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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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3 months without an update, did he drop the novel or lost his phone? in Brazil that wouldn't be strange, he could just do it again with another account, post the 14 chapters and continue from there 🤔
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more please. this book is full of hot fun and I can't wait to read the rest. I love the plot twist when the system turns the guy trap against his will. that was awesome.
Its fine, but in chapter 14 when the story starts getting fun its stopped updating for some reason... maybe COVID got the author or something?, not sure but i hope it gets releases or a mass release soon. 😌👌🏻
its nice but... its just too little, at least 1 or 2 chapters every week. anyways, if you are looking for ideas open a Discord and readers can give you ideas then, in my opinion the clear path should be seducing as many guards as she can and increasing her endurance, i bet the guards can go for a long time, and since they save money from the "flesh pit", they can give her gifts maybe.
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: wind@novel-cat.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
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This is an art piece, I just started reading it out of curiosity and interest— but, There isn’t much chapters, I hope for more soon☺️❤️😶✋💀
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Its a promising book. a bit sad that the author seems to have dropped it i hope he picks it back up but people have there own things to deal with
I Love these types of novels i hope to god that this gets uPdated as it remonds me of something elese i really enjoyed i hoe the author can fon it in himslef to write more
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I thought at first it was going to be bad because i either like male harem or female harem leads all containing females but this one is male male harem lead and ive got to say its done well and i would read more... but Its taking thr author a little more time than the people of readers want thats all follow this author to read more because its going to be a banger
It was to late to see the bl tag before my eyes were corrupted. If there are people that likes this then i wont have a problem with anyone. I always tell others “do what you want to do”
I am the exp of my sword. webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless review. Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!. - [ ]
PLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAASE make more of this. best smut ive read in a long time and i need more. .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .
enjoying it so far ........... please continue with the good work ............................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....................
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I freaking love it !!!!😍 i swear if You ever stop this novel😡 i will break into your house and Break Your ankles (sangwoo style)🧎🏾♂️🏌🏻💨
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As I was looking for something to read I happened upon this read and my brain doesn't know what to think. WARNING: THIS IS FOR PPL OF CULTURE OR IF YOU ENJOY SOME ASTOLFO. Keep it up, author.
I like how the story is going so far(only 7 chapters in,so...). I just want more chapters. I think that has a lot of potential and hope the author will continue posting.
i love this story so far and have no idea where its going but i'll be here to find out, keep on keeping on author............................
Reading this story, I realized that it reminded me of an interesting point. I remembered that Simpsons episode where Flanders had a new house built, the corridors of which were constantly narrowing. It was a really funny moment
Plz update more I’m in the store now so I’ll let you know what time works best for you to get a quick call when you’re ready for nenenndndndndnndndbdbdbdndndnndndndndndndndnnddnndndndndndndndndndndndndnndndndndndndndndndndndnndndnddnndndndndndndndndndnnddnndndndndndndndbbdbdbdbdbdbdbdbfbdbdbbfbdbdbdbbdbdbdbdbdbdbdbdbdbbdbdbdbdbdbdbbrbrbrbrbrbdbbrbrbrbrbbrbrbrbrbrbfbfbbfbfndnndndndnfndnfnnfnfnfnfnnffnndndndndndndnndndndndndndnndndndndndndndndndnddnndndndndndndndndndnndndndndndndndndndndndndndndndndnndndndndnndndndndnndndndndnndndndnnddnndndndndndnndndndndndndndnndndndndndndndnndndndndndndndndndndndndnndndndn
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
..................................................................bad............................................................................................................................................just..............................................................................................................................................bad ..............................................................................................................................................
3 months without an update, did he drop the novel or lost his phone? in Brazil that wouldn't be strange, he could just do it again with another account, post the 14 chapters and continue from there 🤔
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more please. this book is full of hot fun and I can't wait to read the rest. I love the plot twist when the system turns the guy trap against his will. that was awesome.
Its fine, but in chapter 14 when the story starts getting fun its stopped updating for some reason... maybe COVID got the author or something?, not sure but i hope it gets releases or a mass release soon. 😌👌🏻
its nice but... its just too little, at least 1 or 2 chapters every week. anyways, if you are looking for ideas open a Discord and readers can give you ideas then, in my opinion the clear path should be seducing as many guards as she can and increasing her endurance, i bet the guards can go for a long time, and since they save money from the "flesh pit", they can give her gifts maybe.
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: wind@novel-cat.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
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F*ck off what a disgusting story F*ck off what a disgusting story F*ck off what a disgusting story F*ck off what a disgusting storyF*ck off what a disgusting story
This is an art piece, I just started reading it out of curiosity and interest— but, There isn’t much chapters, I hope for more soon☺️❤️😶✋💀
Nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice Awesome
Its a promising book. a bit sad that the author seems to have dropped it i hope he picks it back up but people have there own things to deal with
I Love these types of novels i hope to god that this gets uPdated as it remonds me of something elese i really enjoyed i hoe the author can fon it in himslef to write more
............................,,,,,,,,.;$$;$;$;$$;$($;$:$:77;7;$$;$;$;$;$$;;$;$$;&;$;;$$;$:$:$:$$:$;$;$;$;$$;$;$:$:$$:$:$:$:$:$7:7:$:$$:$:$;$;$;$;$
I thought at first it was going to be bad because i either like male harem or female harem leads all containing females but this one is male male harem lead and ive got to say its done well and i would read more... but Its taking thr author a little more time than the people of readers want thats all follow this author to read more because its going to be a banger
It was to late to see the bl tag before my eyes were corrupted. If there are people that likes this then i wont have a problem with anyone. I always tell others “do what you want to do”
I am the exp of my sword. webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless review. Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!. - [ ]
PLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAASE make more of this. best smut ive read in a long time and i need more. .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .
enjoying it so far ........... please continue with the good work ............................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....................
Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais
Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais
I freaking love it !!!!😍 i swear if You ever stop this novel😡 i will break into your house and Break Your ankles (sangwoo style)🧎🏾♂️🏌🏻💨
Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais Mais 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
As I was looking for something to read I happened upon this read and my brain doesn't know what to think. WARNING: THIS IS FOR PPL OF CULTURE OR IF YOU ENJOY SOME ASTOLFO. Keep it up, author.
I like how the story is going so far(only 7 chapters in,so...). I just want more chapters. I think that has a lot of potential and hope the author will continue posting.
i love this story so far and have no idea where its going but i'll be here to find out, keep on keeping on author............................
Reading this story, I realized that it reminded me of an interesting point. I remembered that Simpsons episode where Flanders had a new house built, the corridors of which were constantly narrowing. It was a really funny moment