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Aieee, this had potential, but it was dropped. I think more background info for the characters would be a nice addition, and the author needs to put more effort into world building and description of locations, while reading I sometimes felt like the world was just covered in mist and I couldn't think of what anything looked like.
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Gender Bender and Female leads are pretty big turn offs for me when I'm reading. Tried them just not for me. But to give my honest opinion the story's pretty great especially for a first time writer and one that seems to have a drive to improve further. Even willing to ask for help. Unlike other Gender Benders I've tried the changes are neither ignored nor shoved down your throat. Which is nice. The only problem I've got with it was that the character came off with a Mary Sue like vibe. We hear multiple times about how amazing they are or even worse the numbers of times they are called a genius. We also get a scene with a young master that seemed to end a bit too perfectly and quickly. That and combined with the fact that the God randomly gave more stuff outside of the wishes felt a bit cheap. This is a pretty common issue among newbie authors though it's hard to not shower the Main Character they created with constant love but just like the real world if everything goes right for them all it will do in the end is stunt the characters growth. The problems I mentioned are something that will grow away over time quickly and even quicker for an Author that asks for support and help. So I don't think it's enough to warrant a lowering in rating.
As it is chapter 1 still I can’t say much, but I really like the writing. The mc is a genius who solved many problematic cases for the planet and people on it but unfortunately dies an untimely death because of his incurable illness, which is the only thing that he wasn’t able to solve. After death he meets a “God” before being granted 5 wishes and after that sent into a cultivation world where survival is of the fittest where people need more then Genius to survive, they need aptitude and talent as-well! *Writing is really well done with no grammar mistakes. *Upload is stated to be whenever he wants so a bit of a downer.
Hey! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email kerawood.review*@*gmail.com (delete *） We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
Aieee, this had potential, but it was dropped. I think more background info for the characters would be a nice addition, and the author needs to put more effort into world building and description of locations, while reading I sometimes felt like the world was just covered in mist and I couldn't think of what anything looked like.
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Hey! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email kerawood.review@gmail.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
Gender Bender and Female leads are pretty big turn offs for me when I'm reading. Tried them just not for me. But to give my honest opinion the story's pretty great especially for a first time writer and one that seems to have a drive to improve further. Even willing to ask for help. Unlike other Gender Benders I've tried the changes are neither ignored nor shoved down your throat. Which is nice. The only problem I've got with it was that the character came off with a Mary Sue like vibe. We hear multiple times about how amazing they are or even worse the numbers of times they are called a genius. We also get a scene with a young master that seemed to end a bit too perfectly and quickly. That and combined with the fact that the God randomly gave more stuff outside of the wishes felt a bit cheap. This is a pretty common issue among newbie authors though it's hard to not shower the Main Character they created with constant love but just like the real world if everything goes right for them all it will do in the end is stunt the characters growth. The problems I mentioned are something that will grow away over time quickly and even quicker for an Author that asks for support and help. So I don't think it's enough to warrant a lowering in rating.
As it is chapter 1 still I can’t say much, but I really like the writing. The mc is a genius who solved many problematic cases for the planet and people on it but unfortunately dies an untimely death because of his incurable illness, which is the only thing that he wasn’t able to solve. After death he meets a “God” before being granted 5 wishes and after that sent into a cultivation world where survival is of the fittest where people need more then Genius to survive, they need aptitude and talent as-well! *Writing is really well done with no grammar mistakes. *Upload is stated to be whenever he wants so a bit of a downer.
Hey! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email kerawood.review*@*gmail.com (delete *） We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!