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The story is well made so far and i like how the story is progresing your grammar is also good overall its a good novel to read and i think am going to recomened the novel to a friend of mine he may like it so please keep up the good work.
OOH GOD! This novel is unique in weird ways. The japanese's novels influence is really present in the history, the cliches like the events in the adventure guild, the noble girl rescue, reactions about the MC OP, etc. even the Alice's name feels really common for a noble girl. But how I really like this things, I enjoy this novel like a kid in a toy store. When something is close to happen and I say "this gonna be like that" and that what I say really happened...uff, sublime. Also thing, Is an extra point that I don't feel cringed when the characters says things like "Um" "onee-sama" or "okaa-san",normally when I read things like that in non-japanese novels is feeling really forced, but here is so natural. Something important is: this novel doesn't feel like a recopilation of cliches, the author add differents things that make this novel unique, and this is the best part of all. So If you like Japanese novels with a OP MC with funnies cliches and a good update stability , this novel is to you. Ps: sorry about my English, this's not my native language.
I'm the author, but let me give you my personal opinon and more informations! First, I know that this story is a bit "cliché", there is many things that you can also find in others novel. But if a lot of people write about this theme, it means that some people like it, right?~ Furthermore, I don't recommand this novel for those that don't like overpowered MC and like to see the MC struggle (she won't). The novel show often other people's reaction about her OPness and lack of common sense. Sometime, the scene are a bit funny. Since the MC is OP, I wrote a lot about business managment and the interaction between the MC and the nobles (this point will be more developed in the future). Moreover, the novel is very "slice of life", it's written in the first person (MC's POV most of the time) and it's quite easy to read and understand what happen. Also, there are many similarities with the novel "kuma kuma kuma bear" about the OPness, the business managment, the nobles and others stuffs. The novel is very "japanese-like" by its plot and interaction with characters. Overall, it's not a novel for everyone. If you prefer to read a novel full of mysteries with an original plot, then it's not for you. However, if you enjoy isekai and slice of life with OP MC and a bit of business managment, then you might like this one a lot!
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The story is well made so far and i like how the story is progresing your grammar is also good overall its a good novel to read and i think am going to recomened the novel to a friend of mine he may like it so please keep up the good work.
OOH GOD! This novel is unique in weird ways. The japanese's novels influence is really present in the history, the cliches like the events in the adventure guild, the noble girl rescue, reactions about the MC OP, etc. even the Alice's name feels really common for a noble girl. But how I really like this things, I enjoy this novel like a kid in a toy store. When something is close to happen and I say "this gonna be like that" and that what I say really happened...uff, sublime. Also thing, Is an extra point that I don't feel cringed when the characters says things like "Um" "onee-sama" or "okaa-san",normally when I read things like that in non-japanese novels is feeling really forced, but here is so natural. Something important is: this novel doesn't feel like a recopilation of cliches, the author add differents things that make this novel unique, and this is the best part of all. So If you like Japanese novels with a OP MC with funnies cliches and a good update stability , this novel is to you. Ps: sorry about my English, this's not my native language.
I'm the author, but let me give you my personal opinon and more informations! First, I know that this story is a bit "cliché", there is many things that you can also find in others novel. But if a lot of people write about this theme, it means that some people like it, right?~ Furthermore, I don't recommand this novel for those that don't like overpowered MC and like to see the MC struggle (she won't). The novel show often other people's reaction about her OPness and lack of common sense. Sometime, the scene are a bit funny. Since the MC is OP, I wrote a lot about business managment and the interaction between the MC and the nobles (this point will be more developed in the future). Moreover, the novel is very "slice of life", it's written in the first person (MC's POV most of the time) and it's quite easy to read and understand what happen. Also, there are many similarities with the novel "kuma kuma kuma bear" about the OPness, the business managment, the nobles and others stuffs. The novel is very "japanese-like" by its plot and interaction with characters. Overall, it's not a novel for everyone. If you prefer to read a novel full of mysteries with an original plot, then it's not for you. However, if you enjoy isekai and slice of life with OP MC and a bit of business managment, then you might like this one a lot!