Marvel: Exilir Rise of the Mutant empire

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doom6561

This is a good story the characters are fleshed out the main character has a life goal and is activelY working towards it not only that But the world makes Sense

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LostThe50_50

holy sh*t that was dark......and i love it, kinda ironic since i work at a hospital and we'd never wanna see these kinds of cases in our "house". Doesnt change anything though, just love to imagine myself venting out on mc's like this. Like them doing something i'd never do( because its not me and thats obviously batshit crazy)

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raghavjpr

What do we have here??? A ruthless OP MC with good story and dedication. He has business empire and is determined. He has power, money, mind . So, should I pack it. Perfect I found the gem 💎 I was looking for!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Tyfli_Barda

This story leans far to much on dark and edgy to the point of gratuitous overuse with no real purpose. When the line is blurred and the actions taken to the extreme, it justifies nothing to make the end mean something. He is not Dexter a serial killer with a moral compass to give guidance to his inner monster. he is even far worst than Magneto, a broken Auswitch victim tormented by his past and becomes an ambiguous villain/anti-hero constantly struggling with his guilt and hatred. This protagonist on the other hand is delude psychopathic man child throwing tantrums, making up excuses for his self righteous behavior, he has no real purpose and whatever future he builds will be a worst future yet. And reading this just fuels a masochistic indulgence in violence without any meaning. So good luck with your stories, I will look into other that has actually some value to my daily readings.

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Maurz

Wanted to give this a shot because you don't often see fics about elixir, his ability is dope. Alas I was disappointed. You begin the story with the main character literally torturing someone for amusement. Why would you make the MC so unlikable? I'd imagine you've got a lot of issues writing an MC to be like this.

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azizonk

Ahooyyy!!! What do i find here? hidden gem? Yes...yes...yes..!!! OP MC with good storyflow, but beware for MC is ruthless one. I hope Author will add love interest and little romance story for MC character development. Need diferent POV for his friend, ally, and enemy for detail and story progress, i mean like vampire that MC got, he is part of a covenant right? his job is to provide human and blood for his covenant, so what is his covenant respon to this,? that will be great story to read about scheming, fighting, killing vampire covenant that has goverment support. Anyway thanks for writing this novel!

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HAIZTAM

story not bad ........................................................................................................But you need to seek help, you got issues man.

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Conquestor

It's good you should update more and I want jean or black widow as his wife 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😍😍😍😍😍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Kkzinho

Think about copying Cypher abilities, Omnilingualism ,is just very broken, he could see DNA sequences as a language and completely understood them, advancing is genetic modification techniches by leaps and bounds ,the rest is story ...

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DaoOfGay

It is a good novel. There are some writing errors here and there, but which novel doesn't? The Mc has a solid objective, protect his race, and a clear motive to become stronger. The way he manipulates and is ruthless against people to get what he wants is interesting. I wish there were more chapters, but we can't everything we want. Luv u author.

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Haise99

you should update more frequently dude,,,,, this is awesome,,,, !!!!!!!!!! ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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Angelleevrncc

Crazy, the story is really good I swear!! The best Marvel fanfic I've ever read is here, and the one I like the most doesn't have any romance, but why is it rarely updated? The last time I saw him was 3 months ago, Please don't stop in the middle of an exciting story, author. Fighting!

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trueidiocy_577

One of the only mutant fics that doesnt rely on naivete, postive feelings for the future, non realistic idealisms. Kinda edgy,but understandable I mean cmon look at his username. This could be like the start of like that fanfic with SO MUCH CHARISMA BUT ALMOST NO ACTION( Rise of the saiyan empire).

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Brett_Knox

its a good novel, not my particular cup of tea but I can see the value in it. I dislike how vague it is about his abilities in the very begginig and I didnt want to click his powers up until now sub-chapter as to not be spoiled. besides that the only flaws I can see are the occasional spelling errors and some awkward interaction. keep up the good work though and have a great day ❤️.

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Sudeep_Kiki

Good review.

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Sudeep_Kiki

10/10. The slow build of the chapters right really help is understand the main character and the side characters too. Its hard writing a side character for so long and in the future there will be ven more characters the author will write about so im happy will get to see their growth one by one. insted of 10 or so people at the same time which can be done but it will take many drafts

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GODKINGASH

I also like this novel and can’t wait for more.‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️

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Asagrimnir

The main character has no action for the things he is obsessed with, these obsessions are only created to provide reasons for the actions he takes. He acts callous but actually acts quite childish for someone who has been reincarnated. I think this martha(lover) thing is quite annoying and not worth waiting for.

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DaoistTempest619

good spirit👏👏👏 keep it up...I'm rooting for u