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The MC admits in the first few chapters that he has plot armor and this is shamelessly shown right away. He tells Black Widow that he knows who she is and she simply doesn't care. Not only that, but she also falls for him. No effort is even made to develop characters here, this is simply skipped for the sake of plot and story.
Suffers from a major issue i like to CQS. China Quality Syndrome. Imagine a bad china webnovel. this is it, the horrible dialogue, the two brain cells, the personality of wood, the coolness of fire in mc, the charm of a blob fish. If any of you see the 5* review reader irl, run away. these guys are aliens
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you should put the name of original author or real name of the novel for readers in discription. it would be really helpful for them and me. I hope you reply to this review and tell me the name thank you
I love this version that you authors made it really makes it easy on the eyes. I also love that you add your own twists to it because some of the stuff the original novel does gives a bad taste to my mouth... aka TAKE MY POWER STONES!
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It's a good fanfic,but i hope ,the writer can post more chapter,and thanks man ,i like ur fanfic,well i want that MC Harem are still virgin before have *** with MC ,you know virginity supremacy , because we are asian like that,except some countries like japan maybe
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if you want to read a regular chinese novel this is for you. when I saw I thought I'd like it since it's marvel based Harem fanfic, but the characters lost what made them who they are and became two dimensional cliche characters
Aw man u dropped it I really liked this it was intriguing and everything why u have to drop it 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 whyyyyyyyy.
La historia esta muy buena, aunque las escenas R18 sería bueno un poco más de detalle descriptivo y esperar más caps ya que hay pocos pero la historia sigue siendo buena, quizás un poco de descripción más del aspecto del MC?
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i think this is really good novel, altho we all know most of the world background and story is already written and taken from the movies and tv, the marvel universe has grown to the point that just being able to effectivly jump from one sorce to another and string them into a nice flowing story can already make somthing worthy of a read. the biggest issue would be the system which is compleatly un-needed. the only thing the system has done is throw the Mc into a compleatly different and jaring movie universe for 12 hours that i know nothing about. as a reader is really hits how these fancition type novels relie on you knowing the world background when one chapter is in a world you know and then the next one isnt. it would have been much better to remove the system and just have the mc have the 'abillity absoption' type power and then aquire a dimensional teleport power threw that abillity if the auther really insisted on universe hopping
Essa fanfic é muito boa D+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Thanks for the good work ! 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
It's pretty good, using some imagination instead of just copy/paste canon storylines.******************************************************************
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I like the idea it and how it going. i like some more harem member but we will see where it going. only thing i hope for is the author doesn't dope this book.
/puke. I was considering giving this novel a chance, if it at least tried to adhere to the original characters. In spite of the authors clear desire to act out his Narcissus complex in his SI. But as soon as I read the first paragraph of the next chapter, he dials the ruining of original characters and his Narcissus complex up to 11 - Clearly blinding him to just how shitty his writing is turning. And so I am now convinced he is constantly deleting reviews. Pathetic. Probably one of the top 5 worst novels I've come across on this site. And the quality standard here is not great on average. There are just a few really good ones, and then the rest is etiher mediocre or just outright really bad. And among that shit, this is the bottom of the barrel.
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Basically if you have read a Chinese novel you basically know how this goes...... Nothing special.... sadly................................................
I have to continue the tradition of shameless author's of giving my own novel 5 stars. The MC will visit other movies and TV series world to get stronger and pick up girls.
The MC admits in the first few chapters that he has plot armor and this is shamelessly shown right away. He tells Black Widow that he knows who she is and she simply doesn't care. Not only that, but she also falls for him. No effort is even made to develop characters here, this is simply skipped for the sake of plot and story.
Suffers from a major issue i like to CQS. China Quality Syndrome. Imagine a bad china webnovel. this is it, the horrible dialogue, the two brain cells, the personality of wood, the coolness of fire in mc, the charm of a blob fish. If any of you see the 5* review reader irl, run away. these guys are aliens
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you should put the name of original author or real name of the novel for readers in discription. it would be really helpful for them and me. I hope you reply to this review and tell me the name thank you
I love this version that you authors made it really makes it easy on the eyes. I also love that you add your own twists to it because some of the stuff the original novel does gives a bad taste to my mouth... aka TAKE MY POWER STONES!
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It's a good fanfic,but i hope ,the writer can post more chapter,and thanks man ,i like ur fanfic,well i want that MC Harem are still virgin before have *** with MC ,you know virginity supremacy , because we are asian like that,except some countries like japan maybe
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super good please don't drop.................................................................................................................................
if you want to read a regular chinese novel this is for you. when I saw I thought I'd like it since it's marvel based Harem fanfic, but the characters lost what made them who they are and became two dimensional cliche characters
Aw man u dropped it I really liked this it was intriguing and everything why u have to drop it 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 whyyyyyyyy.
La historia esta muy buena, aunque las escenas R18 sería bueno un poco más de detalle descriptivo y esperar más caps ya que hay pocos pero la historia sigue siendo buena, quizás un poco de descripción más del aspecto del MC?
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i think this is really good novel, altho we all know most of the world background and story is already written and taken from the movies and tv, the marvel universe has grown to the point that just being able to effectivly jump from one sorce to another and string them into a nice flowing story can already make somthing worthy of a read. the biggest issue would be the system which is compleatly un-needed. the only thing the system has done is throw the Mc into a compleatly different and jaring movie universe for 12 hours that i know nothing about. as a reader is really hits how these fancition type novels relie on you knowing the world background when one chapter is in a world you know and then the next one isnt. it would have been much better to remove the system and just have the mc have the 'abillity absoption' type power and then aquire a dimensional teleport power threw that abillity if the auther really insisted on universe hopping
Essa fanfic é muito boa D+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Thanks for the good work ! 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
It's pretty good, using some imagination instead of just copy/paste canon storylines.******************************************************************
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Intresting scenarios with a clever mc, with a super unique power. Actually uses really good suggestions from the comments which improves the story. 10/10
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Revelar spoiler I like the idea it and how it going. i like some more harem member but we will see where it going. only thing i hope for is the author doesn't dope this book.
/puke. I was considering giving this novel a chance, if it at least tried to adhere to the original characters. In spite of the authors clear desire to act out his Narcissus complex in his SI. But as soon as I read the first paragraph of the next chapter, he dials the ruining of original characters and his Narcissus complex up to 11 - Clearly blinding him to just how shitty his writing is turning. And so I am now convinced he is constantly deleting reviews. Pathetic. Probably one of the top 5 worst novels I've come across on this site. And the quality standard here is not great on average. There are just a few really good ones, and then the rest is etiher mediocre or just outright really bad. And among that shit, this is the bottom of the barrel.
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epic 😁😁😁😁😁😜😜😜😜😜😜🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖💪💪💪💪💪💪💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽
Basically if you have read a Chinese novel you basically know how this goes...... Nothing special.... sadly................................................
I have to continue the tradition of shameless author's of giving my own novel 5 stars. The MC will visit other movies and TV series world to get stronger and pick up girls.