Records of Rebirth

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Zerosign

After reading through half the available chapters so far the only thing I can say about this novel is tha it is way too addicting to put down,The first thIng that sets this apart from your cliche shounen isekai is the plot and character development. It excels at creating realistic compelling characters that are brimming with personality in an equally interesting complex plot with many things happening in the background. Not only that, but the diction is very unique and smooth and you can really feel the thought and effort into picking each word as not only is the author’s vocabulary expansive, but also very expressive and intrigueing and bascially never boring.If I had to use a simile it would be like using a different weapon each time when shooting a target, never missing and always hitting the bullseye which would be how i decribe the author’s mastery and control over their diction. Also with the great character development at the start which features excusively the previous world works as a great contrast and indicator of the mc as she progresses through the story which is a way to make a isekai story more complex and interesting even though most of them once they get isekai’d almost never mention the prevoius world and their past life. The story also doesn’t rush plot and takes it time to world build, which may be slow in the beginning, it makes the world ever immersive.

LV 14

LightNight

While I have already created one review for this novel I think I want to go into more detail about my thoughts. Writing Quality: This book has basically zero spelling/grammar mistakes and is fun to read if you like fantasy and magic! 4.5/5 Update Stability: I gave this segemnt three stars as sometimes the author can go awhile without updating but I can’t really jude because every author has their own writing speed. 3/5 Story Development: The story isn’t that fast but at the same tine isn’t to slow. It takes time to flesh out characters and the world that they reside in. 4.8/5 Character Design/Development: If there’s anything in this novel that really catches my eye it’s the character design and development, each character has something to add to the story and each one has their own thoughts and feelings. Some are loyal and honarable and some are mischievous and scheming it has a wonderfull array of different characters and yet they arent so confusing that you loose track! Overall this is an excellent part of thr story. 5/5 World Background: The book gives us a great deal of knowledge of the world of Aeon but but dosen’t drop so much on us that we forget half of it the next chapter. Also the world has plenty of mysteries that we have yet to discover or explore! It gives us knowledge in an easy to comprehend way. Overall 4.8/5 Final thoughts: This book is great and here are some things to expect, The MC is not a genius and does not have a billion iq and is slowly learning about the world around it. The characters are impeccable and I could rants about joe good they are for a long time! Honestly this is probably one of the best books I’ve ever read, virtual and on paper. I will always read this book. I highly recommend! Overall I rate this book a 4.9/5

LV 10

KCChakry

Firstly, please update, I want to read more. The story, concept, writing quality, pacing, character design, character development... everything is done perfectly well. I've always liked stories with non-human MC and this one really got me hooked. Aurelia's cheery personality and her witty sense of humor are the highlight to this story. The teacher/system is kinda an ass but he is a necessary evil I guess. Lastly, I'm loving this story and I will be waiting patiently for the updates but dont take too long okay.. :P

LV 11

EternalNightLotus

Author review 2.0 because everyone seems to be doing one and I thought I'd join in! Things to expect from this story... 1. No OP mc that never faces any problems. I will add that Aurelia is very flawed and some of her decisions will make you shake your head. 2. An mc that acts her age. She's young and it shows! She makes mistakes and as hilarious as they may seem, she does learn from them...or at least she tries to. Wrong things she does at one point, do come back to bite her in the butt. But that doesn't mean she'll keep making mistakes, she's not dumb. She's just learning. 3. Friendship among characters that could be considered enemies or rivals. And yes this includes some reincarnates. Not every character other than the MC is an antagonist. They may have been at one point but Aurelia acknowledges people make mistakes, and she might decide to forgive them - even those that don't deserve it. Or kill them, depending on her mood. 4. Suspicious, sometimes paranoid MC. No Mc that know everything because they reincarnated and have two brains. This mc does not rely on plot armour, so expect lots of questions to be asked about things she encounters because she likes to know...stuff. 5. Characters that have agendas outside the mc. Not every character revolves around her, they may be close but have completely different motives than she does. Some evil/scheming characters are to be expected. 5. Character development for everyone, not just the mc. Side characters will have their own backstories and you will see them changing overtime for better or for worse. Even the mc changes! 6. Romance! Much much much later on in the story, but expect it to be confusing and full of surprises. 7. Slightly slow paced story. Its not slow to the point of crawling, but the first few chapters aren't super fast either because I was focused on establishing a character. 8. Decent writing. I'm not saying it's 100% perfect, you'll get the occasional typo when I proofread too quickly, but I always go back and fix them. Expect some descriptive portions (I like using words to paint scary pictures). But other than that, its alright compared to WN standards...I think. Generally chapters should be between 1500 to 2000 words, some chapters just end up being longer than I expect 🙃

LV 4

NotUse

I was able to read eight chapters so far and here is my review: It has an amazing plot. The introduction was able to grab my attention. The looks of the characters are easy to portray since they are detailed. I could also convey their emotions and character interaction is great as well. The novel is not the cliche type since I was captivated to read further with no typos or errors found when it comes to vocabulary. It was an excellent read and I didn't get bored when reading it. The story development is a bit slow which is fine with me since it does not damage the plot. Another negative I noticed was that there were some misused punctuation but nothing to deter from the read. Another positive thing about the novel is the author's writing style. It is definitely better than some authors here in Webnovel. Paragraphs are also in the perfect length and so far, nothing seemed wordy or whatsoever. Good luck to the author!

LV 4

Drip

The novel has a rather slow start but, trust me! It's all more than worth it! MC is a human who is reborn in another world in a none human body (the way how her race is chosen is pretty funny). She thinks very logically about every situation. She is accompanied by a system that is not perfect and may sometimes be proved unreliable making for an interesting dynamic between MC and System. The author is really good at describing things, places, and situations bringing the story to life. It's a good read for those who want an interesting twist on the system genre! Give it a try!

LV 11

EternalNightLotus

Shameless 5 star review from the author! If you like my book please recommend it to others, rate and leave a comment. It would really make my day :) :) :) :)

LV 14

CassTheEevee

I will give this book a chance because it seems cool but the fact that you stated there will be multiple protagonists is a huge turn off, so if do have multiple protagonists, don't **** it up

LV 12

8em8_em_

a really great book the beginning was really attention grabbing as it went in dept on the prior situation, even if during the middle it seemed to draw out it was worth reading it all becaouse the main character was amazing as well as the other monsters who i found absolutely adorable

LV 2

Winter_Pearl

it's great. the story is made well. the characters are loveable and the world building is amazing and lastly I hope it continues for a long time.

LV 2

OliveBreeze

I’ve read through most of the available and all I can say is its kinda addictive. I love dynamic between Aurelia and Sensei, but I really hate him. He’s super sus and fishy but i guess she needs him as the villian to explore her “good” side. The pacing may seem slow but the details in the story telling are first rate. The author doesn’t spoon feed everything to you like in some books and he ets you figure stuff out with just enough mystery to keep you interested without being too overbearing. I cant wait to see more of the nestlings and the other reincarnated classmates too. Something tells me Sensei is just as much of an asshole to them as he is to her

LV 15

ayayaya

I really like the story. it's super good. although I find the system and the characters a bit annoying, I guess that's part of the plot. anyways, it starts with the preview. It's much longer than normal, and instead of one chapter it keeps going for six. the mc describes some petty drama she had to solve between rotten spoiled noble classmates that I couldn't care less for, which she has to involve herself since she's the responsible class representative. the system which is their teacher puts her on detention for trying to put out the fight instead of doing nothing, and one side character in detention goes knifey knifey, which sucks. she essentially got killed for the teacher and his class, and now while they get to live peaceful lives as doted on children, she has to fight tooth and nails as a snake to survive and evolve.... because of a joke from the goddess. now... that's not bad, but what makes it worse is how the teacher constantly ridicules her choices... badmouths the mc, and he said something like "I don't think you're worthy of the goddess's gift" for eating too much poison to get poison resistance on a quest he gave, which makes him into a total bitch in my book. luckily the mc doesn't really takes this seriously, and she gets to live her life without feeling sorry for herself. now. asides from that... the mc is solid. one reason I like female mcs is 'cause they tend to not go murderhobo, which is super good imo. the mc doesn't mercilessly kills everyone to prevent having enemies... while making more enemies. instead she's smart. instead of killing she tries to use them. she finds herself with a bunch of hungry siblings that would devour each other if worse comes to worse? she doesn't eat and kill them. why not train them? she finds herself in a prison with a bunch of beasts that could become mindless drones... she doesn't eat them. why not use them to create a diversion? the mc is a good mc.

LV 4

MikruZero

This is great! A smart mc and I like her. I remember a light novel that has the same plot as this. Hope you update more for readers like me to read. It's already in my collection and now I'll continue reading!(Still in chap 15)

LV 1

REMUS

This type of book is not necessarily groundbreaking, but it is entertaining and easy to read, exactly what a light novel is supposed to. The MC is not just point-blank and characterless but has her own mind and a nice background story from what I've read so far. That makes also the interaction with the System very delightful to read. Keep it up

LV 10

MillionaireDaoist

One thing I can say about this novel is that it is way too addicting to put down and this is after reading through all of the available chapters. I spent days non stop reading which is very rare for me. The first thing that sets this apart from the typical isekai is the plot and character development. It excels at creating realistic compelling characters that are brimming with personality in an equally compelling complex plot with many things happening in the background. Sensei went from someone I disliked with a vengeance to a pretty likeable character and the change was completely natural and not forced. Another thing is how characters aside form the mc work, they change the plot, move the plot, have genuine personalities outside of the mc. I also love how the mc's actions have consequences and also aren't 100% moral like the typical shounen protagonist. Some decisions she makes will have you questioning right from wrong. The mc also comes across as cold and calculating from the start and I didn't like that at first, but i understand it comes from the pressure of trying to survive and overtime I like how she has started to care. The diction /wording of chapters is very unique and smooth. Not only is the author's vocabulary extensive and intriguing, its never boring and you can feel the thought process that goes into picking each word. If I was to describe the authors mastery and control over their diction, it would be using a different weapon each time when hunting a target and never missing the bullseye. The words really craft the feel of the scene and the characters take off and don't stop going. I wish there was more to read but I have to settle for daily updates.

I picked this up while browsing an I am most definitely glad I checked this out the interactions between Aurelia and her teacher/system are great the story seems really interesting and so do the characters........ just hope we find out what happens/happened to the person who killed everyone at some point.

LV 5

sirduckface

its goooooooooooddd Translation Quality: I can read it just fine. Updating Stability: uh um... hmmm i- 4-5 stars? I cant put 4.5 soo yeah. Its alright its not like everyday but its not that long of a wait ish... Story development: i can see good potential like the snake pits growth, the meeting with the other people who reincarnated into the new world, or just how she is a monster(snake) in a dungeon(?) i forgot some details not the brightest mind here. Also so far so good. Oh and i cant forget that wasp arc thingy... potential ml? Ehhhh?👀 Character Design: uh nice its pretty cool. Its a nice twist that the kids teacher became their system. Also at the beginning, whats up with that dude who killed all the other students like that shii was crazy. It was not truck-kun, no it was a mf crazy stuckup prince syndrome guy who killed bc huh? I dont rmb the details no more but gosh darn does that still ring a bell World background: umm its a world.. a fantasy world mind you soo uh details? Dont rmb them.. i think its pretty structured i think... yeah Anywho overall rate it’ll say 4.4 BUT i personally think its either a 4.4-4.5 ... sooo yup so its a recommended from me eee

Good day. Well, it's past midnight here, so I won't make my review formal as I am extremely sleepy to type. Writing Quality is absolutely great except for the slight punctuation mistakes here and there. One involved a comma, I didn't point out all of them since I didn't want to be nitpicky. When it comes to vocabulary, I like your choice of words. They aren't repetitive, but I would like to suggest that you keep the dialogue tags simple, and not use a thousand alternatives for "said" and "ask." Like what Stephen King said, " I think we all agree that dialogue tags are necessary for readers to know who’s talking. But writers are divided in how we use them: Some, including Raymond Carver, simply use “he said, she said”; others apparently invent a million different synonyms for “said”; still others try to find balance between the two extremes, sometimes even fifty-fifty. Yesterday, yet another writer, Jack Woe, jumped into the fray: I’ve read quite a few blogs about the evilness of dialogue tags. For example, Joe Moore wrote in The Kill Zone how new authors are overusing the alternatives of said. They go to: exclaimed, murmured, screamed, whispered, pleaded, shrieked, demanded, ordered, cried, shouted, and my all-time favorite, muttered. Thing is, I as a reader, don’t care. I just don’t read dialogue tags — at all. He’s not alone. To me, modifying such a perfectly fine tag as “said” is like Pimp My Ride gone bad. (Tip: Read that sentence again in Samuel L. Jackson’s voice.) I suggest you head over to Jack’s blog to read his brief, yet succinct musing over dialogue tags—or as Stephen King puts it in “On Writing”, “dialogue attribution.” A passionate adversary to adverbs, King warns against using adverbs in dialogue attribution, which reduce the effectiveness of the attribution verb: I insist that you use the adverb in dialogue attribution only in the rarest and most special of occasions … and not even then, if you can avoid it. Just to make sure we all know what we’re talking about, examine these three sentences: “Put it down!” she shouted. “Give it back,” he pleaded, “it’s mine.” “Don’t be such a fool, Jekyll,” Utterson said. In these sentences, shouted, pleaded, and said are verbs of dialogue attribution. Now look at these dubious revisions: “Put it down!” she shouted menacingly. “Give it back,” he pleaded abjectly, “it’s mine.” “Don’t be such a fool, Jekyll,” Utterson said contemptuously. The three latter sentences are all weaker than the three former ones, and most readers will see why immediately. […] Some writers try to evade the no-adverb rule by shooting the attribution verb full of steroids. The result is familiar to any reader of pulp fiction or paperback originals:” “Put the gun down, Utterson!” Jekyll grated. “Never stop kissing me!” Shayna gasped. “You damned tease!” Bill jerked out. The best form of dialogue attribution is said, as in he said, she said, Bill said, Monica said. Keep things simple, but! That doesn't mean you'll only stick with said and asked. Just use them more often. Next, I love the way you convey emotions for your characters. They're very well done. Another suggestion is that you get to the point. An example of this is the first three to four chapters I think in which you spent all those four chapters to reveal she died. Also, during these chapters, I only noticed two things that revolved around it. Her unusual liking to kidnaps and something to do with asking herself if she really is dead. Perhaps you could cut off some unnecessary scenes there. Next, character design. Well done! I was able to imagine the looks of the characters in a few paragraphs or so, I don't believe you're a newbie writer. When I started out writing during my high-school times, I could barely think of any synonyms. There wasn't Google back then, so I had to rely on Thesauruses and Dictionaries in which it could only be found within libraries. Sigh, the nearest library from me that time was so far. It's also quite funny that this the countless time in a row of reading a novel that has something to do with death and being alive again. I guess that's the majority of books here. If there are any suggestions I could give, that would be getting used to using em dashes. You're first person POV is also quite great. It's not the boring, "I went here then go here and so on and so forth" type of first person. Well, that's all I can criticize for now. I know this review isn't formal, I'm missing the front matter and the summary, but then again, I've got to return to my sleep. That is all I can say for now. -Dann Giovanni