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The story is interesting, the updates are steady, and it is a fun ride. Still I'd like a bit more description of the world background, how the characters and the setting looks, and the formatting could use some work. Nice story overall.
I read the first few chapters and I have to say your way of writing is unique. I like the way u portrayed the texting style, it's kinda clean to read. It's a nice book with potential and I hope it do well in the future. Full support to u author! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
An excellent book. The book is just fabulous. Describing it will only undermine your experience. The author is also a very responsive and good person, so this book experience will just be peerless. Love the book author san. Never give up.
WOW!! This is the most wonderful thing i have ever experience in my life, My name is Terri Pamela, I never thought I will smile again, after my husband left me with two kids for one year, All effort to bring him back failed and i was desperate to bring him back home I thought I'm not going to see him again not until I met a lady called Miller on Facebook who told me about a spell caster called Dr Osunbor She gave me his email address and mobile number and I contacted him and he assured me that within 48hours my husband will come back to me, i feel happy already when i had that from him, In less than 48hours my husband came back started begging for forgiveness saying it is the devils work, so I'm still surprise till now about this miracle, because it just too real to be real I know so many lady are at there with the same problem of my but i tell you today that there is a solution for it contact him via mail dr.osunbor23@gmail.com or Whatsapp him+2349133212197
DEAR AUTHOR, YOUR BOOK IS AMAZING! CONTINUE TO MAKE MORE BOOKS BECAUSE IT’S SO GOODD! EXCELLENT WORK![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
this is realy awesome.. .....absolutely fantastic......from my side its highly recommended novel.............good work by author...............
The plot is awesome, story's updated regularly and best of all is the character development. LOVE THIS STORY AUTHOR! Keep it up and give us more quality content.
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Miss is doing great ... Keep it up ....all the best ... Really love reading your stories ...it's creative and really entertaining to read....
First love hardly dies and the embers are still there. The female lead has been through a lot and is ready for a new beginning by leaving her past life. But she meets up with her crush that brings back past memories.
Really good, I love the romance part of the novel. keep it up as you are! Really good.
it's very interesting to read .... Everytime I finish reading a chapter I can't wait for the next ... The author is doing a really great job
Firstly, hat off to the author. This is an interesting story that I've ever read. I'm not into a love story genre but yours is exceptional. It's a fun story. The characters are fun especially the MC. I'm still in chapter 10 but I can't help but write the review because it's so good. Fighting
“The writing was captivating,” “The characters were believable and I cared about them,” “The plot had so many twists and turns I couldn't put the book down.” Specific praise helps browsing readers get a better sense of why your book is so good.❤ Waitin For next Episode💓
Highly recommend this wonderful book! It’s enthralling and interesting. [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
I just read the first chapter but I feel like the mc is really relatable haah! I really like this book and it pique my interest even while writing this review I want to read more chapters of the book
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I love this story so much . I love lyra and cole character , such an amazing book . I highly recommend this amazing story.i promise u won't regret it.
Absolutely Amazing Awesome Beautiful Capital Dynamite Energized Empowered Excellent Exceptional Exciting Extraordinary Exuberance Fabulous Fantastic Great Happy Incredible Inspired Magnificent Motivated Outrageous Perfect Phenomenal Positive Powerful Riveting Sensational Sizzling Spectacular Splendid Super Terrific Triumphant Tremendous Vivacious Winner Wonderful.
Wow, I loved the theme and genre. Its so beautifully written as I read through the first chapters. The characters are great and well written synopsis that increases the curiosity. It's amazing and you're so natural with writing. Keep going forward. you're doing great. Looking forward for more .
Characters are really nice, and easily distinguishable. Plot and romance is cute and relatable, and the whole story gives off a really down to earth and branded in reality vibe that I can really respect! Can't wait to see where the story goes.
This book is written beautifully..maybe try making your chapters a tad bit longer. Your use of words is simple and beautiful. Beauty in simplicity Keep it up.
It is a so so book. i liked the words author used but she has some problems with character and background. i suggest you to explain background even more.
The plot is nice (although a bit cliche for me to read it) but its simplicity and light drama readers will love it! For sure, we can sum it up that this will end good! Great job!
Thanks Author for this story. I’m up till chapter 20 but would like to post my review still. 1. Quite a unique writing style to deliver the feelings in the begining on Mason. Conversations that internalised her thoughts and perception of others and how she felt towards cole thereafter. So the ability to draw the characters and thoughts are vividly described through conversations 2. The slow built up of the story is good in terms of how Ly and cole feels about each other and him bringing her back to his place on the first date to know his family - interesting way to let her know him better - good choice. 3. The curiosity and tension when Mason and Ly bumped into Mason in the lift or when Ly had to choose between Cole and trivia in the game leaving Cole feeling left out and him translating that into his actions for her eg holding her hands tighter is portrayed effectively All in all easy read - enjoyed the little things that happen - day in a life surrounding Ly and Cole - look foward to seeing how they will go on from here. Keep up the good work, there are some typo in spacing and punctuations in earlier chapter (small matter that can be corrected) but other than that good read! 👍
The plot is nice. All the characters are well defined in novel. The MC is also promising. Authors creativity and efforts cannot be neglected though.
It was interesting! I felt identified with the girl. I also liked the funny parts of the novel, that gives it a nice touch. I hope you keep writing! I want to read more ♥
I love the book! The plot is so interesting same as with the mc. The book is so relatable. I want to see more chaps and I'm anticipating for future events that will progress in the book.
The story is interesting, the updates are steady, and it is a fun ride. Still I'd like a bit more description of the world background, how the characters and the setting looks, and the formatting could use some work. Nice story overall.
I read the first few chapters and I have to say your way of writing is unique. I like the way u portrayed the texting style, it's kinda clean to read. It's a nice book with potential and I hope it do well in the future. Full support to u author! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
An excellent book. The book is just fabulous. Describing it will only undermine your experience. The author is also a very responsive and good person, so this book experience will just be peerless. Love the book author san. Never give up.
WOW!! This is the most wonderful thing i have ever experience in my life, My name is Terri Pamela, I never thought I will smile again, after my husband left me with two kids for one year, All effort to bring him back failed and i was desperate to bring him back home I thought I'm not going to see him again not until I met a lady called Miller on Facebook who told me about a spell caster called Dr Osunbor She gave me his email address and mobile number and I contacted him and he assured me that within 48hours my husband will come back to me, i feel happy already when i had that from him, In less than 48hours my husband came back started begging for forgiveness saying it is the devils work, so I'm still surprise till now about this miracle, because it just too real to be real I know so many lady are at there with the same problem of my but i tell you today that there is a solution for it contact him via mail dr.osunbor23@gmail.com or Whatsapp him+2349133212197
DEAR AUTHOR, YOUR BOOK IS AMAZING! CONTINUE TO MAKE MORE BOOKS BECAUSE IT’S SO GOODD! EXCELLENT WORK![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
this is realy awesome.. .....absolutely fantastic......from my side its highly recommended novel.............good work by author...............
The plot is awesome, story's updated regularly and best of all is the character development. LOVE THIS STORY AUTHOR! Keep it up and give us more quality content.
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Miss is doing great ... Keep it up ....all the best ... Really love reading your stories ...it's creative and really entertaining to read....
First love hardly dies and the embers are still there. The female lead has been through a lot and is ready for a new beginning by leaving her past life. But she meets up with her crush that brings back past memories.
Really good, I love the romance part of the novel. keep it up as you are! Really good.
it's very interesting to read .... Everytime I finish reading a chapter I can't wait for the next ... The author is doing a really great job
Firstly, hat off to the author. This is an interesting story that I've ever read. I'm not into a love story genre but yours is exceptional. It's a fun story. The characters are fun especially the MC. I'm still in chapter 10 but I can't help but write the review because it's so good. Fighting
“The writing was captivating,” “The characters were believable and I cared about them,” “The plot had so many twists and turns I couldn't put the book down.” Specific praise helps browsing readers get a better sense of why your book is so good.❤ Waitin For next Episode💓
Highly recommend this wonderful book! It’s enthralling and interesting. [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
I just read the first chapter but I feel like the mc is really relatable haah! I really like this book and it pique my interest even while writing this review I want to read more chapters of the book
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I love this story so much . I love lyra and cole character , such an amazing book . I highly recommend this amazing story.i promise u won't regret it.
Absolutely Amazing Awesome Beautiful Capital Dynamite Energized Empowered Excellent Exceptional Exciting Extraordinary Exuberance Fabulous Fantastic Great Happy Incredible Inspired Magnificent Motivated Outrageous Perfect Phenomenal Positive Powerful Riveting Sensational Sizzling Spectacular Splendid Super Terrific Triumphant Tremendous Vivacious Winner Wonderful.
Wow, I loved the theme and genre. Its so beautifully written as I read through the first chapters. The characters are great and well written synopsis that increases the curiosity. It's amazing and you're so natural with writing. Keep going forward. you're doing great. Looking forward for more .
Characters are really nice, and easily distinguishable. Plot and romance is cute and relatable, and the whole story gives off a really down to earth and branded in reality vibe that I can really respect! Can't wait to see where the story goes.
This book is written beautifully..maybe try making your chapters a tad bit longer. Your use of words is simple and beautiful. Beauty in simplicity Keep it up.
It is a so so book. i liked the words author used but she has some problems with character and background. i suggest you to explain background even more.
The plot is nice (although a bit cliche for me to read it) but its simplicity and light drama readers will love it! For sure, we can sum it up that this will end good! Great job!
Thanks Author for this story. I’m up till chapter 20 but would like to post my review still. 1. Quite a unique writing style to deliver the feelings in the begining on Mason. Conversations that internalised her thoughts and perception of others and how she felt towards cole thereafter. So the ability to draw the characters and thoughts are vividly described through conversations 2. The slow built up of the story is good in terms of how Ly and cole feels about each other and him bringing her back to his place on the first date to know his family - interesting way to let her know him better - good choice. 3. The curiosity and tension when Mason and Ly bumped into Mason in the lift or when Ly had to choose between Cole and trivia in the game leaving Cole feeling left out and him translating that into his actions for her eg holding her hands tighter is portrayed effectively All in all easy read - enjoyed the little things that happen - day in a life surrounding Ly and Cole - look foward to seeing how they will go on from here. Keep up the good work, there are some typo in spacing and punctuations in earlier chapter (small matter that can be corrected) but other than that good read! 👍
The plot is nice. All the characters are well defined in novel. The MC is also promising. Authors creativity and efforts cannot be neglected though.
It was interesting! I felt identified with the girl. I also liked the funny parts of the novel, that gives it a nice touch. I hope you keep writing! I want to read more ♥
I love the book! The plot is so interesting same as with the mc. The book is so relatable. I want to see more chaps and I'm anticipating for future events that will progress in the book.
Such an amazing story. Had me on the edge the whole time!