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A okay Power fantasy. Story is kind of weird, writing quality can be massively improved, MC somehow gets younger as the story progresses. It could be better but we won't get updates anymore since the Author vanished form Webnovel com. Read if you're bored. Else skip it
I feel this story is not really a story but a wish list of a person ideal reincarnation army building game. all characters feel one sided, and no real obstacles to really over come.
All around a pretty poor novel, writing quality is terrible at best. Characters are flat if they aren't just projected thoughts. The novel isn't finished, and although it plays with some very cool concepts the attempt just doesn't hit the mark.
Hope this story can continue!!! Even tho its been 1 year since a post😂 author if you see this please start posting again!!
plz make more chapters plz. dyttufyfyfuffugfufjtyfufytyfytgyyygtygtyfytyyfgyydgyfftffyyyggyyyygggttfugdujfddugggfi8tgfufiggjfr7tuffffuditsoydlydkydkyd
I find this book very addicting and great but doesn't have many chapters it seems. So if anyone knows of any alternatives like or similar to this one i would like to read them please.
This is awesome, I just hope the author keeps his word for once. ...............................................................................
The story is quite good, but the grammatical errors as well as the sudden shifts between first-person and third-person narration makes the story quite trippy...but overall a great work and has a lot of room for improvement so it gets the...
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I would hate for this magnificent story to go to waste so if you find the time, please update the story, it's a beautiful book and I absolutely love it, I hope you update it sometime soon.
I love it and it's one of the best webnovel I've read so far I hope you don't drop this it's really great and I hope more people read this cause it's absolutely great 👍
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I've been searching this kind of novel. a sci-fi, kingdom building and technological gap genre novel. this kind of novel is very rare for me. Author-sama please don't drop this novel.👍🏻
I like the style its fun read some parts seemed bit fast paced but they have fitted into story as whole so far keep up good work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Ive been trying to find a modern Kingdom Building novel for so long. i had found a different one before but it was discontinued but the fact that this a system novel too makes it even better
It is a good story, I feel that it lacks a bit of realism, something like the reaction of the MC to reach a new world and in all the situation that was, but it is a pleasant story in general.
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I'm loving this novel so far. It keeps getting more and more interesting as time goes on. The idea and plot is absolutely amazing. As for the character I would give it a 4/5. One the charter is a child which gives him an endless possibility of how he would end up when she grows ups and i'm actually surprised that the character is a female which she may not seem like it in the beginning. The updates are rather slow but since it's a new novel and the story can still be developed more it's not that surprising and just makes me give more hope that this novel is worth the wait.
Overall this good fanfiction but the update is unstable and unreliable. Author pls update ,there's only very few this kind of fanfiction this good
This plot. This story development. Its Awesome (except for the fact that there are not that many updates). Although the story is developing too quickly its still amazing how he could come to terms with America so quicly although he use nuclear weapons as a threat.
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good story, no updates, i don't think it will update but maybe author sees this and starts updating.(ps. try to use ants , zergs, etc more for building and fighting)
A okay Power fantasy. Story is kind of weird, writing quality can be massively improved, MC somehow gets younger as the story progresses. It could be better but we won't get updates anymore since the Author vanished form Webnovel com. Read if you're bored. Else skip it
I feel this story is not really a story but a wish list of a person ideal reincarnation army building game. all characters feel one sided, and no real obstacles to really over come.
All around a pretty poor novel, writing quality is terrible at best. Characters are flat if they aren't just projected thoughts. The novel isn't finished, and although it plays with some very cool concepts the attempt just doesn't hit the mark.
Hope this story can continue!!! Even tho its been 1 year since a post😂 author if you see this please start posting again!!
plz make more chapters plz. dyttufyfyfuffugfufjtyfufytyfytgyyygtygtyfytyyfgyydgyfftffyyyggyyyygggttfugdujfddugggfi8tgfufiggjfr7tuffffuditsoydlydkydkyd
I find this book very addicting and great but doesn't have many chapters it seems. So if anyone knows of any alternatives like or similar to this one i would like to read them please.
This is awesome, I just hope the author keeps his word for once. ...............................................................................
The story is quite good, but the grammatical errors as well as the sudden shifts between first-person and third-person narration makes the story quite trippy...but overall a great work and has a lot of room for improvement so it gets the...
I am the exp of my sword. webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless review. Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!
I would hate for this magnificent story to go to waste so if you find the time, please update the story, it's a beautiful book and I absolutely love it, I hope you update it sometime soon.
I love it and it's one of the best webnovel I've read so far I hope you don't drop this it's really great and I hope more people read this cause it's absolutely great 👍
Keep updating 😶😶😶😑😑😑😐😐😐🤨🤨🤨🤔🤔🤔🙂🙂🙂😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😄😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
BRING US MORE CHAPTERRRRRRR 😡😡😡😡😠😠😠😠👹👹👹👹👹👹😈😈😈👹😈😈😈😈😈😈🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫
I've been searching this kind of novel. a sci-fi, kingdom building and technological gap genre novel. this kind of novel is very rare for me. Author-sama please don't drop this novel.👍🏻
I like the style its fun read some parts seemed bit fast paced but they have fitted into story as whole so far keep up good work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Ive been trying to find a modern Kingdom Building novel for so long. i had found a different one before but it was discontinued but the fact that this a system novel too makes it even better
It is a good story, I feel that it lacks a bit of realism, something like the reaction of the MC to reach a new world and in all the situation that was, but it is a pleasant story in general.
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
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I am the exp of my sword. webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless review. Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
I'm loving this novel so far. It keeps getting more and more interesting as time goes on. The idea and plot is absolutely amazing. As for the character I would give it a 4/5. One the charter is a child which gives him an endless possibility of how he would end up when she grows ups and i'm actually surprised that the character is a female which she may not seem like it in the beginning. The updates are rather slow but since it's a new novel and the story can still be developed more it's not that surprising and just makes me give more hope that this novel is worth the wait.
Overall this good fanfiction but the update is unstable and unreliable. Author pls update ,there's only very few this kind of fanfiction this good
This plot. This story development. Its Awesome (except for the fact that there are not that many updates). Although the story is developing too quickly its still amazing how he could come to terms with America so quicly although he use nuclear weapons as a threat.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
good story, no updates, i don't think it will update but maybe author sees this and starts updating.(ps. try to use ants , zergs, etc more for building and fighting)