Face of Fate

LV 6

Ervs

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LV 4

LisaMarieCrawshaw

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LV 12

Starry_sky

For starter the FL is strong and ML has other purposes than chasing a skirt. The background is really interesting. The major problem I faced is the editing. It is a complex story which has many branches, it is difficult to add them up at the beginning and then the grammar is challege on top of that. This seriously needs editing otherwise I feel this one is going to turn into a story with great potential.

LV 14

Dantaliens

Too many perspectives/characters which aren't introduced properly,confusing.Well at least ML has good backstory and isn't your typical joe who thinks with his dick...

LV 4

Phantomfiend

It's good novel. Understandable for MC not showing his potential yet, since its only have less than 8 chapter. And you need update daily to, so other have the interest for collect the novel.

LV 10

Sam_Redowl

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