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do not read this If you do not know anything about dnd, it will suck if you don't. I don't, and it sucks and is boring. honestly what idiot thought up saving throws and such for a supposed real life setting and only being able to know so many spells or spend an hour each day to setup lol I know dnd is popular with a certain crowd but my gosh I think hanging a clothes iron off your privates wouldn't be as painful as trying to read this or even make sense of it. so you are warned
A incredibly well written Webnovel with interesting and well thought out mechanics. The quality of the writing is topnotch and reads comfortably, and the story is well thought out. The basis for this world and the system of leveling is based around dnd which I am not very familiar with but it was nevertheless an interesting approach to a gamelit novel.
Very good story, but from chapter 61 the quality of Redaction go to very bad, i drop it for this
The translation is bad, but not illegible, but the way its written makes reading this so tedious. I generally despise the genre gamelit, systems, but give the fact that this was based on dnd I was keen to give it a try. Poor judgement on my part. I'm on chapter 126 and reading this is as engaging and entertaining as passing a kidney stone with the size and shape of a spike marble.
The fact that this is #7 on trending at this time and only 60 of the chapters are properly translated is just saddening.
For people that actually have a brain, the story is great. For people that are like 'It's chapter 19 and the main character isn't a murderhobo god yet', all I can say is go find one of those global transmigration junk food novels to read. My main problem with the novel is the translation really ... The chapter 50ish "Uncanny Forethought" Feat became "bizarre forethought" Feat in chapter 68 . You can feel the drop in translation just from comparing these 2 word structures. The first takes your mind for a spin and is really thoughtful while the second is confounding and feels icky . I wish a qualified translator would take over and rewrite all of it after the free chapters .
Decent enough story up to chapter 60, at which point this was dropped. Chapters 61+ have been mass uploaded recently as trash-quality MTL. This story deserves better than MTL garbage.
The story takes on a heavy dnd focus so if at any time your confused u can always look it up on Google. The story ad resurfaced on webnovel after a two year hiatus because it loss the voting poll, some of the translations are incorrect but it's not hard to follow if u have the patience to read through. From where I'm at in the story I can honestly say it's not a bad novel and would recommend to anyone that likes dnd or is at the very least interested in it.
This book is wonderful. Why the other stopped? Who knows. Anyway, it has great development, is interesting, and fun to follow. Hopefully you will enjoy this as much as I have. Also if you like such stories try this one: Life Drain System.
Why is LITERALLY EVERY CHAPTER a information dump on things that don't make sense or we don't even need to know. I'm on Chap 19 and the mc is still in training to get his class. I recently started skipping the information dump paragraphs and realized that there is only 2-3 paragraphs in every chapter where the story actually progresses...wtf
I have read the RAWs for this one... Not till the end but later on the protagonist becomes OP just by designs of his master.. Practical every thing is handed to him.. while others are struggling to learn basics... beading for every spells in their hand... Protagonist gets all possible spells for every level and job for each level on level up... I wont have problem if he dis some work to get it... but no.. since he got the tester account and was chosen by his teacher.. he is spoon fed 90% for all his ability... Any way don't like this point... there is no innovation.. no struggle.. heck he chose a different line of profession after reincarnation for most of his ability from previous life is not applicable here..
Revelar spoiler
I have to say that it is one of the best game novel I read. It is well written and I like the protagonist and the story. I sometimes skip the boring part, which makes the story so detailed and realistic. I hope this novel will be continued:)
Wow, this novel got dropped from trial read list pretty fast despite the support, while a certain other novel about a baron or something gets picked even faster without much of a support.
https://mangabob.com/manga/cute-wife-at-home-never-marry-a-crafty-husband-comics/chapter-41/https://mangabob.com/manga/cute-wife-at-home-never-marry-a-crafty-husband-comics/chapter-41/https://mangabob.com/manga/cute-wife-at-home-never-marry-a-crafty-husband-comics/chapter-41/
Loving this story. Hope it gets chosen to continue. Please please please. I find the MC likable and enjoy watching his progression.😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
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I don't have time for this 140 nonsense. I only want to say that I need more chapters, so hurry up with my new chapters yeah? thank you translator. now back to talking to the website. GIMME MOAR!!!!
It is gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd trust me ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooookkkkkkkkkk
https://manganelo.com/chapter/bq919100/chapter_89https://manganelo.com/chapter/bq919100/chapter_89https://manganelo.com/chapter/bq919100/chapter_89https://manganelo.com/chapter/bq919100/chapter_89https://manganelo.com/chapter/bq919100/chapter_89
Any one who likes reincarnation to a game world novel then this is a great pick. I wanted to stop reading this around chapter 25 and then again at 36 as I just couldn't keep focus, dreading the wall of text that would give me information/answers to questions that were never asked, only to find our that if they didn't do this you would of been super confused, but by chapter 52 you start seeing things fall into place and starting to make a lot more sense.. then bam you at the end of whats been translated feeling like "FAAARRRRRRKKK I WAS FINALLY ENJOYING THAT" The side character development is pretty bad, but this can be seen as the author trying to make people follow the mind set of the MC, he just doesn't have time to worry about side characters at this point in the novel, so i don't see this as bad point,k if it stays like this though at later chapters then its gonna be an issue. I am giving this 5 on everything because i can see potential in the novel and want to see further updates, if or when this novel start releasing more chapters I will re visit this review to update.
I really hope this novel gets picked up, I enjoy the world setting, and I really want to know what happens next. I hope web novel will pick this one come on editor.
This is a really good book. The character development is slowly happening and world building is tedious but understandable and quite honestly needed. The story line is good and the numbers for stats are not pulled out of a hat but very accurately calculated (Thank God). Can't wait for the full release
Which of the following do performance evaluation tests NOT measurWhich of the following do performance evaluation tests NOT measur EXP you don't gatta tell me the answer the question i just do this for exp
so much bulshit in the chapters and very little story direction. like he is supposed to be learning but in each chapter he gets sidetracked and the story stalls while he talks to the npc one side tangent. I like the story it's just annoying .
saya sudah membaca hingga chapter 240 Mtl terlalu banyak kekecewaan saya dengan novel ini. ide cerita yang bagus namun dengan eksekusi yang buruk. Bukanhakah dia berasal dari masa depan yang kembali ke masa lalu ? seharusnya dia tau tidak semua orang pantas ditolong, logika keceradas sosialnya seperti anak sekolah dasar. karena dia dari masa depan seharusnya dia tau pentingnya faksi, tapi lihat ini dia merahasiakan Lv dan statusnya di gamen seperti anak sekolah dasar yang berlagak sepeti pahlawan betopeng di komik. banyak hal yang bisa dia capai hilang karena tingkah lakunya. Dengan latar belakang cerita yang mengisahkan orang tua mc mati diserang naga. bagus karena menyarankan orang tua mumbuat akun game, Seharusnya dia tau tingkat keamanan didunia itu sangat menghawatirkan karena akan terjadi perang. dia tidak bisa selalu berada disekitar orang tuanya setiap saat, seharusnya dia menyarankan orang tuanya untuk masuk bermain setidaknya 1 kali dalam seminggu, dengan itu orang tuanya akan naik level, yah walaupun setidaknya maksimal level 1 namun setidaknya ketika orang tua akan pindah kedunia game itu mereka akan memiliki status yang lebih tinggi dari orang tua lainnya atau kebanyakan orang yang bukannya hanya memiliki pakain saja ketika pindah. dia bisa membuat orang tuanya memiliki job samping seperti peneliti sihir, ahli elixir, atau hanya sekedar job bangsawan yang mengatur bisnis mc, dengan itu mc akan memiliki orang yang bisa dipercaya, novel ini bukan hanya mc saja yang pindah kedunia game !! dibebera bab dia mengatakan para pemain sudah mulai membuat faksi namun dia memberikan informasi secara bebas ke forum yang bisa dilihat oleh semua orang. Jika latar belakang cerita ini mengangkat panji peradaban Bumi dan berperang melawan kekuatan mengerikan dari Dunia Lain, saya akan mendukung tindakan mc menyebarkan informasi secara bebas seperti ini, namun novel ini tidak. dan banyak lagi kekesalan saya saat membaca novel, anda bisa membacanya sendiri.
Revelar spoiler
RNA determines the sequence of amino acids in proteins and polypeptides by a two-step process: transcription of DNA produces mRNA in the nucleus, then translation of the mRNA to tRNA takes place at the ribosome in the cytoplasm.
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Is this a harem novel? Why r all the people he meet female as far as I have read? His mentor, the god he believes, other genius players, the library spirit, the artifact spirit, everythingggggg😡😡😡
do not read this If you do not know anything about dnd, it will suck if you don't. I don't, and it sucks and is boring. honestly what idiot thought up saving throws and such for a supposed real life setting and only being able to know so many spells or spend an hour each day to setup lol I know dnd is popular with a certain crowd but my gosh I think hanging a clothes iron off your privates wouldn't be as painful as trying to read this or even make sense of it. so you are warned
A incredibly well written Webnovel with interesting and well thought out mechanics. The quality of the writing is topnotch and reads comfortably, and the story is well thought out. The basis for this world and the system of leveling is based around dnd which I am not very familiar with but it was nevertheless an interesting approach to a gamelit novel.
Very good story, but from chapter 61 the quality of Redaction go to very bad, i drop it for this
The translation is bad, but not illegible, but the way its written makes reading this so tedious. I generally despise the genre gamelit, systems, but give the fact that this was based on dnd I was keen to give it a try. Poor judgement on my part. I'm on chapter 126 and reading this is as engaging and entertaining as passing a kidney stone with the size and shape of a spike marble.
The fact that this is #7 on trending at this time and only 60 of the chapters are properly translated is just saddening.
For people that actually have a brain, the story is great. For people that are like 'It's chapter 19 and the main character isn't a murderhobo god yet', all I can say is go find one of those global transmigration junk food novels to read. My main problem with the novel is the translation really ... The chapter 50ish "Uncanny Forethought" Feat became "bizarre forethought" Feat in chapter 68 . You can feel the drop in translation just from comparing these 2 word structures. The first takes your mind for a spin and is really thoughtful while the second is confounding and feels icky . I wish a qualified translator would take over and rewrite all of it after the free chapters .
Decent enough story up to chapter 60, at which point this was dropped. Chapters 61+ have been mass uploaded recently as trash-quality MTL. This story deserves better than MTL garbage.
The story takes on a heavy dnd focus so if at any time your confused u can always look it up on Google. The story ad resurfaced on webnovel after a two year hiatus because it loss the voting poll, some of the translations are incorrect but it's not hard to follow if u have the patience to read through. From where I'm at in the story I can honestly say it's not a bad novel and would recommend to anyone that likes dnd or is at the very least interested in it.
This book is wonderful. Why the other stopped? Who knows. Anyway, it has great development, is interesting, and fun to follow. Hopefully you will enjoy this as much as I have. Also if you like such stories try this one: Life Drain System.
Why is LITERALLY EVERY CHAPTER a information dump on things that don't make sense or we don't even need to know. I'm on Chap 19 and the mc is still in training to get his class. I recently started skipping the information dump paragraphs and realized that there is only 2-3 paragraphs in every chapter where the story actually progresses...wtf
I have read the RAWs for this one... Not till the end but later on the protagonist becomes OP just by designs of his master.. Practical every thing is handed to him.. while others are struggling to learn basics... beading for every spells in their hand... Protagonist gets all possible spells for every level and job for each level on level up... I wont have problem if he dis some work to get it... but no.. since he got the tester account and was chosen by his teacher.. he is spoon fed 90% for all his ability... Any way don't like this point... there is no innovation.. no struggle.. heck he chose a different line of profession after reincarnation for most of his ability from previous life is not applicable here..
Revelar spoiler I have to say that it is one of the best game novel I read. It is well written and I like the protagonist and the story. I sometimes skip the boring part, which makes the story so detailed and realistic. I hope this novel will be continued:)
Wow, this novel got dropped from trial read list pretty fast despite the support, while a certain other novel about a baron or something gets picked even faster without much of a support.
https://mangabob.com/manga/cute-wife-at-home-never-marry-a-crafty-husband-comics/chapter-41/https://mangabob.com/manga/cute-wife-at-home-never-marry-a-crafty-husband-comics/chapter-41/https://mangabob.com/manga/cute-wife-at-home-never-marry-a-crafty-husband-comics/chapter-41/
Loving this story. Hope it gets chosen to continue. Please please please. I find the MC likable and enjoy watching his progression.😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
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I don't have time for this 140 nonsense. I only want to say that I need more chapters, so hurry up with my new chapters yeah? thank you translator. now back to talking to the website. GIMME MOAR!!!!
It is gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd trust me ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooookkkkkkkkkk
https://manganelo.com/chapter/bq919100/chapter_89https://manganelo.com/chapter/bq919100/chapter_89https://manganelo.com/chapter/bq919100/chapter_89https://manganelo.com/chapter/bq919100/chapter_89https://manganelo.com/chapter/bq919100/chapter_89
Any one who likes reincarnation to a game world novel then this is a great pick. I wanted to stop reading this around chapter 25 and then again at 36 as I just couldn't keep focus, dreading the wall of text that would give me information/answers to questions that were never asked, only to find our that if they didn't do this you would of been super confused, but by chapter 52 you start seeing things fall into place and starting to make a lot more sense.. then bam you at the end of whats been translated feeling like "FAAARRRRRRKKK I WAS FINALLY ENJOYING THAT" The side character development is pretty bad, but this can be seen as the author trying to make people follow the mind set of the MC, he just doesn't have time to worry about side characters at this point in the novel, so i don't see this as bad point,k if it stays like this though at later chapters then its gonna be an issue. I am giving this 5 on everything because i can see potential in the novel and want to see further updates, if or when this novel start releasing more chapters I will re visit this review to update.
I really hope this novel gets picked up, I enjoy the world setting, and I really want to know what happens next. I hope web novel will pick this one come on editor.
This is a really good book. The character development is slowly happening and world building is tedious but understandable and quite honestly needed. The story line is good and the numbers for stats are not pulled out of a hat but very accurately calculated (Thank God). Can't wait for the full release
Which of the following do performance evaluation tests NOT measurWhich of the following do performance evaluation tests NOT measur EXP you don't gatta tell me the answer the question i just do this for exp
so much bulshit in the chapters and very little story direction. like he is supposed to be learning but in each chapter he gets sidetracked and the story stalls while he talks to the npc one side tangent. I like the story it's just annoying .
saya sudah membaca hingga chapter 240 Mtl terlalu banyak kekecewaan saya dengan novel ini. ide cerita yang bagus namun dengan eksekusi yang buruk. Bukanhakah dia berasal dari masa depan yang kembali ke masa lalu ? seharusnya dia tau tidak semua orang pantas ditolong, logika keceradas sosialnya seperti anak sekolah dasar. karena dia dari masa depan seharusnya dia tau pentingnya faksi, tapi lihat ini dia merahasiakan Lv dan statusnya di gamen seperti anak sekolah dasar yang berlagak sepeti pahlawan betopeng di komik. banyak hal yang bisa dia capai hilang karena tingkah lakunya. Dengan latar belakang cerita yang mengisahkan orang tua mc mati diserang naga. bagus karena menyarankan orang tua mumbuat akun game, Seharusnya dia tau tingkat keamanan didunia itu sangat menghawatirkan karena akan terjadi perang. dia tidak bisa selalu berada disekitar orang tuanya setiap saat, seharusnya dia menyarankan orang tuanya untuk masuk bermain setidaknya 1 kali dalam seminggu, dengan itu orang tuanya akan naik level, yah walaupun setidaknya maksimal level 1 namun setidaknya ketika orang tua akan pindah kedunia game itu mereka akan memiliki status yang lebih tinggi dari orang tua lainnya atau kebanyakan orang yang bukannya hanya memiliki pakain saja ketika pindah. dia bisa membuat orang tuanya memiliki job samping seperti peneliti sihir, ahli elixir, atau hanya sekedar job bangsawan yang mengatur bisnis mc, dengan itu mc akan memiliki orang yang bisa dipercaya, novel ini bukan hanya mc saja yang pindah kedunia game !! dibebera bab dia mengatakan para pemain sudah mulai membuat faksi namun dia memberikan informasi secara bebas ke forum yang bisa dilihat oleh semua orang. Jika latar belakang cerita ini mengangkat panji peradaban Bumi dan berperang melawan kekuatan mengerikan dari Dunia Lain, saya akan mendukung tindakan mc menyebarkan informasi secara bebas seperti ini, namun novel ini tidak. dan banyak lagi kekesalan saya saat membaca novel, anda bisa membacanya sendiri.
Revelar spoiler RNA determines the sequence of amino acids in proteins and polypeptides by a two-step process: transcription of DNA produces mRNA in the nucleus, then translation of the mRNA to tRNA takes place at the ribosome in the cytoplasm.
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Is this a harem novel? Why r all the people he meet female as far as I have read? His mentor, the god he believes, other genius players, the library spirit, the artifact spirit, everythingggggg😡😡😡