lot. My only issue is that it needs a lot of editing as a lot of the sentences make no sense as they are either missing words entirely or just severely jumbled up in some cases. currently I'm only on chapter 9 but I hope it changes later on. I cant say much about the frequency of updates as I only just discovered this story and have not caught up. I like the character design of the MC and somewhat of the world background (though I cant say much there either as I haven't read\seen much to judge it yet but from the little I have seen its good). The story development is okay so far, again cant say too much yet as I haven't read far enough yet but its also decent from what I can see.
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I'm back I'll try reading more then a few chapters this time like for real why doesn't the plot move untill like 25 chapters in its quite boring before that.
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Meh it not too bad the chapter are long but at the same time they are filled with useless info that nobody wants to know Overall not bad keep going Author
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I love this story is funny and i like the history with harem i recommend this fanfic more chapters !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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The grammar is killing me. this is all I have to say. PLEASE fix this author...
I saw "chat group" plus "yuri", decided to give it a try. I always wanted to read something with a chat group thing, but refrained after seeing 1000+ chapters and all that. Unfortunately, this try was quite disappointing. The author has an extremely sporadic writing style. He's telling us something and makes me intrigued... and then it's never mentioned (at least not in the nest chapters), and the author jumps to the next topic. And so on in a circle. It's like writing an essay without a draft and a plan. PS. Having the talent of accelerated learning * 100, I doubt that such a person would devote most of their time to dull CEO work.
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Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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the story is pretty funny how the girl from other dimension easy to fall in love with mc how charming and interaction they have I can't wait if author will write about irregular at magic highschool❤❤
Ceritanya menarik tidak seperti yg lain karena kebanyakan fanfic melakukan quest dari grub chat + ini adalah fanfic yuri pertama yg mengunakan tema grub chat yg saya Baca
SUPERCALIFRAGILISTICEXPIALIDOCIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Not bad but far too many things author is trying to include at once, makes it almost unreadable when you won't let something finish before introducing another 10 different plot points. And that's just up to chapter 11
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I like this a lot. My only issue is that it needs a lot of editing as a lot of the sentences make no sense as they are either missing words entirely or just severely jumbled up in some cases. currently I'm only on chapter 9 but I hope it changes later on. I cant say much about the frequency of updates as I only just discovered this story and have not caught up. I like the character design of the MC and somewhat of the world background (though I cant say much there either as I haven't read\seen much to judge it yet but from the little I have seen its good). The story development is okay so far, again cant say too much yet as I haven't read far enough yet but its also decent from what I can see.
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interesing history. *******************************************************************************************************************************************************
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I'm back I'll try reading more then a few chapters this time like for real why doesn't the plot move untill like 25 chapters in its quite boring before that.
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Revelar spoiler Meh it not too bad the chapter are long but at the same time they are filled with useless info that nobody wants to know Overall not bad keep going Author
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I love this story is funny and i like the history with harem i recommend this fanfic more chapters !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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