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Ok I'm just gonna write a short nothing fancy simple review... So..... writing quality as I've seen in the story has been good as of lately especially with the ED doing editing and what not and the occasional mini banter between the Author is quite hilarious as well. ______________________________________ Now the story itself developes quite well despite the fact that's it's completely mashed together...and not in a bad way. I say I mean it completely works out with all the events that happen with the MC's involvement. So that's pretty great itself. ________________________________________ Ok so like I said for the story dev. the MC blending in with all the fanfic characters is great and to be completely honest some of these characters from other fabrics/novel etc. completely fit in well with the story . Which can sometimes be a bit hard for some authors to write and concentrate on all the mashed up parts as well remembering specific plots to story line. ________________________________________ Now I don't really mind how long it takes for a update to come by as I'm a patient fellow...yeah so... you take your time on those. So far the chapter updates are great... you'll get no complaints from me😁👌 whatsoever. With the World Background everything is great, no problems whatsoever, all the plots from separate stories seem to blend in extremely well together 🤔hmm.... ______________________________________ Anyway I give ya full marks for the commitment to write such a complex story. Excellent masterpiece you have done here, I look forward to reading more in the future. Thx for the read 😁😁😁✌️✌️✌️
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I tried, I really tried reading it but it's too cringe for me, worst MC ever. The crossover idea is not bad but it ruined the story for me. The world background is good because it's the manga of komi so it's pretty good. overall: BAD
I love it and it's one of my favorite ff i got worried when i saw the last chap but immediately got relieved thanks for existing sensei~ Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel!
I think this is a good story but I think it would be ten times better if they like we're friends for a longer amount of time. Like it goes from introducing each other to 'Theres no one else for me' in like three days. I think that there are simply to many characters too fast. There's not enough time for development of characters at all. Also I find that when the characters are friends they are more interesting and have more personality then 'wow he's so cool, I love him' or 'wow hes so cool, am I really worthy of such a person.' It feels like when the characters fall for the MC they lose like half their personality.
i checked this fanfiction again after seeing the chapters cuz i swear i thought i was tripping cuz it's been a long time since this last updated.
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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I caught up to the latest chapter and I really love this fan fic but the author has not updated this in a month I just hope that the author can update this or maybe even a mass release will be good.
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was really enjoying this fan fic but it just feels constantly derailed, also the body swap thing was too much for me couldn't finish it after that.
Overall it's a really good book and I really hope you don't drop this as I'm already hooked like a fish. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
hi author I'm from the Philippines and I just want to say thank you for this wonderful opportunity to read this beautiful story and thank you for your hardwork and please keep going until the end thank you
WAHAHAHAHAHA (kukukuku¨i¨) I came back to reread one of my favorite fanfic's. Komi-San(Best Girl) Zero Two(Waifu) Esdeath(Waifu) Hinata-Chan(Waifu) Konjiki No Yami(Waifu) Kaguya(Waifu) Egg(Waifu)---[Martial God Asura] Kurumi(Waifu) Saeko Busujima(Waifu)
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Spoiler for future chapters. First time reviewing so bare with me. I thought the start of the fic was okay. I generally don't like too many mixed world's in one but I stuck through. It was enjoyable enough. The system in the fic was okay, but why didn't the MC just max all his skills is beyond me. Now what I'm gonna say are just what I personally didn't like. Chapters 68 and up. I was already getting a headache when you told us(the readers) to go read an NTR doujin to understand the future chapters for one character. Putting Saki from 'that' doujin was already pushing it for me, but also adding characters from series that relies on action and super powers was also another petty bit I didn't like. Don't get me wrong I like DxD but just adding them for the sake of making the MC's harem bigger is just what?, also the first lemon wasn't with his official girlfriend of a few days bugged me. Hurdur you saw my dildo, I am horny, let's ****. What??. Also to add that Sakura has no idea about the other girls that he'll eventually add to the harem apart from Saki because of the Karaoke chapters. Now to continue, chapter 68 and up, I personally don't like body swapping. Idk where the hell this plot point came from? Maybe you discussed it on your discord or whatever but it seemed forced as hell. But I still forced myself to read it. But after getting through those gruelling chapters I just lost motivation on reading. Especially when the body swapping is going to be a reoccurring thing. I stopped at chapter 77. Lastly, this is just me being nit-picky but there's too many A/N and E/N through the chapters. It broke my immersion, like a lot.
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Author Here! Shamelessly giving myself a 5 Star! Okay first of all for those who doesn't like Harem I suggest you to stand back right now! cause this novel isn't for you! Second This Story is extremely slow, yeah like most day takes a few chapters or so to finish. Third It's Rather Complicated, I do take some suggestions sometimes on whatever Anime, manga and Novel would be added in the story as long as I'm a little bit familiar with it! Fourth Regarding the storylines of Anime, Manga and Novel that is on this Novel I wouldn't follow it at all! because i the author will be the one to make the plot or not sometimes I do follow but it's a pain anyway. That's all thanks for reading.
Ok I'm just gonna write a short nothing fancy simple review... So..... writing quality as I've seen in the story has been good as of lately especially with the ED doing editing and what not and the occasional mini banter between the Author is quite hilarious as well. ______________________________________ Now the story itself developes quite well despite the fact that's it's completely mashed together...and not in a bad way. I say I mean it completely works out with all the events that happen with the MC's involvement. So that's pretty great itself. ________________________________________ Ok so like I said for the story dev. the MC blending in with all the fanfic characters is great and to be completely honest some of these characters from other fabrics/novel etc. completely fit in well with the story . Which can sometimes be a bit hard for some authors to write and concentrate on all the mashed up parts as well remembering specific plots to story line. ________________________________________ Now I don't really mind how long it takes for a update to come by as I'm a patient fellow...yeah so... you take your time on those. So far the chapter updates are great... you'll get no complaints from me😁👌 whatsoever. With the World Background everything is great, no problems whatsoever, all the plots from separate stories seem to blend in extremely well together 🤔hmm.... ______________________________________ Anyway I give ya full marks for the commitment to write such a complex story. Excellent masterpiece you have done here, I look forward to reading more in the future. Thx for the read 😁😁😁✌️✌️✌️
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I tried, I really tried reading it but it's too cringe for me, worst MC ever. The crossover idea is not bad but it ruined the story for me. The world background is good because it's the manga of komi so it's pretty good. overall: BAD
I love it and it's one of my favorite ff i got worried when i saw the last chap but immediately got relieved thanks for existing sensei~ Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel! Thanks for the wonderful novel!
I think this is a good story but I think it would be ten times better if they like we're friends for a longer amount of time. Like it goes from introducing each other to 'Theres no one else for me' in like three days. I think that there are simply to many characters too fast. There's not enough time for development of characters at all. Also I find that when the characters are friends they are more interesting and have more personality then 'wow he's so cool, I love him' or 'wow hes so cool, am I really worthy of such a person.' It feels like when the characters fall for the MC they lose like half their personality.
i checked this fanfiction again after seeing the chapters cuz i swear i thought i was tripping cuz it's been a long time since this last updated.
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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I caught up to the latest chapter and I really love this fan fic but the author has not updated this in a month I just hope that the author can update this or maybe even a mass release will be good.
Nice stuff. ...................................................................................................................................
was really enjoying this fan fic but it just feels constantly derailed, also the body swap thing was too much for me couldn't finish it after that.
Overall it's a really good book and I really hope you don't drop this as I'm already hooked like a fish. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
hi author I'm from the Philippines and I just want to say thank you for this wonderful opportunity to read this beautiful story and thank you for your hardwork and please keep going until the end thank you
WAHAHAHAHAHA (kukukuku¨i¨) I came back to reread one of my favorite fanfic's. Komi-San(Best Girl) Zero Two(Waifu) Esdeath(Waifu) Hinata-Chan(Waifu) Konjiki No Yami(Waifu) Kaguya(Waifu) Egg(Waifu)---[Martial God Asura] Kurumi(Waifu) Saeko Busujima(Waifu)
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Spoiler for future chapters. First time reviewing so bare with me. I thought the start of the fic was okay. I generally don't like too many mixed world's in one but I stuck through. It was enjoyable enough. The system in the fic was okay, but why didn't the MC just max all his skills is beyond me. Now what I'm gonna say are just what I personally didn't like. Chapters 68 and up. I was already getting a headache when you told us(the readers) to go read an NTR doujin to understand the future chapters for one character. Putting Saki from 'that' doujin was already pushing it for me, but also adding characters from series that relies on action and super powers was also another petty bit I didn't like. Don't get me wrong I like DxD but just adding them for the sake of making the MC's harem bigger is just what?, also the first lemon wasn't with his official girlfriend of a few days bugged me. Hurdur you saw my dildo, I am horny, let's ****. What??. Also to add that Sakura has no idea about the other girls that he'll eventually add to the harem apart from Saki because of the Karaoke chapters. Now to continue, chapter 68 and up, I personally don't like body swapping. Idk where the hell this plot point came from? Maybe you discussed it on your discord or whatever but it seemed forced as hell. But I still forced myself to read it. But after getting through those gruelling chapters I just lost motivation on reading. Especially when the body swapping is going to be a reoccurring thing. I stopped at chapter 77. Lastly, this is just me being nit-picky but there's too many A/N and E/N through the chapters. It broke my immersion, like a lot.
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Author Here! Shamelessly giving myself a 5 Star! Okay first of all for those who doesn't like Harem I suggest you to stand back right now! cause this novel isn't for you! Second This Story is extremely slow, yeah like most day takes a few chapters or so to finish. Third It's Rather Complicated, I do take some suggestions sometimes on whatever Anime, manga and Novel would be added in the story as long as I'm a little bit familiar with it! Fourth Regarding the storylines of Anime, Manga and Novel that is on this Novel I wouldn't follow it at all! because i the author will be the one to make the plot or not sometimes I do follow but it's a pain anyway. That's all thanks for reading.