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chapter 170 cringe... super cringeeee. just focus on the dungeon, build your character. The mc is full of Bs, he can build his strength while being low-key but no he wants to be in the middle of everything.
im in 180.dropped it..it was a good read until that chapter...where he tries to be a hero and gets captured by the maxwell arrogant girl. although he is not subordinated he is still weak as F....all talk mc but it was a good read
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What happened? Are we done or did author go on vacation? I hope that is not the end. ,'!!!!!!!!!!!!!'!!!!!!!!!!!!! '!!!!! !!!!
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it is so good is a good novel to read and is not very bad i like how the character develop and how it is rappresentated and i like the world around him
I started reading this story a week and a half ago and really enjoy it. I like how it adds the dungeon fantasy, cultivation, and system elements. Also the character development is pretty good seeing the change in Adam and his friends as they progress is hard for most writers to depict clearly. The only bad thing I have to say is the chapter updates I was really sad to see when I got to the last chapter that it's averaging only 2 chapters a week. I usually can't continue reading a story that updates so slowly and the stories I follow and support have a minimum of 1 chapter a day=7 a week but the majority are usually 2chapters a day=14 a week. The reason I say this is for myself in particular its hard for me to stay interested in a story that's not at least updated daily and I know a lot of other readers I've talked to on discord are the same way. I hope the author doesn't take what im saying the wrong way im just trying to advise because I enjoy your story and want to continue it but like I said I can't stay interested with slow updates. So I guess I will wait to see if you start updating more and support the story as much as I can than for the great story 😁
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So this an honest review: Writing quality: 4* Some guy wrote that in the first 15 chapters he only found a typo, thats bs, in the very first sentence there is a mistake (shouting *AT the boy), I've encountered a few dozen in 10 chapters, so that's that. I also haven't seen any above-fourth-grade terms and words being used, but that's ok. 4 stars, pretty decent for this website Updating quality: 5* This one is self-explanatory. There are 500 chaps currently. Story development: 2* The story is SUPER CLICHE like, an orphan who has been abandoned and their benefactor contracted an illness, and now they're alone to fend off. Apart from being omega cliche it's also unrealistic: 1 in case that happens, to the government isn't going to leave you alone, if they did and the public found out, they would face backlash. Also, in 1st world countries education is obligatory until 16(already where I live), so good luck avoiding school. 2 Does he have no friends?????? He has an above average iq, which might motivate the government to help, but also be has been going to school with absolutely 0 parents not helping after he disappeared? Is everyone there a sociopath? Ok buddy. Character design: 3* He meets ex soldier who- no questions, attacks? Okay, I read some more, the system and most characters feel like 2.5D characters, not the worst, but far from the best, very far. World backgroung: 2* I said some reasons as to why this wouldn't happen in 1st world countries, even in 2nd world countries this wouldn't happen, I have lost motivation to specify, so yeah.I Although I only have 3.3 🌟, I would give more due to there being 500 chaps. The rest of the reviews are probably from bots. See ya.
keep it up... waiting for more plot of the story to progress.... ............................................................................
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this story is very interesting and I wish to have more chapters sooner but I understand that writing takes time. I absolutely love this story and I would suggest that everyone should read this especially if you like level up stories
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaringdom*@*gmail.com(delete *).
I am not one of those people who rate novels unfairly, this is a very good one. the character isnt some flimsy person whom only does things when its needed for story reasons. the MC has stuck to his guns, the world has been expanded much beyond what I would have though. there are so many reason to enjoy this novel, so please take a look for yourself and you wont be dissapointed.
Amazing story, but some grammatical errors here and there. Who am I to judge that though? Anyways, awesome work though, this is definitely worth the read!
Really like MC, just relate to the choices he makes, can't wait to see where the story goes. only downside to this novel is the short chapters, which I read in a flash.
Will there be any romance or harem ? I think the story lake's emotional fulfilment a bit. Also please 🙏 don't make him share his secret (system) as this totally make the story a turn off for me I see a lot of authors like to do that in my opinion a secret is meant to be hidden am I right ?
This type of system novel is something new and I really enjoy journeying right alongside the characters, can't wait to read more from Author-san.
Padre nuestro que estás en el cielo, santificado sea tu Nombre; venga a nosotros tu Reino; hágase tu voluntad en la tierra como en el cielo. Danos hoy nuestro pan de cada día; perdona nuestras ofensas, como también nosotros perdonamos a los que nos ofenden; no nos dejes caer en la tentación, y líbranos del mal. Amén.
tis a lovely story but most of the chapters suddenly went locked even though I spent fast passes on them so i give this a 4/5 it's honestly a good story but for that I kinda am angry
i have read upto chapter 49 and i can say that i realy enjoyed it so far. i was wondering when free chapters come out though. is it every other week? im poor so coins are a pain to pay for. worth a read i recomend to all
I'm enjoying the story so far, but the story plot is somewhat familiar to the Chinese cultivator vs. the modern world, like the hidden ancient matriarch of the sect suddenly comes out to face the MC, then the story repeats until he fights the military of other countries, and mythical creatures(dragons, yeti, and long dragon). You got my attention for now, but I hope your work is different and unique.
Seemingly simple but becomes more intricate and complex as the story advances. Mc despite having a 'cheat' system doesn't become op quickly whatsoever. I feel his progression is pretty well paced and not too slow for me.
A really good book It's like reading Pocket Hunting Dimension on Hell mode with a shit ton of conspiracy's and schemes running in the background
A solid story so far, not really my cup of tea because I'm not a big fan of the mystery and drama parts but still a very unique world building.
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Another Shameless review, but this time I come with important news. 1) I opened a server. Discord Server: https://discord.gg/TtnGfdKanr 2) The novel is being edited and will be improved when I get time to go back to it
chapter 170 cringe... super cringeeee. just focus on the dungeon, build your character. The mc is full of Bs, he can build his strength while being low-key but no he wants to be in the middle of everything.
im in 180.dropped it..it was a good read until that chapter...where he tries to be a hero and gets captured by the maxwell arrogant girl. although he is not subordinated he is still weak as F....all talk mc but it was a good read
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What happened? Are we done or did author go on vacation? I hope that is not the end. ,'!!!!!!!!!!!!!'!!!!!!!!!!!!! '!!!!! !!!!
Revelar spoiler ............. ........................................,....................................................................................................... .........
it is so good is a good novel to read and is not very bad i like how the character develop and how it is rappresentated and i like the world around him
I started reading this story a week and a half ago and really enjoy it. I like how it adds the dungeon fantasy, cultivation, and system elements. Also the character development is pretty good seeing the change in Adam and his friends as they progress is hard for most writers to depict clearly. The only bad thing I have to say is the chapter updates I was really sad to see when I got to the last chapter that it's averaging only 2 chapters a week. I usually can't continue reading a story that updates so slowly and the stories I follow and support have a minimum of 1 chapter a day=7 a week but the majority are usually 2chapters a day=14 a week. The reason I say this is for myself in particular its hard for me to stay interested in a story that's not at least updated daily and I know a lot of other readers I've talked to on discord are the same way. I hope the author doesn't take what im saying the wrong way im just trying to advise because I enjoy your story and want to continue it but like I said I can't stay interested with slow updates. So I guess I will wait to see if you start updating more and support the story as much as I can than for the great story 😁
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Revelar spoiler So this an honest review: Writing quality: 4* Some guy wrote that in the first 15 chapters he only found a typo, thats bs, in the very first sentence there is a mistake (shouting *AT the boy), I've encountered a few dozen in 10 chapters, so that's that. I also haven't seen any above-fourth-grade terms and words being used, but that's ok. 4 stars, pretty decent for this website Updating quality: 5* This one is self-explanatory. There are 500 chaps currently. Story development: 2* The story is SUPER CLICHE like, an orphan who has been abandoned and their benefactor contracted an illness, and now they're alone to fend off. Apart from being omega cliche it's also unrealistic: 1 in case that happens, to the government isn't going to leave you alone, if they did and the public found out, they would face backlash. Also, in 1st world countries education is obligatory until 16(already where I live), so good luck avoiding school. 2 Does he have no friends?????? He has an above average iq, which might motivate the government to help, but also be has been going to school with absolutely 0 parents not helping after he disappeared? Is everyone there a sociopath? Ok buddy. Character design: 3* He meets ex soldier who- no questions, attacks? Okay, I read some more, the system and most characters feel like 2.5D characters, not the worst, but far from the best, very far. World backgroung: 2* I said some reasons as to why this wouldn't happen in 1st world countries, even in 2nd world countries this wouldn't happen, I have lost motivation to specify, so yeah.I Although I only have 3.3 🌟, I would give more due to there being 500 chaps. The rest of the reviews are probably from bots. See ya.
keep it up... waiting for more plot of the story to progress.... ............................................................................
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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this story is very interesting and I wish to have more chapters sooner but I understand that writing takes time. I absolutely love this story and I would suggest that everyone should read this especially if you like level up stories
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaringdom*@*gmail.com(delete *).
I am not one of those people who rate novels unfairly, this is a very good one. the character isnt some flimsy person whom only does things when its needed for story reasons. the MC has stuck to his guns, the world has been expanded much beyond what I would have though. there are so many reason to enjoy this novel, so please take a look for yourself and you wont be dissapointed.
Amazing story, but some grammatical errors here and there. Who am I to judge that though? Anyways, awesome work though, this is definitely worth the read!
Really like MC, just relate to the choices he makes, can't wait to see where the story goes. only downside to this novel is the short chapters, which I read in a flash.
Will there be any romance or harem ? I think the story lake's emotional fulfilment a bit. Also please 🙏 don't make him share his secret (system) as this totally make the story a turn off for me I see a lot of authors like to do that in my opinion a secret is meant to be hidden am I right ?
This type of system novel is something new and I really enjoy journeying right alongside the characters, can't wait to read more from Author-san.
Padre nuestro que estás en el cielo, santificado sea tu Nombre; venga a nosotros tu Reino; hágase tu voluntad en la tierra como en el cielo. Danos hoy nuestro pan de cada día; perdona nuestras ofensas, como también nosotros perdonamos a los que nos ofenden; no nos dejes caer en la tentación, y líbranos del mal. Amén.
tis a lovely story but most of the chapters suddenly went locked even though I spent fast passes on them so i give this a 4/5 it's honestly a good story but for that I kinda am angry
i have read upto chapter 49 and i can say that i realy enjoyed it so far. i was wondering when free chapters come out though. is it every other week? im poor so coins are a pain to pay for. worth a read i recomend to all
I'm enjoying the story so far, but the story plot is somewhat familiar to the Chinese cultivator vs. the modern world, like the hidden ancient matriarch of the sect suddenly comes out to face the MC, then the story repeats until he fights the military of other countries, and mythical creatures(dragons, yeti, and long dragon). You got my attention for now, but I hope your work is different and unique.
Seemingly simple but becomes more intricate and complex as the story advances. Mc despite having a 'cheat' system doesn't become op quickly whatsoever. I feel his progression is pretty well paced and not too slow for me.
A really good book It's like reading Pocket Hunting Dimension on Hell mode with a shit ton of conspiracy's and schemes running in the background
A solid story so far, not really my cup of tea because I'm not a big fan of the mystery and drama parts but still a very unique world building.
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Another Shameless review, but this time I come with important news. 1) I opened a server. Discord Server: https://discord.gg/TtnGfdKanr 2) The novel is being edited and will be improved when I get time to go back to it