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4.2

  • Calidad de escritura
  • Estabilidad de las actualizaciones
  • Desarrollo de la Historia
  • Diseño de Personajes
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xzyan
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It is a very interesting story and I truely recommend it, It gets more and mire interesting every time! I am looking forward to more releases! :)

4yr
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Kaisen1

this deserve so much more it has potential please don't ever think of dropping it🤞🏻 hope you continue ....... ...... ..... .... ... .. . ..

4yr
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erasil_PUBG123

Хуйня полная р во

4yr
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Kaisen1

interesting good👍👍👍👍 interesting good👍👍👍👍 interesting good👍👍👍👍 interesting good👍👍👍👍 interesting good👍👍👍👍 KEEP IT BRO/SIS I'M ROOTING FOR YOU SORRY I CAN'T VOTE RIGHT NOW AS I USED IT EARLIER

4yr
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ken_ringdomstory03

Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email kenreview@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!

4yr
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IamBLANK

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4yr
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erasil_PUBG123

Cooooool Cooooool the only way for us that you are able and not only have you in a world who has been the same way as a person who has a lot to offer in a long way in a world box box has been in a lot more of my

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4yr
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Jents47

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4yr
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king8512743

Ima leave a shameless review for the book (I have to as I am the editor). But anyways, I hope you guys like the book and I will continue trying to improve the overall quality of it.

4yr
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aaelite2

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

4yr
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Syam_Sundar_7103

writing quality is good . world background is not good .overall story is not bad .but random undead kill and hero doesn't show any fight .just destruction only .its very annoying

4yr
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Gavyn_Mack

honestly it's good,it may be fast pace but for me it's changes my reading experience, I hope that it continues and doesn't stop,there so many great novels like this one that just stop, I hope this never stops I love it.

4yr
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DaethRavan

This is a really good novel ... thank god I stumbled on this ... just amazing ... though the starting may seem of cause of the grammer ... but the latest chapters are just amazing ... tons of improvement by the author ... PLEASE DONT DROP IT

4yr
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DIVINE_LOLICON

I like this story so much Please don't drop this if you drop this i u suffer the consequences and please make the protagonist more overpower 😉 😉

4yr
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SaxonViolence

This story is simplistic. The Protagonist tries to commit suicide because he is a total loser—and then gets cold feet part way and prays to the gods to save him. The gods air impressed by his impressive Fortitude and Indomitability????? This is a dude who can't even commit Seppuku and follow through with it. Instead, he takes pills and then changes his mind halfway. At any rate, the gods give him a system and more special abilities than you can shake a stick at. Really, if I wasn't trying hard to find ONE story to review every day, I wouldn't have read past the second chapter. Also, there is a, "See Dick run. Run Dick, run!" Kinda short elementary school sentences and cadences...

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4yr
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PaiiNz
LV 11 Badge

I hope a little bit of self love is ok :))) and i also hope you guys like my Novel i try everyday to make it better and if you like it leave a comment and feedback <333

4yr
Ver 8 respuestas
xzyan
LV 12 Badge

It is a very interesting story and I truely recommend it, It gets more and mire interesting every time! I am looking forward to more releases! :)

4yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Kaisen1

this deserve so much more it has potential please don't ever think of dropping it🤞🏻 hope you continue ....... ...... ..... .... ... .. . ..

4yr
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erasil_PUBG123

Хуйня полная р во

4yr
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Kaisen1

interesting good👍👍👍👍 interesting good👍👍👍👍 interesting good👍👍👍👍 interesting good👍👍👍👍 interesting good👍👍👍👍 KEEP IT BRO/SIS I'M ROOTING FOR YOU SORRY I CAN'T VOTE RIGHT NOW AS I USED IT EARLIER

4yr
Ver 1 respuestas
ken_ringdomstory03

Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email kenreview@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!

4yr
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IamBLANK

hmmmmmmm🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🙄🥱🥱🙄🥱🥱🙄🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱

4yr
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erasil_PUBG123

Cooooool Cooooool the only way for us that you are able and not only have you in a world who has been the same way as a person who has a lot to offer in a long way in a world box box has been in a lot more of my

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4yr
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Jents47

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4yr
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king8512743

Ima leave a shameless review for the book (I have to as I am the editor). But anyways, I hope you guys like the book and I will continue trying to improve the overall quality of it.

4yr
Ver 1 respuestas
aaelite2

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

4yr
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Syam_Sundar_7103

writing quality is good . world background is not good .overall story is not bad .but random undead kill and hero doesn't show any fight .just destruction only .its very annoying

4yr
Ver 3 respuestas
Gavyn_Mack

honestly it's good,it may be fast pace but for me it's changes my reading experience, I hope that it continues and doesn't stop,there so many great novels like this one that just stop, I hope this never stops I love it.

4yr
Ver 1 respuestas
DaethRavan

This is a really good novel ... thank god I stumbled on this ... just amazing ... though the starting may seem of cause of the grammer ... but the latest chapters are just amazing ... tons of improvement by the author ... PLEASE DONT DROP IT

4yr
Ver 1 respuestas
DIVINE_LOLICON

I like this story so much Please don't drop this if you drop this i u suffer the consequences and please make the protagonist more overpower 😉 😉

4yr
Ver 13 respuestas
SaxonViolence

This story is simplistic. The Protagonist tries to commit suicide because he is a total loser—and then gets cold feet part way and prays to the gods to save him. The gods air impressed by his impressive Fortitude and Indomitability????? This is a dude who can't even commit Seppuku and follow through with it. Instead, he takes pills and then changes his mind halfway. At any rate, the gods give him a system and more special abilities than you can shake a stick at. Really, if I wasn't trying hard to find ONE story to review every day, I wouldn't have read past the second chapter. Also, there is a, "See Dick run. Run Dick, run!" Kinda short elementary school sentences and cadences...

Revelar spoiler
4yr
Ver 3 respuestas
PaiiNz
LV 11 Badge

I hope a little bit of self love is ok :))) and i also hope you guys like my Novel i try everyday to make it better and if you like it leave a comment and feedback <333

4yr
Ver 8 respuestas