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Illusiory System

Autor: Avi2112

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Capítulo 1: Broken System

In a dark and silent place, suddenly a ball of light is formed.

"Huh! where is this ... "

'why is it so dark, I can't see anything clearly'

just then the body of light realises that he can't move and further more he can't even feel his body.

Then suddenly a cold sensation goes through his mind. Instead of panicking or screaming aloud, the light goes silent feeling incredibly peaceful, a thought suddenly comes to his mind that this was supposed to happen. . . Wondering how he is even feeling anything without his body.

'So am I dead or something? .. is this the place where souls go .. like those isekai novels?'

'huh! dead ? why should I be dead ? I was just ... wait what was I doing ? ... I should be at home ?? college ??? ... what's my name ?'

when the panic kicks in another cold sensation is felt.

'this cold sensation is amazing, so if I start panicking it calms me down ... is it because of this place or is it my innate skill like gamers mind.'

'skill... Gamer ... novels... movies ... technology... science. So I do have memory, but I can't seem to remember anything personal!'

'So let's summarise I am a boy, from what I could feel 22-23 year old and it should be the year 2020. But where was I born ? let's see I know English from what I gather so somewhere in west I guess. and in this kind of situation the first thing to do should be..'

"God ? System ? Status ??"

Nothing happens.

the surrounding is still dark and eerily quiet.

'how am I even seeing anything without eyes? I am quite sure this is my soul, so I should have some kind of soul power.. no??'

the ball of white goes brighter for a moment.

"Aaahhh!!!"

there is almost an invisible wave emmited from the ball and the surrounding turns bright all of a sudden.

'so now light is on I guess ? first everything was black and now white ? nothing else ?? there should be atleast someone out here right, umm... maybe this should be a thought or mind or soul power fuelled thing? like I wished it to be bright and now there is light? so if I concentrate'

"System on!!"

another wave ripple

ding

a blue rectangular box is seen in front of the ball

[ System Initiated ]

it disappears and almost instantly

ding

[ Welcome user ]

"yes, I was right! I have a system"

"so system, where is this place?"

ding

[ Error ]

'Huh? why is there an error? do I have a low authority or something?'

"can I go out? where is my body ? why am I here ? did I die ? why cant I remember what happened ?"

[ Error ]

'I get it... it's a ####ing broken system!!'


REFLEXIONES DE LOS CREADORES
Avi2112 Avi2112

Yo first chapter. The system and the host are not random btw, there is a background story which who knows when I will tell ?

I haven't decided MCs name, so suggestions please.

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