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I have enjoyed all the books of this author and I hope he writes more he may not write masterpieces but they are always entertaining and that is all that matters.
"If you cannot embrace the concept of true peace, you are not worthy of even calling yourself my wife by Yun Che
"My older brother can open a jar of cucumbers" That's a real plot of that ff, change my mind.
feels a bit ordinary in the beginning, but the longer the author gets better at writing this novel, especially in writing the plot, I also really like the harem and this is pure wish fulfillment which suits my taste
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Chapter 6 is my stop. I hate when things are forced just for plot. I could stomach how easily he took Chu Yueli but the fact that no one seems to care much about the supposed death of "Yun Che" and easily prepared a wedding the next day was just beyong stupid. Especially when no one questioned how he easily dismissed the "death" of his brother and was only planning on observing. Tell me, if someone killed your family, what would you do? Observe? Obviously, the author didn't plan this through
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finally, after spending so much frustration with the other two works of the author, leaving me only in the imagination, he finally wrote a story with R18 content. leaving that aside, the story is very good and interesting, the MC is enjoying his life in the world of cultivation while planning to **** Yun Che's life while pretending to be a good brother, the rhythm of the story goes well, in my opinion, not even too rushed or too slow. for now the story does not seem to be inferior to the other two works that are great, emphasizing the "seems", because there are not many chapters so far. I thank the author and keep up the good work!
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MC is a 'very' good brother. 'Teaches Yun Che' very well. Takes all the girls. MC is also OP which is a plus in my book for the MC. I just now want him to go to the God Realm
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A good atg fanfic where the mc is op and does whatever he wants and he clearly wants to mess with yun che and take all the womens.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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I have enjoyed all the books of this author and I hope he writes more he may not write masterpieces but they are always entertaining and that is all that matters.
"If you cannot embrace the concept of true peace, you are not worthy of even calling yourself my wife by Yun Che
"My older brother can open a jar of cucumbers" That's a real plot of that ff, change my mind.
feels a bit ordinary in the beginning, but the longer the author gets better at writing this novel, especially in writing the plot, I also really like the harem and this is pure wish fulfillment which suits my taste
reverence Author you are a god, you managed to create all these novels 10/10 only a supreme being with unlimited intelligence and creativity can do this, seriously this is very good
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Chapter 6 is my stop. I hate when things are forced just for plot. I could stomach how easily he took Chu Yueli but the fact that no one seems to care much about the supposed death of "Yun Che" and easily prepared a wedding the next day was just beyong stupid. Especially when no one questioned how he easily dismissed the "death" of his brother and was only planning on observing. Tell me, if someone killed your family, what would you do? Observe? Obviously, the author didn't plan this through
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I think Author have System to write this Freaking good fanfic ( ╹▽╹ ) ..... . ..................................... More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More ...
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Revelar spoiler I don't have anything to say about this. Just go read it. I don't have anything to say about this. Just go read it. I don't have anything to say about this. Just go read it.
finally, after spending so much frustration with the other two works of the author, leaving me only in the imagination, he finally wrote a story with R18 content. leaving that aside, the story is very good and interesting, the MC is enjoying his life in the world of cultivation while planning to **** Yun Che's life while pretending to be a good brother, the rhythm of the story goes well, in my opinion, not even too rushed or too slow. for now the story does not seem to be inferior to the other two works that are great, emphasizing the "seems", because there are not many chapters so far. I thank the author and keep up the good work!
Revelar spoiler MC is a 'very' good brother. 'Teaches Yun Che' very well. Takes all the girls. MC is also OP which is a plus in my book for the MC. I just now want him to go to the God Realm
Revelar spoiler A good atg fanfic where the mc is op and does whatever he wants and he clearly wants to mess with yun che and take all the womens.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Не плохо, меня зацепило. Мне понравилась скорость раскрытия ЛОРа мира. Эта не поспешность именно то, что я ищу в качественных ФИКах, ведь проскочить пол книги за главу может ЛЮБОЙ Автор, а вот грамотно и по своему раскрыть сюжет - это уже искусство.