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The story itself may be decent, but I can't tell, because the translation is absolute garbage. Definitely MTL tier. I also don't understand why so many authors feel the need to make the world of Pokémon edgy.
Needs a rewrite... the grammar is so bad it's practically unreadable...
una buena historia para pasar el rato, con un protagonista bastante realista el lo que cabe en un mundo ficticio en general lo unico molesto es la duracion de los capitulos se siente que son muy cortos y con relleno innecesario pero en general aguantable, recomendado si quieres pasar un buen rato con una historia decente
The story is a really good read due to the characters development through the chapters and the uniqueness of the story. The only downside of this story is the translat ion, it is hard to follow and sometimes hard to understand what is happening.
The person who posted this clearly used MTL(Machine Translation) and it shows. It is barely readable.
Me gustó realmente la historia de un tono más realista que aparecía al principio, aunque parece que ahora el protagonista a entrado en una especie de halo y se convierte en invencible, me temo que caiga en un clique de historia por qué hasta la fecha era realmente rica y única, pero espero que no suceda.
Revelar spoiler
Best pkmn novel out there.Its hard to adjust but its a masterpiece.Can anyone tell me where i can get trans from ch 1145.It got way too worse there
Just started reading and already losing brain cells If you are a new web novel reader,i dont recommend this for you.It will eat ur brain and you wont undrstnd anything but the story is really great!!
a great fan fic, a very interesting point of understanding that the author gives, if anyone knows if there is a continuation and where can I read it.
Awesome novels but not completely translated...I would love to read this novel once even though I had read MC novels at different website.
First of all, im dropping it, its grammar sucks, great story btw. If anyone can withstand its disgusting transalations, then welcome aboard, yu might enjoy the story hidden by the sacks of words thats all over the place. Author of the story is great but the translation to english is dissapointing.
mtl or really bad translation ... (╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻(ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻┻━┻︵└(´_｀└)(ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻(┛✧Д✧))┛彡┻━┻(┛✧Д✧))┛彡┻━┻┻━┻ ヘ╰( •̀ε•́ ╰)(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻(┛✧Д✧))┛彡┻━┻(ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻(┛✧Д✧))┛彡┻━┻┻━┻ ヘ╰( •̀ε•́ ╰)(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻(┛✧Д✧))┛彡┻━┻┻━┻ ヘ╰( •̀ε•́ ╰)┻━┻ ヘ╰( •̀ε•́ ╰)(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻(┛✧Д✧))┛彡┻━┻┻━┻ ヘ╰( •̀ε•́ ╰)(ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(┛✧Д✧))┛彡┻━┻
I'm sorry, going by the comments the story may be good, but the translation is so bad I could not get past the ninth paragraph of the first chapter.
is there any romance??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
es la mejor historia de pokemon q vi en mi vida desearia q continuara pero bueno
Ok seriously, am not that good in English but come on, How do you even understand this. it's like reading chinese and all you know is 'ni hao'.
is this MTL or just extremly Bad written.... ...............................................................................................
I have questions does anyone know where I can find I translation that does not use a different name for the pokemon every time it is mentioned....like I'm fine if they call it a different name but if the pokemon is first called...let's say I don't know Slowking then the next time it is called stupid king...then it's call idiot king...then I just don't know what the F is going on. pls and thx
Probably the best fanfic I've ever read. 5* on everything except the translation (which sucks big time!) Unfortunately it seems to have been left at around chapter 240 here, u can read the rest on MTL (just Google search it, you'll see comrademao.mtl link). Has some really interesting uses of some mons (especially Tyranitar who has been given some powers of Groudon). Use of Psychic is pretty impressive too.
this is in no way English absolutely positively no way ............................................................................. no way!
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email kenreview@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
I m at the initial chapters but I find this novel very interesting. There is a unique story development. But the writing quality is extremely poor and difficult to read. The character design seems ok. There was good stability of update a while back now it has been more than a month. Cannot comment on world background as I have not read more chapters
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Good... Good... Good... Good.... Good.... Good.... Good..... Good... Good... Good... Good... Good....good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good.......
Warning first-time review (I think) Chinese fanfic that shows realistic version of pokemon seen through the eyes of a reincarnated team rocket member. It's mixed with a couple of things smoothly done. Like nutrition and item systems. It also has a smart mc who always plans ahead. You know that's an uncommon main character if you ask me. Cons: The translation doesn't even translate sometimes. They could also change the names of the translated pokemon into the English names like ghost being ghastly. Overall pretty good.
Revelar spoiler
Any recommendations as to where to read the MTL with actual pokemon names? please T_T
The story itself may be decent, but I can't tell, because the translation is absolute garbage. Definitely MTL tier. I also don't understand why so many authors feel the need to make the world of Pokémon edgy.
Needs a rewrite... the grammar is so bad it's practically unreadable...
una buena historia para pasar el rato, con un protagonista bastante realista el lo que cabe en un mundo ficticio en general lo unico molesto es la duracion de los capitulos se siente que son muy cortos y con relleno innecesario pero en general aguantable, recomendado si quieres pasar un buen rato con una historia decente
The story is a really good read due to the characters development through the chapters and the uniqueness of the story. The only downside of this story is the translat ion, it is hard to follow and sometimes hard to understand what is happening.
The person who posted this clearly used MTL(Machine Translation) and it shows. It is barely readable.
Me gustó realmente la historia de un tono más realista que aparecía al principio, aunque parece que ahora el protagonista a entrado en una especie de halo y se convierte en invencible, me temo que caiga en un clique de historia por qué hasta la fecha era realmente rica y única, pero espero que no suceda.
Revelar spoiler Best pkmn novel out there.Its hard to adjust but its a masterpiece.Can anyone tell me where i can get trans from ch 1145.It got way too worse there
Just started reading and already losing brain cells If you are a new web novel reader,i dont recommend this for you.It will eat ur brain and you wont undrstnd anything but the story is really great!!
a great fan fic, a very interesting point of understanding that the author gives, if anyone knows if there is a continuation and where can I read it.
Awesome novels but not completely translated...I would love to read this novel once even though I had read MC novels at different website.
First of all, im dropping it, its grammar sucks, great story btw. If anyone can withstand its disgusting transalations, then welcome aboard, yu might enjoy the story hidden by the sacks of words thats all over the place. Author of the story is great but the translation to english is dissapointing.
mtl or really bad translation ... (╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻(ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻┻━┻︵└(´_｀└)(ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻(┛✧Д✧))┛彡┻━┻(┛✧Д✧))┛彡┻━┻┻━┻ ヘ╰( •̀ε•́ ╰)(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻(┛✧Д✧))┛彡┻━┻(ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻(┛✧Д✧))┛彡┻━┻┻━┻ ヘ╰( •̀ε•́ ╰)(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻(┛✧Д✧))┛彡┻━┻┻━┻ ヘ╰( •̀ε•́ ╰)┻━┻ ヘ╰( •̀ε•́ ╰)(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻(┛✧Д✧))┛彡┻━┻┻━┻ ヘ╰( •̀ε•́ ╰)(ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(┛✧Д✧))┛彡┻━┻
I'm sorry, going by the comments the story may be good, but the translation is so bad I could not get past the ninth paragraph of the first chapter.
is there any romance??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
es la mejor historia de pokemon q vi en mi vida desearia q continuara pero bueno
Ok seriously, am not that good in English but come on, How do you even understand this. it's like reading chinese and all you know is 'ni hao'.
is this MTL or just extremly Bad written.... ...............................................................................................
I have questions does anyone know where I can find I translation that does not use a different name for the pokemon every time it is mentioned....like I'm fine if they call it a different name but if the pokemon is first called...let's say I don't know Slowking then the next time it is called stupid king...then it's call idiot king...then I just don't know what the F is going on. pls and thx
Probably the best fanfic I've ever read. 5* on everything except the translation (which sucks big time!) Unfortunately it seems to have been left at around chapter 240 here, u can read the rest on MTL (just Google search it, you'll see comrademao.mtl link). Has some really interesting uses of some mons (especially Tyranitar who has been given some powers of Groudon). Use of Psychic is pretty impressive too.
this is in no way English absolutely positively no way ............................................................................. no way!
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email kenreview@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
I m at the initial chapters but I find this novel very interesting. There is a unique story development. But the writing quality is extremely poor and difficult to read. The character design seems ok. There was good stability of update a while back now it has been more than a month. Cannot comment on world background as I have not read more chapters
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Good... Good... Good... Good.... Good.... Good.... Good..... Good... Good... Good... Good... Good....good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good.......
Warning first-time review (I think) Chinese fanfic that shows realistic version of pokemon seen through the eyes of a reincarnated team rocket member. It's mixed with a couple of things smoothly done. Like nutrition and item systems. It also has a smart mc who always plans ahead. You know that's an uncommon main character if you ask me. Cons: The translation doesn't even translate sometimes. They could also change the names of the translated pokemon into the English names like ghost being ghastly. Overall pretty good.
Revelar spoiler
Any recommendations as to where to read the MTL with actual pokemon names? please T_T