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Escribe una reseñaawesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!! vawesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!! v awesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!!
You know what, as an author you got very less creativity. Reading this fan-fic feels like i am reading the one-piece manga just from Zeus's point of view. Atleast make him do something different, something new and not just follow luffy and crew just for sightseeing.
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Hmmm the character is very childish and during the first chapters he is an incarnate person how to behave like a stupid child. As if you put that he is embodied only to attract those who like reincarnation and these stories because it appears as an original character growing in the world and not a person so transgenic
I thoughy its going to be ****ty fanfic again since mc following and watching strawhat crew from the dark, oh boy turn out im wrong, its really fun and mc kinda bit troll,cant wait for next update, i recommend it
awesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!! vawesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!! v awesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!!
You know what, as an author you got very less creativity. Reading this fan-fic feels like i am reading the one-piece manga just from Zeus's point of view. Atleast make him do something different, something new and not just follow luffy and crew just for sightseeing.
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Hmmm the character is very childish and during the first chapters he is an incarnate person how to behave like a stupid child. As if you put that he is embodied only to attract those who like reincarnation and these stories because it appears as an original character growing in the world and not a person so transgenic
I thoughy its going to be ****ty fanfic again since mc following and watching strawhat crew from the dark, oh boy turn out im wrong, its really fun and mc kinda bit troll,cant wait for next update, i recommend it