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So far it’s very good I like the system and how it ranks things also I’m also quite tired of the stat blocks because it’s very tiring to remember and I love my self so simplistically, all in all 5 stars also if you dare make this MC a **** boy or horn dog I will find you and I will throw crumpled paper balls from the corner of your room at you.
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i recommend this novel, the summoning is good mc too is good story too backround good Writing is good too im gonna read again now i rest ok
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Well start was good i mean most summoning novels i read are always drooped by me in the first few chapters....the problem with this novel is i dont see any plot moving (read till ch60) if it was upto me i would already started going to diff world or something else to keep novel interesting
Please more chapters. ITS A VERY GOOD NOVEL. Here the thing if you stop bringing more chapters for this novel then I know for a fact that I won't read any other novel you write because you will not finish any novel you write. I HAVE SEEN AN READ books of other authors who are very good lose all their followers because they don't finish their novels. They would go on to write a new novel only to realize barely anyone reads it because everyone knows it won't be finished.
ngl he look like Leo from black clover.it is interesting. yeah git nothing to say anymore. hah haha ha so.... never gonna give you up.
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I enjoyed your story immensely. I see that you haven't updated it in a year so it's probably dropped. Your characters and their relationships was fun getting to know. The world you built was quite large and interesting to learn about. Wish you didn't leave on a cliff hanger but I guessed after rereading the discretion twice more. Also wish it wasn't dropped before there were any lemons. Thank you for writing this story.
I want the continution of this story please just when i when the story was getting nice the author suddenly drops it. I have one message to the author don't write a story if you can't complete it or get distracted by this. "I AM DISSAPOINTED!!".
Legalzin........................................................................................................................................................................................
i liked the until he became !!booomm!! arrogant young master like he literally thinks that there are no one who could threaten him liie come on at use the common sense used in any cultivation novel that there is always stronger one out ther or there is aleays a higher mountain and the setting like they have mage but they dont use them except fighting like right now i understood why the mc become stupid because the people of the world are stupid, and like there is magic but there is no one who could do healing magic like comeon after the beast herd only rem had to heal the injured soldier..
Система призыва - даже открывать читать не буду. 4 звезды, автор старался..........................................................................
Yo! where you been at? Ive been waiting for you to write more and Im on the verge of committing genocide. This one and "Im Voldemort" are both great reads. Dont abandon them.
Writing quality is weirdly bad, working with any write proofing tool would fix like 90% of the writing but I guess everything comes across clearly so no real issues with that. The last update was 6mnths ago so yeah... Story development is really bland, there isn't really the main plot-line and so the author has to shove in random events whenever. The character design also pretty bland. specifically, MC has a ridiculous power trip type of personality and it only gets worse as the story goes on. That was the reason why I dropped this because it was bearable at the beginning of the story because of the interesting system but it's just too cringe at some point. World background is generic fantasy, not bad but the author doesn't even try to be original about it. Bad kingdom, good kingdom, demi-human kingdom pretty much. Oh, and there are also dungeons and ranks that increase your lifespan by an unknown amount. Well, chapters are really short with a shameless amount of advertising so yeah there isn't really a place in all of that to actually build the power system of the world itself from the ground up. Liked the gacha, everything else is meh.
I like this one more then Voldemort one because Voldemort one has a coocoo for cocopuff mc so... But Anyway not gonna make this long, 5-stars because I enjoy it and still waiting for you to come back to this :) or maybe =) hmmm choices choices....
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It's a good story, a little op but that's fine stories going good so far keep it up and just check for grammar. I love the way you seem to be going with the story.
Pretty good going so far. The story has got Kingdom Building, Dungeon Crawling, Summons, a sprinkle of Romance and lots of Bad-assery, although the last bit is more by the MC's servant than himself.
good one 😀😀😀😃😀😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😀😃😀😃😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😀😃😀😃😀😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀
Book is fine but I fcking hate the stupid dumb titles. It makes me think i am reading a 13year old's book. Words to fill up the rest of the post.
Writing is good with little missed, but the main complaint would be how author usually uses a whole page as a note on promotion and most of the time random notes or jokes. Updates are stable. The story is honestly a mess. While it exists it isn't heading in any real direction, developments are slow and arcs are streched most of the time. The only *proper* character in the story is the MC because every other character is living traits basically. If the author wants someone to be naive, there won't be any thought process behind it it'll just be that way, like how Aella dumbly believed her maid after spending 6 years with MC. While the author did later provide a reason like the maid being there a long time it's just bland after she spent 6 fucking years with MC after he saved her. Other characters are basically forgettable since they either feel like MCs personal-power. The MC himself is an awfully created character. He is portraied as a generally nice charcter but by this point generally does dubious things for his own good without care for others. He is supposedly reincarnated from earth but acts like a general xianxia protagonist. For dubious deeds is training child assassins and letting the mother of a child(which was presented as generally caring and nice) be sacrificed to a god to prove the existence of gods... A generally nice person from earth would feel guilt or question himself for either of these. And no matter how well you treat child assassins they are still child assassins. The world is somewhat developed at this point and we know a decent amount about it.
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Let's see, first of all I come to say that it's not worth reading Now let's go to the rest of the analysis. . I'm in the chapter 127, Take this into account . WRITING: English is not my first language, I am Brazilian, I read through the translator to understand better and what I see is not bad, with nothing to complain about his writing. . UPDATE: The only good thing about this work is the daily posts but with the amount of words written, anyone could do it. . DEVELOPMENT: It started well and ruined everything in the process, the story boils down to a character full of himself doing bullshit around and everyone wagging their tail at him. I would like to say that the author got lost in the story but it doesn't seem to be that since he totally ignored all the tips that the readers gave until everyone gave up on him. . CHARACTER: It's just an idiot child doing what he does in his head, totally disregarding logic. . WORLD DEVELOPMENT: If I have already forgotten, it is being totally ignored for the benefit of the protagonist
i love this story but i am worried that it will end up premium please dont do that i want to enjoy this book but i am worried that it will become unreadable halfway through
Hey,this is Molly, an editor from Ringdom. I just read your book. and I'd like to know if you are interested in releasing or distributing your books on our platform. You'll get paid if you'd like to work with us.It's only because I really admire your talent and love your book that I made it through the websites to send you this message.If you are interested ,do let me know and feel free to ask me anytime you like if you have any questions via this email: s9033107ringdom@gmail.com
I would like see more use of system and more summons. Also, world need more background, that already 100 chapters and I don't know eat and tame people in that world beasts or they toxic ot something. And characters need more work, all villains here just some Joffrey's.
it's a good novel and nice story. I think you should not make the control the max, but make it skill gradual increase also I think you should make the skill like diable jamble from one piece or the phoenix skill from against the god. you should train the weapon you choose.
it's nice novel, I think you should give him more element ( especially wood or nature) and also i think you should make him study alchemy that also will improve his fire magic. the mc should add the training of magic manipulation like make Mana into arrow, sword or spear and combine them with element.
I hate summoning system novel, they always drop their novel and I only see one that's still ongoing so far but this novel is great. The author had plan for this novel and would not drop this novel base on his history of past novel he wrote.
So far it’s very good I like the system and how it ranks things also I’m also quite tired of the stat blocks because it’s very tiring to remember and I love my self so simplistically, all in all 5 stars also if you dare make this MC a **** boy or horn dog I will find you and I will throw crumpled paper balls from the corner of your room at you.
Woeiurhfwlieurhfpweiurhfwlieurfhlwieurhflwuierhwpeiurfweliruhwpeirugpquegroywegrofuigwerluigwoeiurgfoiwuerhfoiuwehfvpiuwehfvpiwuegfvouiwdgfvoiuwgsfvoiywgdfvoiywgdfoiywdoiyfgoiwysgff Jdndjiwsn,kuwepi
i recommend this novel, the summoning is good mc too is good story too backround good Writing is good too im gonna read again now i rest ok
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Well start was good i mean most summoning novels i read are always drooped by me in the first few chapters....the problem with this novel is i dont see any plot moving (read till ch60) if it was upto me i would already started going to diff world or something else to keep novel interesting
Please more chapters. ITS A VERY GOOD NOVEL. Here the thing if you stop bringing more chapters for this novel then I know for a fact that I won't read any other novel you write because you will not finish any novel you write. I HAVE SEEN AN READ books of other authors who are very good lose all their followers because they don't finish their novels. They would go on to write a new novel only to realize barely anyone reads it because everyone knows it won't be finished.
ngl he look like Leo from black clover.it is interesting. yeah git nothing to say anymore. hah haha ha so.... never gonna give you up.
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I enjoyed your story immensely. I see that you haven't updated it in a year so it's probably dropped. Your characters and their relationships was fun getting to know. The world you built was quite large and interesting to learn about. Wish you didn't leave on a cliff hanger but I guessed after rereading the discretion twice more. Also wish it wasn't dropped before there were any lemons. Thank you for writing this story.
I want the continution of this story please just when i when the story was getting nice the author suddenly drops it. I have one message to the author don't write a story if you can't complete it or get distracted by this. "I AM DISSAPOINTED!!".
Legalzin........................................................................................................................................................................................
i liked the until he became !!booomm!! arrogant young master like he literally thinks that there are no one who could threaten him liie come on at use the common sense used in any cultivation novel that there is always stronger one out ther or there is aleays a higher mountain and the setting like they have mage but they dont use them except fighting like right now i understood why the mc become stupid because the people of the world are stupid, and like there is magic but there is no one who could do healing magic like comeon after the beast herd only rem had to heal the injured soldier..
Система призыва - даже открывать читать не буду. 4 звезды, автор старался..........................................................................
Yo! where you been at? Ive been waiting for you to write more and Im on the verge of committing genocide. This one and "Im Voldemort" are both great reads. Dont abandon them.
Writing quality is weirdly bad, working with any write proofing tool would fix like 90% of the writing but I guess everything comes across clearly so no real issues with that. The last update was 6mnths ago so yeah... Story development is really bland, there isn't really the main plot-line and so the author has to shove in random events whenever. The character design also pretty bland. specifically, MC has a ridiculous power trip type of personality and it only gets worse as the story goes on. That was the reason why I dropped this because it was bearable at the beginning of the story because of the interesting system but it's just too cringe at some point. World background is generic fantasy, not bad but the author doesn't even try to be original about it. Bad kingdom, good kingdom, demi-human kingdom pretty much. Oh, and there are also dungeons and ranks that increase your lifespan by an unknown amount. Well, chapters are really short with a shameless amount of advertising so yeah there isn't really a place in all of that to actually build the power system of the world itself from the ground up. Liked the gacha, everything else is meh.
I like this one more then Voldemort one because Voldemort one has a coocoo for cocopuff mc so... But Anyway not gonna make this long, 5-stars because I enjoy it and still waiting for you to come back to this :) or maybe =) hmmm choices choices....
very long rise time between chapters Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaadadadadadadadadafafafafafaffadadadadadaxqxqgsgagagacacagatataysgwgqhatattshqh
It's a good story, a little op but that's fine stories going good so far keep it up and just check for grammar. I love the way you seem to be going with the story.
Pretty good going so far. The story has got Kingdom Building, Dungeon Crawling, Summons, a sprinkle of Romance and lots of Bad-assery, although the last bit is more by the MC's servant than himself.
good one 😀😀😀😃😀😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😀😃😀😃😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😀😃😀😃😀😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😀
Book is fine but I fcking hate the stupid dumb titles. It makes me think i am reading a 13year old's book. Words to fill up the rest of the post.
Writing is good with little missed, but the main complaint would be how author usually uses a whole page as a note on promotion and most of the time random notes or jokes. Updates are stable. The story is honestly a mess. While it exists it isn't heading in any real direction, developments are slow and arcs are streched most of the time. The only *proper* character in the story is the MC because every other character is living traits basically. If the author wants someone to be naive, there won't be any thought process behind it it'll just be that way, like how Aella dumbly believed her maid after spending 6 years with MC. While the author did later provide a reason like the maid being there a long time it's just bland after she spent 6 fucking years with MC after he saved her. Other characters are basically forgettable since they either feel like MCs personal-power. The MC himself is an awfully created character. He is portraied as a generally nice charcter but by this point generally does dubious things for his own good without care for others. He is supposedly reincarnated from earth but acts like a general xianxia protagonist. For dubious deeds is training child assassins and letting the mother of a child(which was presented as generally caring and nice) be sacrificed to a god to prove the existence of gods... A generally nice person from earth would feel guilt or question himself for either of these. And no matter how well you treat child assassins they are still child assassins. The world is somewhat developed at this point and we know a decent amount about it.
Seems like the author gave up in this story [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Let's see, first of all I come to say that it's not worth reading Now let's go to the rest of the analysis. . I'm in the chapter 127, Take this into account . WRITING: English is not my first language, I am Brazilian, I read through the translator to understand better and what I see is not bad, with nothing to complain about his writing. . UPDATE: The only good thing about this work is the daily posts but with the amount of words written, anyone could do it. . DEVELOPMENT: It started well and ruined everything in the process, the story boils down to a character full of himself doing bullshit around and everyone wagging their tail at him. I would like to say that the author got lost in the story but it doesn't seem to be that since he totally ignored all the tips that the readers gave until everyone gave up on him. . CHARACTER: It's just an idiot child doing what he does in his head, totally disregarding logic. . WORLD DEVELOPMENT: If I have already forgotten, it is being totally ignored for the benefit of the protagonist
i love this story but i am worried that it will end up premium please dont do that i want to enjoy this book but i am worried that it will become unreadable halfway through
Hey,this is Molly, an editor from Ringdom. I just read your book. and I'd like to know if you are interested in releasing or distributing your books on our platform. You'll get paid if you'd like to work with us.It's only because I really admire your talent and love your book that I made it through the websites to send you this message.If you are interested ,do let me know and feel free to ask me anytime you like if you have any questions via this email: s9033107ringdom@gmail.com
I would like see more use of system and more summons. Also, world need more background, that already 100 chapters and I don't know eat and tame people in that world beasts or they toxic ot something. And characters need more work, all villains here just some Joffrey's.
it's a good novel and nice story. I think you should not make the control the max, but make it skill gradual increase also I think you should make the skill like diable jamble from one piece or the phoenix skill from against the god. you should train the weapon you choose.
it's nice novel, I think you should give him more element ( especially wood or nature) and also i think you should make him study alchemy that also will improve his fire magic. the mc should add the training of magic manipulation like make Mana into arrow, sword or spear and combine them with element.
I hate summoning system novel, they always drop their novel and I only see one that's still ongoing so far but this novel is great. The author had plan for this novel and would not drop this novel base on his history of past novel he wrote.